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Do you agree or disagree with the satement ?sports teach people lessons about life
Form my point of view ,I agree with the satement that sports teach people lessons about life . by taking part into sports activities we could not only cultivate a strong belief but also learn how to make friends and even be much smarter.
First and formost ,the process of taking a kind of sport is a process of insisting and bearing the hardships if we try to do well in it. Time and effort are needed to spare into it .on this case ,it is somewhat easy to give up .the famous athlete Lance Armstrong is my favorite ones .In the year of 1996 ,he was diagnosed with testicular cancer ,which would kill him easily .What surprise us is that ,he did not give his favoriat activity .aftering a long term of treatment ,he overcome the disease and, what is more ,he come back to the field again .He went on to win the Tour de France each year from 1999 to 2005,and he is the only person to win seven times. His spirit of fighting for the disease and insisting on his dream for sports inspired many people in our dailylife .We should stick on that wisdom that “life is full of challenge ,the one can success is the one can insist on his dream”.
Secondly ,nearly all kinds of sports is taken by more than two people ,for instance,basketball and football are taken by eleven and five respectively . So taking part into sports activities teach us lessons on how to deal with different kinds of people and what we should do to make a team work efficiently. Sports needs cooperation ,and even competition .In a baskeball team ,we get to know our teammates and we try to do well in each game . We pass the ball to our teammates and after a series of close our team win the game。Another aspect is that ,during the process ,we could see “competition” much more clearly than in dailylife. Each game is a compeition ,as a qualified sportman ,we should hold on the opinion that fairly competion is better for all of us . and we should keep in mind
the old saying, “we must accept finite disappintment , but we must never lose infinite hope” . that maybe put into use in all aspects of our life .
Based on the statement above ,sports means significant part in our life .we should not only treat it as a way to improve our body ,what’s more ,we need to think more about the relationship between sports and our life and gain what it offers us .

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Do you agree or disagree with the satement ?sports teach people lessons about life Form my point of view ,I agree with the satement that sports teach people lessons about life . by taking part into sports activities we could not only cultivate a strong belief but also learn how to make friends and even be much smarter.6 }. t3 ^: O4 ~( o: K First and formost ,the process of taking a kind of sport is a process of insisting and bearing the hardships if we try to do well in it. Time and effort are needed to spare into it .On (In)this case ,it is somewhat easy to give up .the famous athlete Lance Armstrong is my favorite ones(one) .In the year of 1996 ,he was diagnosed with testicular cancer ,which would kill him easily .What surprise us is that ,he did not give his favoriat activity .aftering a long term of treatment ,he overcome the disease and,(去掉） what is more ,he come back to the field again .He went on to win the Tour de France each year from 1999 to 2005,and he is the only person to win seven times. His spirit of fighting for the disease and insisting on his dream for sports inspired many people in our dailylife .We should stick on that wisdom that “life is full of challenge ,the one can success is the one who can insist on his dream”. Secondly ,nearly all kinds of sports is（are） taken by more than two people ,for instance,basketball and football are taken by eleven and five respectively . So taking part into sports activities teach（teaches） us lessons on how to deal with different kinds of people and what we should do is to make a team work efficiently. Sports needs cooperation ,and even competition .In a baskeball team ,we get to know our teammates and we try to do well in each game . We pass the ball to our teammates and after a series of close our team win the game。Another aspect is that ,during the process ,we could see “competition” much more clearly than in dailylife. Each game is a compeition ,as a qualified sportman（as qualified sportmen) ,we should hold on the opinion that fairly competion is better for all of us . and we should keep in mind 6 X! H. `! m; o; Q  q$ h3 M5 U the old saying, “we must accept finite disappintment , but we must never lose infinite hope” . that maybe put into use in all aspects of our life .+ t$ ?9 ^9 ?1 u1 \. e Based on the statement above ,sports means significant part in our life .we should not only treat it as a way to improve our body ,what’s more ,we need to think more about the relationship between sports and our life and gain what it offers us .6 Y; G, b 呵呵，我是路过的，帮我看看我的文章？谢谢！！