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Do you agree with the following statement? Some people think to watch a movie in a cinema is better, but others think at home is better.

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Do you agree with the following statement? Some people think to watch a movie in a cinema is better, but others think at home is better.

2011年2月11日12：12
When it comes to the issue of movie, it is always a hot topic. But people as varying personalities tend to see the same thing from diversified perspectives. Some people hold that watching a movie in a cinema feel better than at home, while others hold the opposite view. To large extent, I reckon on the former opinion. （reckon on是依赖什么的吧……）

Firstly, a cinema has a big screen which makes the image clearer to see. And the audio device is better, too. Therefore, when we watch the movie, we will be more concentrate on the story. At home, the screen is small and sometime we can hardly see some details. To see clear, we can not be very relax to enjoy the movie. Also, the environment is not as quiet as the cinema.（整段结构感觉有点散）

Secondly, at home, it is not convenient to ask somebody for an appointment. But in the cinema, it is a good place. We can not only enjoy the movie, especially, to the new couples, but also enjoy the peaceful and relax feeling. At home, we also have to clear the room after watching movie which, in the cinema, the waiter will do.（尝试用用长句吧）

Finally, I have to concede to the opposite point. For one thin, watching movies at home can save money. However, considering some other benefits which it can not be replaced, I suppose that, to have a good time to relax, the spending in the cinema is well worth.（有点单薄，再扯点废话，加油～）

To sum up, I believe watching film in a cinema is more interesting and wise. Frankly speaking, the feeling in a cinema is the best one in my leisure time.

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