0302 Daily Writing

xielijuan36UID: 2995990

  As far as I concerned,I don't agree with the idea that a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.The two aspects of chooseing a job both have some merits.I will choose a job depending on which the situation I am in.
  If I choose the job with more vacation time but a low salary,I would be in the following situations.First,the low salary is enough for me to make a living and I like this job.Second,the job can make me happy and feel valued.I can achieve my greatest potential on it.Finally,I have some kinds of insurance such as health and medical insurance,so I don't need to worry about the money for the life after retirement when I
am old.Also,I need the vacation to care for my children or parents.Even I have a plan to learn something I like in the vacation time.
  If I choose the job with a high salary but less vacation time,the situation may be this: I like the high quality of life,so I need more money to buy beautiful clothes,a better house
or for entertainment,and no one can help me to reach that goal I have to afford by myself.In addition,I like the job very much,and I enjoy the time when I am working.So less vacation does not matter with me.Also,there is another situation which I need much money in a short time,so I have to get a job with high salary.  
  However,in the present situation,I will choose the job with a high salary but less vacation .To begin with,I like working,I think the job make sense to me.In addition, I am able to relax myself in a short time.What's more,I need money to pay high rents and pay money back to my parents.So I need a high salary job to pay for that.

In a word,I think there are different job choices in different situations.

ncnysUID: 2347325

As far as I am concerned,I don't agree with the idea that a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.The two aspects of chooseing a job both have some merits(There are merits in either option?).I will choose a job depending on which the situation I am in.

If I choose the job with more vacation time but a low salary,I would be in the following situations (what situation? it could be indicated in detail in the topic sentence).First,the low salary is enough for me to make a living and I like this job.Second,the job can make me happy and feel valued.I can achieve my greatest potential on it.Finally,I have some kinds of insurance such as health and medical insurance,so I don't need to worry about the money for the life after retirement when I am old.Also,I need the vacation to care for my children or parents.Even I have a plan to learn something I like in the vacation time.But where is the comparison?

If I choose the job with a high salary but less vacation time,the situation may be this: I like the high quality of life,so I need more money to buy beautiful clothes,a better house or for entertainment,and no one can help me to reach that goal I have to afford by myself.In addition,I like the job very much,and I enjoy the time when I am working.So less vacation does not matter with me.Also,there is another situation which I need much money in a short time,so I have to get a job with high salary.  

However,in the present situation,I will choose the job with a high salary but less vacation .To begin with,I like working,I think the job make sense to me.In addition, I am able to relax myself in a short time.What's more,I need money to pay high rents and pay money back to my parents.So I need a high salary job to pay for that.

In a word,I think there are different job choices in different situations.
这篇的topic是问两种工作哪种比较好，分析题目的话，关键点在一个better上，要分析到底谁比谁好，就需要随时compare这两种工作．所以在两个分论点上，最好都有对两种工作的比较．你如果想要表达需要分情况讨论的话，最好分几种情况，对每种情况，哪个工作比较好，为什么．这样就达到了比较的目的了哈．加油！