issue136 寄托4人组 17日作业

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Issue136 The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
1选择是一个人的需要和现实结合的过程
当人的需要或意愿难以和现实结合（长生不老）他可能就没有选择
如果和现实结合的很好 就有很多的选择
2如果人在一开始就考虑到现实因素的话，他可能就很少陷入没有选择的处境。
Daily observations tell us that our life is actually made up of countless choices, from trifle things such as what to wear, to important decisions like what kind of careers to follow. Many argue that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very rare, since even the refusal to choose is a choice. But is the issue as simple? In my viewpoint, however, the occurrence of absent choice relies heavily on the relationship between people's psychology and material reality.

Behind every choice of human beings there lies people's needs or desires for something they do not have. Girls choose to wear the clothes that best impress others, thus win them love from males and jealousy from those of the same sex. Business people usually compare different companies to decide which one would bring them maximum profit with relatively bearable risks. In short, whenever time people are forced, or out of their own will, to make an option, they have presumed that their choices will to some extent achieve particular goal set forward. To the contrary, however, a "choice" without aim is not choice in nature, but to pick up something unconsciously.

Given that preliminary to almost all choices it is the human needs and desires, there comes the absence and availability of choice. When we talk about the absence of choice, generally the initial aim of people is constrained by the external material (scientific? physical?) conditions. A typical example is life or death issues. No matter how much effort people of all times have paid to maintain healthy or vigorous, all would inevitably reach the end of life some day. Death spares no one. While yearning for somehow impractical longevity forever last, we human beings confront with lack of choice due to our biological constraint. Similar is the case when one wishes to fly, to dominate the world, or to decide birth. In short, when our goals set for options are imposed restraint by reality, choice is absent here.

But does the absence of choice occur frequently? It depends. For those who take external conditions into account of their goals beforehand, lack of choice may seldom occur. Whereas those mindlessly blind to environmental factors probably find themselves in a mire of no choice more often. Still take business investors as an illustration. Though both are motivated by profit, one group of people may perform a full market analysis and spread the risk to more than one investment. So, they are less likely to declare bankruptcy, absent of choice here, than another who ignore the risk-taking nature of business. Since people differ considerably from one another, owning to experience or inborn features, on their perception and sensibility to external factors, their possibility involving in circumstances of no choice differs.

In conclusion, it is too early to assert that the absence of choice is a circumstance seldom happens. Granted that availability of choice depends on people's needs and the situation, for penetrating minds the unpleasing situation deprived of choice may be rare, but for others, it not.

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issue136 寄托4人组 17日作业

Issue136 The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare.
1选择是一个人的需要和现实结合的过程
当人的需要或意愿难以和现实结合（长生不老）他可能就没有选择
如果和现实结合的很好 就有很多的选择
2如果人在一开始就考虑到现实因素的话，他可能就很少陷入没有选择的处境。

Daily observations tell us that our life is actually made up of countless choices, from trifle (词性错误 trivial?) things such as what to wear, to important decisions like what kind of careers to follow (pursue?). Many argue that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very rare, since even the删? refusal to choose is a choice. But is the issue as? simple? In my viewpoint, however, the occurrence of absent choice relies heavily on the relationship between people's psychology (mentality/spirit?) and material reality.

Behind every choice of human beings there lies people's needs or desires for something they do not have (MS有点口水). Girls choose to wear the clothes that best impress others, thus win them love from males and jealousy from those of the same sex (females?). Business people (Investors?) usually compare different companies to decide which one would bring them maximum profits? with relatively bearable risks. In short, whenever time (删?) people are forced, or out of their own will (没懂-请教!), to make an option, they have presumed (用现在时也可以吧?) that their choices will to some extent achieve particular goal set forward. To the contrary, however, a "choice" without aim is not choice in nature, but to pick up something unconsciously.
(B1你基本在说choice具有目的性)

Given that preliminary (premise?) to almost all choices it is the human needs and desires, there comes the absence and availability of choice. When we talk about the absence of choice, generally the initial aim of people is constrained by the external material (scientific? physical?) conditions (直接reality？). A typical example is life or death issues (the issue of to be or not to be). No matter how much effort people of all times have paid (made?) to maintain (remain?) healthy or vigorous, all would inevitably reach the end of life some day. Death spares no one. While yearning for somehow impractical longevity forever last (纯请教!), we human beings confront with lack of choice due to our biological constraint. Similar is the case when one wishes to fly, to dominate the world (这个好像跟biological constraint不搭边。), or to decide birth. In short (避免重复，用in a word?), when our goals set for options are imposed restraint (restrained? Impose跟on 连用) by reality, choice is absent here (删?).

But does the absence of choice occur frequently? It depends. (纯请教!) For those who take external conditions into account of their goals beforehand, lack of choice may seldom occur. Whereas those mindlessly blind to environmental factors (reality/facts/natural laws?) probably find themselves in a mire of no choice more often. Still take business investors as an illustration. Though both are motivated by profit, one group of people may perform a full market analysis and spread the risk to more than one investment. So, they are less likely to declare bankruptcy, absent of choice here (插在这里干什么?没懂的说~), than another who ignore the risk-taking nature of business. Since people differ considerably from one another, owning to experience or inborn features, on their perception and sensibility to external factors, their possibility involving in circumstances of no choice differs.
这个investor的例子MS不当，难道不做市场分析、不分散投资、破产的investor就没有选择？

In conclusion, it is too early to assert that the absence of choice is a circumstance seldom happens. Granted that availability of choice depends on people's needs and the situation, for penetrating (insightful) minds the unpleasing situation deprived of choice may be rare, but for others, it not.

总结一下：
你的思路很新颖！先赞一个！
但是好像你没有驾驭好，develop和support不是很到位。B1和B2都能顺下来，但B3没有论证清楚（主要是缺少fit的反例）！

现在我开始走务实路线：拿个一个题目，如果我的思路很好但论证难度大，我驾驭不了，我就会换成我能够驾驭的思路来写，尽管思维深度上会差一些！

PS：今天发现你以前写的Issue41,里面有个Body写得嗷嗷不错的。先赞！

[ Last edited by bridgewalker on 2005-8-20 at 16:44 ]

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