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Nowadays, more and more people are suffering from the consequence brought by their unhealthy eating habits. It is common to see some people eating and watching TV at the same time, many little fat children eating junk food every day, and office workers eating take-out instead of stopping their work. Many people blame that the advertising cause them having the unhealthy eating habits. However, it is not only because of advertising but also many other factors make people have such bad eating habits.
Firstly, with the increasing life pace, people have no time to enjoy their meals. When I was young, my parents and I could enjoy our every meal every day together. After my father became the manager of a company. It became a luxury to have a great feast for our whole family together. Fierce competition and strong desire for promotion drive people from the executives to office clerks to work hard all the time.
Almost nobody has time to stop to enjoy a real healthy meal at a slow speed.
Secondly, the thriving fast-food industry is also an important contributor to forming people’s unhealthy eating habits. The basic economics theory tells us that there is demand, there is supply. With the fast food restaurants opened in china, such as, McDonald’s and KFC, there are a great deal people to choose these quicker and faster foods instead of traditional Chinese foods. In most cases, once the consumers try this kind of fast food, they will be addicted to them. Because they do not want to spend more time on preparing food even though the fast food is unhealthy.
In conclusion, I admit that advertising indeed lead us to forming unhealthy eating habits in a relatively degree. But it is not the main factor. We can not neglect the functions of the increasing life pace and blooming fast food industry in the formation of people’s unhealthy eating habits.

javenUID: 2108322

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Nowadays, more and more people are suffering from the consequence brought by their unhealthy eating habits. It is common to see some people eating and watching TV at the same time, many little fat children eating junk food every day, and office workers eating take-out instead of stopping their work. (有点歧义,用食用外带食物替代停止工作？)Many people blame(注意blame 用法:blame sb for sth /blame sth on sb /be to blamed for，cause后直接加宾语或双宾或动词不定式，为cause to do)that the advertising cause them having the unhealthy eating habits. However, it is not only because of advertising but also many other factors make people have such bad eating habits.
Firstly, with the increasing life pace, people have no time to enjoy their meals. When I was young, my parents and I could enjoy our every meal every day together. After my father became the manager of a company. It became a luxury to have a great feast for our whole family together. Fierce competition and strong desire for promotion drive people from the executives to office clerks to work hard all the time.
Almost nobody has time to stop to enjoy a real healthy meal at a slow speed.
Secondly, the thriving fast-food industry is also an important contributor to forming people’s unhealthy eating habits. The basic economics theory tells us that there is demand, there is supply. With the fast food restaurants opened in china, such as, McDonald’s and KFC, there are a great deal people to choose these quicker and faster foods instead of traditional Chinese foods.(用with an increasing number of the fast food restaurants opened in china 好一些) In most cases, once the consumers try this kind of fast food, they will be addicted to them. Because they do not want to spend more time on preparing food even though the fast food is unhealthy.
In conclusion, I admit that advertising indeed lead us to forming unhealthy eating habits in a relatively degree. But it is not the main factor. We can not neglect the functions of the increasing life pace and blooming fast food industry in the formation of people’s unhealthy eating habits.
感觉话题展开论述不够，题目是Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.文章过多的写了快餐对人们饮食习惯及生活的影响，而没有将中心落在广告与饮食习惯的关系。加油咯～如有不当，请多包涵
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