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第一次写，存在很多的问题吧。。求重口味的批，越呛越好！！！O(∩_∩)O谢谢

In the busy and crowded world today, weshould not expect people to be polite to each other# H5 A4j$ Z  v7 D


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The scenery of people walking through the foot-thickcrowded, complaining about the busy life and expressing a sort ofdisheartenment is ubiquitous to see everywhere in this modern society. Admittedly,the above can easily bother our frame of mind and to make things worse,threaten our interpersonal relationship. However, no matter how busy and crowdedthis world will be, to some degree, there is no need for us to worry about thepossibility of the effacement of politeness.


Politeness has already become a part of our humanbeings’ ideology passed on one generation to another and soon forms into aninner spontaneous instinct of our humans. From proverbial sayings to greatbooks to seemingly trivial tales, we are inculcated and taught in everypossible way to be polite to others since born. Apart from this, the most prominent feature of mankind, among other species,is politeness. Or put it in another way, it is the society itself tells us thatirritable and tetchy feelings can do no good both to ourselves and the whole world.Being polite in our daily life seems to be an advisable way leading to makethings go easier, particularly in this busy world. Thus, wherever and wheneverwe are, politeness is necessary. As a result,it is harder than we think it is going to decay.


But sometimes undue politeness could be acondescending behavior or a plausible one which is exactly the modern societytriggered. Compared with the politeness comes from the bottom of one’s heart,the reluctant one might fraught with bad-aims. The thing that first comes tomind when most people think about politeness is respect which works as the rootof politeness.That is, the existing politeness might contain somehypocrite thing which is not happy to see in this society. But the fact is the quintessentialof the politeness has already changed. Many know it pays to be polite, but whatthey ignored is that what if the respect is not their intention rather asurface work. This is the big problem the society concealed about politeness.



To sum up, it is for sure the politeness will lastfor long and people will be polite to each other, but the question is weather peoplecan be real polite to each other. Anyway, in this busy and complex world, whatwe should expect for is the original politeness.

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恩恩~我会的！谢谢~

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Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Being creative, rather than planning carefully, will come up withbest solution to a problem?11.30






The modern society nowadays is becomingmore and more advanced in a startling speed and this is mainly due to theinnovation human beings created by themselves. This kind of capability calledcreative, with which one can easily solve a problem remained for years. So, itis safe to say without creative we might still in the wild age. Yet, in a moredialectic way, it is not enough only with creative to get this world running,


In my view, being creative and planningcarefully are both important. Actually, these two actions play a disparate andindispensable role when we solve a problem. One who is creative can solve aproblem in a more quickly and fantastic way, yet without planning carefully onemight make some silly mistakes which may mislead him that his creative way didnot work. Anyway, it is better for us to do something for a rainy day;apparently, planning carefully can go some way with solving a problem. Measuringwith our own experiences can give us a clear-cut fact of the above rather thanthe statistics. Take ourselves as example, when we beset by a difficult math problem,planning carefully can help us to get a clear picture and know this question ina better way. This fact can explain what we might have figured out already thatin one class the best is not the one abounded with creative ideas but the one whois careful. Especially, when we get into college, the phenomenon mentionedabove becomes more ubiquitous and from which it is easy to conclude that onlyhaving a carefully heart can one get a high mark in the exam. Apart from this,an experiment without plan is fraught with dangerous, a composition without outlinecan not tell the writer’s idea. Thus, it is conceivable that being carefully andplanning carefully before we solve a problem really works and may help us alot.


However, being creative, particularly inthis modern society, is needed as well. We are a generation brought up with theidea that the innovative spirit is at the core of the world. As we can see, peopleput more emphasis on cultivating one’s capability of creative. And this sort ofspirit, through which we can open our mind and then solve a problem in asmarter way, is favored in every realm. Namely, being carefully is not enough, onlya creative work can lead us to success. Breaking the conventional thoughts andmaking our own traits with creative is not merely give us a new solution butalso let us forge ahead to make a prominent achievement.


To sum up, planning carefully and beingcreated is correlated. Planning carefully is the first step and only based onit can one give a fully creative play in solving a problem and it is safe tocome to an end that the best solution of a problem will come out when the twosteps are carried out.

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上面我写的太匆忙了...有好多都连在一起了，可是还是超时了，悲剧，悲剧

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Is it easier to be successful in the pastthan it is today
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To be successful, to this day, is still evertone's dream and ambition, and this phenomenon never changes with the time passing. Compared with other eras, seemingly the contemporaries have to develop all aspects and sometimes, even though, the success still away from them. but on second thought, given the opportunities society provide us due to its fast growing, to some extent, the success is within our reach. namely, it is easier for us to be successful today than it is in the past.

First, withthe advanced technology and booming economy’s help, we have more chances toattain and realize our goals. For instance, thanks to the internet, a good workcan always spread at a very fast speed and soon known by people all over theworld, making the writer who wrote this might be famous overnight and leadinghim to success. On the contrary, there are countless people should have beensuccessful for their works, but as result of both the backward technology and thelimitation of the right to speak the ruling class made, scarcely had peopleachieved great success.


There isanother factor, meanwhile, which had enormously contributed for us to getsuccess more handily. That is the change of the way we think of success. Success,nowadays, in our view is a thing more than fame or money; it is indeed rather asort of self-fulfillment. Take Liu xiaobo, the recent Nobel laureate who isalso a prisoner kept by the Chinese government, as an example,
the glory he got is not merely credited to hispersistence for his ambition, but also the conception people take, success isnot measured by the fame he got or the money he earned, leading him to success.That is to say, people nowadays get a clear-cut meaning of the success than thatpeople got in the past time. Seizing the definition of the success, we learntthat quintessential of one’s success is for one to realize his self- actualization.


In conclusion,though fiercely the competition it seems today than it was in the past, thesituation is still fair to everyone, what depends is ourselves. Since thesociety provides us so many opportunities, it is safe to conclude that the probabilityfor us to achieve success becoming much more considerable than before..