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8.19 作文 play sports give you  more lessons about the life

There are varieties of sports all over the world. Most of countries have their favorite sports themselves. For adults or children, sports are very popular and entertaining. What is more important is that sports can practice and develop some skills and abilities, such as how to socialize, how to be a good team player ,how to face the success and failure ,and about life.
Firstly, no matter who you are, it’s sure that you may win and lose. So sports can teach us the value of wining and loosing gracefully. In sports game, it is obviously not wise to throw turtram or say
some bad words when one lose the game. Likewise if one wins and gloats excessively by contrast, it is equally seemed fool. So we have yo facing the results of the game calmly. In this way, I believe that we can get more mature and can control our outward emotions.
Secondly, sports are not only played among the competitors. We also can play many sports with our friends and family. It is really a fantastic way to develop the relationships. For instance, some people have few same topics with their family members because of the diversity of age. However, they can try to communicate and cooperate with others in simple activities like pick-up baseball game and find out same interests and topics. Sometimes through a sport game, people can get a better understanding of friendship and kinship.
Lastly, most sports teach a person how to socialize well with others and how to work as a team. In our generation, socialization abilities are extremely significant for us. For example people learn how to control themselves and to tolerate their frustrations around others. When they get along with other people. Also, they can learn how to be a good team player. Almost all sports games are played with good cooperation. Basketball games need player understand their own roles and help teammates largely. I am greatly convinced that the main spirit of sport is cooperation and respect. As we know, respecting others is a social skill that we all must learn if we are to succeed in life.
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that sports teach us so much about life. To sum up they teach us how to work in the society. People need help of others. Besides, sports also teach us how to find out the joy of life, and live more enjoy.

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8.19 作文 play sports give you  more lessons about the life
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There are varieties of sports all over the world. Most of countries have their favorite sports themselves. For adults or children, sports are very popular and entertaining. What is more important is that sports can practice and develop some skills and abilities, such as how to socialize, how to be a good team player ,how to face the success and failure ,and about life.
      Firstly, no matter who you are, it’s sure that you may win and lose. So sports can teach us the value of wining and loosing gracefully. In sports game, it is obviously not wise to throw turtram or saysome bad words when one lose the game. Likewise if one wins and gloats excessively by contrast, it is equally seemed fool. So we have yo facing the results of the game calmly. In this way, I believe that we can get more mature and can control our outward emotions.
        Secondly, sports are not only played among the competitors. We also can play many sports with our friends and family. It is really a fantastic way to develop the relationships. For instance, some people have few same topics with their family members because of the diversity of age. However, they can try to communicate and cooperate with others in simple activities like pick-up baseball game and find out same interests and topics. Sometimes through a sport game, people can get a better understanding of friendship and kinship.
           Lastly, most sports teach a person how to socialize well with others and how to work as a team. In our generation, socialization abilities are extremely significant for us. For example people learn how to control themselves and to tolerate their frustrations around others. When they get along with other people. Also, they can learn how to be a good team player. Almost all sports games are played with good cooperation. Basketball games need player understand their own roles and help teammates largely. I am greatly convinced that the main spirit of sport is cooperation and respect. As we know, respecting others is a social skill that we all must learn if we are to succeed in life.
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that sports teach us so much about life. To sum up they teach us how to work in the society. People need help of others. Besides, sports also teach us how to find out the joy of life, and live more enjoy.

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改稿在附件里，也谢谢你的修改

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已修改

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3# giser
感谢了 因为我刚刚开始写 水平有限哈 也不能给你提什么意见  不过加油哈

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4# Julianlod
谢谢了 我刚刚开始写 因为水平有限 也正在摸索中  这次不好意思了 没有能给你批改  不好意思哈  不过加油

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Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits
In past several decades years, the amount of advertising in our daily life increase in a dramatic speed. Advertising changes our life by being part of it. If you notice carefully, you can find them everywhere. I tend to agree with the opinion that advertising is important cause of unhealthy eating habits , advertiser may use types of ways to show the food. It’s really a shortcut for us to know about the it. However, there are many negative effects of advertising, they may lead to plentiful unhealthy eating habits if us.
First of all, kinds of delicious food like snacks, drinks and convenience food in the markets. After giving publicity to the public, the producers may get more competitive while selling the food. Advertising fill our environment and our consciousness. Everyone knows that most of people to buy so many snacks and fast food tempt people eat more and more. Thus, this is the reason why people may get fat , become diabetes and so on when they can’t help eating plenty of sugars.
   The second negative cause of advertising is that many customers great convinced that famous stars are authoritative. So advertising prefer to invite some super stars to work in the Ads. It tempt customers to buy their products. For example I still remember a chocolate ad, it showed that a beautiful girl met a handsome boy by accident in the train. All the music and images are pretty romantic. Both the boy and girl are famous dramers. It’s really a huge lure, especially for females. So this ad draw us in and make us believe that the true love will happen to us if we have the chocolate. As the matter of fact, chocolate just make us fatter and fatter.
     Lastly, many advertisers make varieties of working and descriptions to draw the customers in, even added many beautiful pictures and real examples. Take mashed potato , a kind of snack for example, it gives us a copy of instruction book to know more about it. There are so many functions of it, such as losing weight and improving looks. Even though potato can do it, not the mashed potato with lots of antiseptics and desiccant, which can take some negative effect to our health.
       In conclusion, I poist that main goal of advertising is to convince us to buy things that we do not need. For this reason, advertisements cause us to buy a lot of extra snacks, fast food and so on. It changes our eating habits by being part it. In a word, according to previous point of view . advertising is really the most important cause of healthy eating habits.
  
我觉得写得好多毛病哦  不好意思我