issue4 泡面队15号作业

bishao422UID: 204362

简直就是写不出来 郁闷死了 怎么熬阿~~HELP~!!

4."No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."

No field of study is isolated and has no relationship with other fields. I wholly agree with that every field of study advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study, which makes our sciences and technology have great advancements. I will clarify my stand as follows.

First, learning and using enough the knowledge and experience from other field of study can save a lot of time for us when we do our research. For instance, if there were no computer, our mathematicians would still use their pen to count a expressions for a long time, which the computer can compute in one minute. So the field of mathematic increase the efficiency obviously after they use the computer that is produced by the outsiders. In the same way, computer can be also used by nearly all the scientific areas for counting quickly or getting more information from Internet.

Second, when we touch the other fields' knowledge and experience, they can bring us a lot of new idea. The authors who write the scientific fiction often get a new inspiration from the information of the newest science and technology, and to some extent one of the reason why the scientist thought to invent the robots is that they got some assumption from scientific fictions. Moreover a lot of new scientific fields often emerge in the interaction among different disciplines, such as the biochemistry, medical-chemistry, and so on. For an example, when the chemist researched the molecular movement, they introduce the physical law of movement into their study and then this project was developed to a new subject that named physical chemistry.

To sum up, all the fields of study should share the knowledge and experience of themselves with each other and be open-minded to learn other's knowledge and experience, and then make use of this knowledge to improve our own field of study.

硬柿子UID: 204138

4."No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."

No field of study is isolated and has no relationship with other fields. I wholly agree with that every field of study advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study, which makes our sciences and technology have great advancements. I will clarify my stand as follows.

First, learning and using enough the去掉 knowledge and experience from other fields of study can save a lot of time for us when we do our research. For instance, if there were no computer, our mathematicians would still use their pens to count an expressions for a long time, which the computer can(compute)今才知道compute 还有计算的意思,呵呵 in one minute. So the field of mathematic increase the efficiency obviously after they use the computer that is (produced) 用brought 点题一下是不是好些? by the outsiders. In the same way, computer can be also used by nearly all the scientific areas for counting quickly or getting more information from Internet.
B1, outsider 带来的知识和经验可以为本领域节省很多的努力~~~

Second, when we touch the other fields' knowledge and experience, they can bring us a lot of new ideas. The authors who write the scientific fiction often get a new inspiration from the information of the newest science and technology, and to some extent one of the reasons why the scientists ( thought) have intention  to invent the robots is that they got some assumption要说灵感吗？inspiration from scientific fictions. Moreover a lot of new scientific fields often emerge in the interaction among different disciplines, such as the biochemistry, medical-chemistry, and so on. For an example, when the chemist researched the molecular movement, they introduce the physical law of movement into their study and then this project was developed to a new subject that named physical chemistry.
B2, outsider可以带来灵感~~~
两段的论述，稍有点单薄~~~
我觉得有必要再加入一段让步说明，在本领域的积累也是很重要的，因为outsider 会带来突破是建立在本学科的厚实的理论基础之上的~~~
To sum up, all the fields of study should share the knowledge and experience of themselves with each other and be open-minded to learn other's knowledge and experience, and then make use of this knowledge to improve our own field of study.
例子可以再适当展开下，那么你的issue 就能过关了~~~+U

real_vcUID: 195631

简直就是写不出来 郁闷死了 怎么熬阿~~HELP~!!

4."No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."

No field of study is isolated and has no relationship with other fields. I wholly agree with that every field of study advance significantly when outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study, which makes our sciences and technology have great advancements. I will clarify my stand as follows.

First, learning and using enough the knowledge and experience from other field of study can save a lot of time for us when we do our research. For instance, if there were no computer, our mathematicians would still use their pen to count a expressions for a long time, which the computer can compute in one minute. So the field of mathematic increase the efficiency obviously after they use the computer that is produced by the outsiders. In the same way, computer can be also used by nearly all the scientific areas for counting quickly or getting more information from Internet.

Second, when we touch the other fields' knowledge and experience, they can bring us a lot of new idea. The authors who write the scientific fiction often get a new inspiration from the information of the newest science and technology, and to some extent one of the reason why the scientist thought to invent the robots is that they got some assumption from scientific fictions. Moreover a lot of new scientific fields often emerge in the interaction among different disciplines, such as the biochemistry, medical-chemistry, and so on. For an example, when the chemist researched the molecular movement, they introduce the physical law of movement into their study and then this project was developed to a new subject that named physical chemistry.

To sum up, all the fields of study should share the knowledge and experience of themselves with each other and be open-minded to learn other's knowledge and experience, and then make use of this knowledge to improve our own field of study.

似乎太简短了，应该说b2还能凑或，但是觉得b2里面你写了2个ts，b1说服力不强，感觉就是一个例子，不够充实，写不出就多想想，看看范文，写得多不如想得多