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搬到新城市不好 因为会失去老朋友：
Everyone has a sense of security getting touch with the familiar things and people,
when it comes to whether we remove to another town the opinions of different people are divergent on this complex and controversial issue. Some people advocate that it is not favorable as the friendship with close companion may break up. Nevertheless, As for me, I hold the opposite perspective .

In the first place, under no circumstances ,should we have worried about out of contact with distant friends. With the advance of Internet and communication, we can receive the latest news and gossip at anytime and anywhere from others even we are absence of the live show.
I can call
no better illustration to mind than the example of myself. My intimate companion Sarah has studied aboard in Australia for 2 years. Having a video call every week is a routine for us . Instead of estranging we feel full of sincere carefulness and deeply miss. Till now, she is still my best and most cherished friend. This case demonstrates that distance can not become a fatal factor to a profound friendship.
On top of that, a fresh situation and environment provides us increasingly opportunities to make the acquaintance of new classmates, and colleagues who may be our trustful partners in the future. A survey demonstrates that 62.4% people get accustomed to the new district and make diverse friends in 3 just months .Compared with the place we know well, metropolis enlarges our social circle, broadens our outlook and cultivate our taste.

Admittedly, even though we lose some acquaintances, leaving for a different urban place can not be accused. An old saying goes that “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. Facing varied difficulties and challenges in a strange city, the support from old friends is crucial and necessary. By the chance, we can divide true friendship from the fake one.

To recapitulate，from the analysis above, we can clearly draw the conclusion that departing from a familiar place is valid Even though we may take some losses
its shortages far outweigh its benefits.



Some people believe that people should follow their ambitious dreams and goals even they are not realistic and others believe that people should focus on achieving realistic goals.


There is always a gap between the ideal and the reality.
How do we keep balance and realize our value? The opinions of different people are divergent on this controversial and complex issue. Some people advocate that we should pursue the long-range ambition. Nevertheless, I hold the perspective that meeting every achievable target takes an essential place.

First of all, with realistic aims coming true, we become increasingly confident and full of fighting will. Compare to those colorful, fantastic and even unrealistic dreams, an ordinary and common purpose is accessible for us. If we insist on the difficulties initially, the consequence may be a failure
owing to lack of experience, ability and fund. In a word, A person, who neglect the importance of each tiny goal , may pay a heavy price.

On top of that, seldom do a family, a school, a country cultivate a talent. earthy achievement also make its own contribution and value. I can call
no better illustration to mind than the example of
my mother. She thirsted for being an actress when she was at age around twenty. As time goes by, she gradually is aware of that her work as a wife , a mum and a
surveyor is estimable and significant as well as an actress. To be a favorable and competent wife and mother is her achievable goal, just as her wish, we can not imagine the life with her absence.

Last but not least, running after short-term aim does not mean that we give up our dreams. It is never too late to fulfill an ambition. A real dream is lifetime, in my heart from beginning to end .When I meet my purposes one after another until all conditions permit, I could touch the goal eventually.

To recapitulate，from the analysis above, we can clearly draw the conclusion that keeping on realizable aims is justified.
Even though it looks shortsighted ,
its benefits far outweigh its shortages.

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