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TOPIC: ISSUE112 - "Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."
WORDS: 507
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-7-23 20:24:38

With the rapid development of educational systems, more and more attention is drawn to the emotional education to students in addition to the initial emphasis on the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking. I agree with the opinion that students will benefit more from the all-round educational system including both logical, reasoning thinking and emotion.

To begin with, the ability of managing inside emotions helps people to survive in danger of crisis. A well-developed people needs to be able to manage his emotions when confronting various conditions in the society or nature, so schools should include the emotion exploration in their teaching plans. As a recent survey concerning the relationship between success and emotion control ability shows, those with diverse achievements, though their thinking patterns are different, they have one thing in common-they are expert at maintaining their feelings and emotions. One explanation is that when under the extreme and high-pressure circumstance, only those who adjust their panic and stay calm are capable of coming up with an idea to escape. Li Ning, the chairman of Li Ning Sports, revealed to media about his secret to success-every businessman may suffer crisis, the only key is to keep your mind fresh and calm, and find the way out.

In addition, the ability to recognize and deal with deep feelings properly enables people stay positive and optimistic in daily lives. The psychological counselors are gaining increasing popularity due to people's a variety of troubles about emotions. In fact, most people neglect to explore their emotions and get along with their heart. For example, when blamed by boss unfairly, a common reaction is to become furious and yell at people around him, thus not only detracting his attention, but also arousing his partners' dissatisfaction. However, for a different people who can understand own emotions, he can try to soothe his heart, release his anger peacefully, and turn the experience into a progress.

Finally, when instructing students to explore their emotions, tutors should also keep in mind the scientific method and extent of doing so. Some students are born sensitive, while some are comparatively dull. On one hand, educators need to guide the students who neglect to understand their emotions and feelings to recognize the significance of his heart; on the other educators should also prevent some students becoming excessive sentimental that they only make decisions by emotions while regardless of logical analysis. In short, students should be educated to be equipped with both sense and sensitivity, to be good at maintaining the balance between practicing their reasoning, logical thinking and their emotion management.

To sum up, in the hustle and bustle society, to help students not only become the social pillar but also lead a blessed life, educational systems play a major role in enable students to manage their emotions and mind. Once guided in the school to develop their logical thinking, students will not be confused by the outside problems; once guided in the young age to explore their emotions, students will not be troubles by the inside discomforts.

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TOPIC: ISSUE112 - "Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions."
WORDS: 507
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010-7-23 20:24:38
With the rapid development of educational systems, more and more attention is drawn to the emotional education to students in addition to the initial emphasis on the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking. I agree with the opinion that students will benefit more from the all-round educational system including both logical, reasoning thinking and emotion.
To begin with, the ability of managing inside emotions helps people to survive in danger of crisis. A （emotionally）well-developed people needs to be able to manage his emotions when confronting various conditions in the society or nature, so schools should include the emotion exploration in their teaching plans. As a recent survey concerning the relationship between success and emotion control ability shows, those with diverse achievements, though their thinking patterns are different, they have one thing in common-they are expert at maintaining their feelings and emotions. One explanation is that when under the extreme and high-pressure circumstance, only those who adjust their panic and stay calm are capable of coming up with an idea to escape. Li Ning, the chairman of Li Ning Sports, revealed to media about his secret to success-every businessman may suffer crisis, the only key is to keep your mind fresh and calm, and find the way out.建议把你的第二句放到句首

In addition, the ability to recognize and deal with deep feelings properly enables people stay positive and optimistic in daily lives. The psychological counselors are gaining increasing popularity due to people's a variety of troubles about emotions. In fact, most people neglect to explore their emotions and get along with their heart. For example, when blamed by boss unfairly, a common reaction is to become furious and yell at people around him, thus not only detracting his attention, but also arousing his partners' dissatisfaction. However, for a different people who can understand own emotions, he can try to soothe his heart, release his anger peacefully, and turn the experience into a progress.
Finally, when instructing students to explore their emotions, tutors should also keep in mind the scientific method and extent of doing so. Some students are born sensitive, while some are comparatively dull. On one hand, educators need to guide the students who neglect to understand their emotions and feelings to recognize the significance of his heart; on the other educators should also prevent some students becoming excessive sentimental that they only make decisions by emotions while regardless of logical analysis. In short, students should be educated to be equipped with both sense and sensitivity, to be good at maintaining the balance between practicing their reasoning, logical thinking and their emotion management.
To sum up, in the hustle and bustle society, to help students not only become the social pillar but also lead a blessed life, educational systems play a major role in enable students to manage their emotions and mind. Once guided in the school to develop their logical thinking, students will not be confused by the outside problems; once guided in the young age to explore their emotions, students will not be troubles（troubled） by the inside discomforts.
整体结构很好，思路也很清晰，只是在每一段论证的时候你应该可以想的更加深入的。