issue208 高频，望赐教，感觉写的还行，有拍必回，

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The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.
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Although the way people look, dress and act shows their attitudes and society’s values in many respects, you need to delve into history and the development of moral system in a society rather than only their appearance and behavior if you want to know the society's ideas and values.

In the first place, the appearance of people is the indicator of their different attitudes and interests. Obviously, the color of the skin can help us recognize where the people are from. Besides, you can tell this difference by observing the dressing in different countries. American people love the colorful and relaxing clothing such as T-shirts and jeans because they want more freedom and pursuit the individualisms. But in China, people would prefer to the traditional and inexpensive clothing which is not as colorful as the American people. This style of the clothing shows the moderation and practicality of Chinese people. Besides, many women in Arab countries always hide their faces in the veil because their attitude to the society is preservation and furthermore we can see from it the statue of the women in the society. Admittedly, with the ever-increasingly development of globalization, I concede that people in many countries people might dress in similar way like jeans which most of the young people in the world might be fond of but it doesn’t show they have the similar attitude and values. In addition, the people’s clothing might cater for the adaptability of the climate and work environment.  

In the second place, the people's behaviors in different society also reveal their attitudes, ideas and values. In America, the people and society emphasize on right of the free speech. People can express their opinions more freely than other countries. These people also hold a strong belief on their legal system. The scandals of several American Presidents and other officers prove that everybody must be subject to it. Compared to American people, the people in China are more genteel and respectful.  Most of them respect the aged people and are glad to do everything possible for them because they believe that the age confers the wisdom. And Chinese people are more willing to help others, even the strangers, which is one important value of Chinese tradition. For example, recently, the American pilots during the Second World War go to China and search for their benefactors in China. Why? During the war, planes these pilots drive unfortunately were hit by the invaders in China and they escape their planes, falling on the ground by parachute. Thank to the Chinese people's help, they can save their lives and get back to America under the search of enemy. However, in some cases, the people tend to belie their attitude and values in order to win what they want like respect, power and money.

Nevertheless, you should delve into the important events in the society's history and its development of moral system if you want to know the ideas and values of a society comprehensively. For example, after you understand Abraham Lincoln’s effort in the civil war and Martin Luther King's activities for rights of black people, you can recognize clearly the racial discrimination in America and the society’s value on this issue. And if you want to know how the people’s attitude toward the sex discrimination, you should be familiar with some famous legislations and acts to protect women’s right and a series of related events in the history of America.

In conclusion, the appearance and behavior of the people indeed reflect their attitude and values in a society in many respects. Nevertheless, you must make an effort to delve into the history and development of moral system of the society, you can know the people ‘s attitude , values and ideas in the society better.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-21 at 01:13 ]

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不好意思，现在才给你回，中午一定给你改出，稍等。

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------题目------
The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.
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Although the way people look, dress and act shows their attitudes and society’s values in many respects, you need to delve into history and the development of moral system in（of） a society rather than only their appearance and behavior if you want to know the society's ideas and values.

In the first place, the appearance of people is the indicator of their different attitudes and interests. Obviously, the color of the skin can help us recognize where the people are from. (这个例子举的不是很有代表性，肤色不同只能反映出不同的种族，如何反映兴趣和态度呢？)Besides, you can tell this difference by observing the dressing in different countries. American people love the colorful and relaxing clothing such as T-shirts and jeans because they want more freedom and pursuit the individualisms. But in China, people would prefer to the traditional and inexpensive clothing which is not as colorful as the American people. This style of the clothing shows the moderation and practicality of Chinese people（建议这个例子中的美国人和中国人用Americans和Chinese表示，这样比较地道）这个例子举的很好，很有说服力. Besides, many women in Arab countries always hide their faces in the veil（建议改为wear a veil over their faces,因为veil 就有遮蔽的意思） because their attitude to the society is preservation and furthermore we can see the statue of the women in the society from it. Admittedly, with the ever-increasingly development of globalization, I concede that people in many countries people might dress in similar way like jeans which most of the young people in the world might be fond of but it doesn’t show they have the similar attitude and values. (建议这一点再论述的详细一点：比如说同样是喜欢穿皮草，而在一些社会是地位与财富的象征，而在一些地方却是御寒所需)In addition, the people’s clothing might cater for the adaptability of the climate and work environment.  

In the second place, the people's behaviors in different society also reveal their attitudes, ideas and values. In America, the people（没有the people 的说法，应该去掉the） and society emphasize on the    right of the free speech. People can express their opinions more freely than other countries. These people also hold a strong belief on their legal system. The scandals of several American Presidents and other officers prove that everybody must be subject to it. (这与行为有什么关系？应该进一步论述这些表现在那些行为方面)Compared to American people, the people in China are more genteel and respectful.  Most of them respect the aged people and are glad to do everything possible for them because they believe that the age confers the wisdom.（不是这样吧？我认为更多是因为孝敬老人是中国的传统观念，作者应该从社会的传统价值观念来说） And Chinese people are more willing to help others, even the strangers, which is one important value of Chinese tradition. For example, recently, the American pilots during the Second World War go to China and search for their benefactors in China. Why? During the war, planes these pilots drive unfortunately were hit by the invaders in China and they escape their planes, falling on the ground by parachute. Thank to the Chinese people's help, they can save their lives and get back to America under the search of enemy. However, in some cases, the people tend to belie their attitude and values in order to win what they want like respect, power and money. （这个例子不足以说明问题吧？很多国家也有过类型行为啊！而且是在战时的特殊时期）

Nevertheless, you should delve into the important events in the society's history and its development of moral system if you want to know the ideas and values of a society comprehensively. For example, after you understand Abraham Lincoln’s effort in the civil war and Martin Luther King's activities for rights of black people, you can recognize clearly the racial discrimination in America and the society’s value on this issue. （同时更反映了社会对平等和自由的追求）And if you want to know how the people’s attitude toward the sex discrimination, you should be familiar with some famous legislations and acts to protect women’s right and a series of related events in the history of America. 这段的例子举的不错，很有代表性

In conclusion, the appearance and behavior of the people indeed reflect their attitude and values in a society in many respects. Nevertheless, you must make an effort to delve into the history前文说的感觉和历史没什么关系，建议换一个能概括前几段意思的词，开头也一样 and development of moral system of the society, you can know the people ‘s attitude , values and ideas in the society better.

非常感谢你的修改，一点个人意见，欢迎讨论 :)