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[i习作temp] Issue17 法律问题,欢迎拍砖,谢谢~~ [复制链接]

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Issue17  "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."
翻译:有两种法律:公正的和不公正的。每个社会成员都有责任遵守公正的法律,但是更重要的是,更应该不遵守和反抗不公正的法律。

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(1)法律是一些正式的规定,用来约束社会成员的行为,维护社会的稳定。公平的和不公平的都是相对的概念,很难去明确的区分。
(2)法律是强制性的,每个社会成员不仅仅是有责任遵守法律,而是必须要遵守,否则就要受到法律的惩罚。
(3)法律应该符合大多数人的利益,而且法律是随着社会的发展而发展的,当某些法律规定已经过时,不再能体现大多数人的利益时,就要通过合法的途径来修改。立法机关在制定法律的时候也要考虑人的利益。
(4)当然,在有些社会,尤其是奴隶社会和封建社会,法律只是维护统治阶级的利益,这样就损害了绝大多数人的利益,如果这些法律长时间不被修改,就会遭到强烈的反抗,最终造成社会的变革。但是这种情况在民主国家不会出现。

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Law is defined as body of official rules and regulations, and it is used to govern a society and to control the behaviors of its members. Just and unjust are both relative concepts that are hard to distinguish. It is possible that some law is "just" in some people's opinion, but "unjust" in other's opinion. Here, the "just" and "unjust" are people's notion, so it is natural that a law is considered dramatically different. Thus we cannot assert that laws have two kinds: just and unjust.

Law is compulsive that every individual not only has responsibility to obey it but also has to obey it; otherwise, he will be punished according to the law items. On the other hand, a statute that is neither obeyed nor enforced is empty law. A society can have many kind of laws: criminal law can deal with murder, theft, adultery, or the like; economical law provides a rule for economic activity and settles the dispute between both sides of the trade; tax law makes sure that tax is handed in according to the tax standard. It is undoubted that every one whether he is a civilian or an official are equal before laws and all must to obey laws.

Laws should accord with the profits of most people, and laws will be changed with the development of the society. When some items of a law are behind the times, and can no longer to reveal most people's profits, it should be modified through legal ways. In most society, there are special agencies to manage this kind of things, such as legislature, court, and the like. For example, in some country, several years before, marriage and divorce need the allowance of both sides’ employers. With the development of the society, most people thought the rule was not reasonable and marriage or divorce are their freedom, then they reflected their attitudes to the legislature, at last the rule was abolished. Otherwise, if people simply disobey and resist the law when they think it unjust, the society's stabilization will be broken and finally influence people's life greatly. It is not a wise idea.

Admittedly, in some society, especially slavery society and feudality society, laws are used only to maintain the governor's behalf, and then sacrifice most people's behalf. If this kind of laws is not changed through legal program, it will suffer strong resist, and finally result in the revolution of society. Take the famous Roman law as an example. It was a very important law that influenced most of the legal system of the world, but later it lost its legitimacy because of its discrimination to the lower class, then finally the Twelve Table of Rome replaced it. Of course, this case exists rarely in democracy country.

In conclusion, I hope I have expressed my opinion that laws must be obeyed and should be modified by legal way except special cases.   

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发表于 2005-12-17 01:27:27 |只看该作者
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Law is defined as body of official rules and regulations, and it is used to govern a society and to control去掉to the behaviors of its members. 用定义开头,很好Just and unjust 错了,形容词作主语are both relative concepts that are hard to distinguish. It is possible that some lawlaws可数 is "just" in some people's opinion, but "unjust" in other's opinion. Here感觉这里有些别扭, the "just" and "unjust" are people's notion, so it is natural that a law is considered dramatically different. Thus we cannot assert that laws have two kinds: just and unjust.

Law isLaws are socompulsive that every individual not only has responsibility to obey it but also has to obey it; otherwise, he will be punished according to the law items. On the other hand, a statute that is neither obeyed nor enforced is empty law这句没看明白. A society can have many kinds of laws: criminal law can deal with murder, theft, adultery, or the like; economical law provides a rule for economic activity and settles the dispute between both sides of the trade; tax law makes sure that tax is handed in according to the tax standard. 这组排比的例子值得借鉴It is undoubted that every one whether he is a civilian or an official are equal beforein front of ,before感觉不对 laws and all must to去掉to obey laws.

Laws should accord with the profits of most people, and laws will be changed with the development of the society. When some items of a law are behind the times, and can no longer to reveal most people's profits, it should be modified through(by更合适一些吧) legal ways. In most societysocieties, there are special agencies to manage (this kind of things有些别扭,不如直接用this), such as legislature, court, and the like. For example, in some country, several years before(ago), marriage and divorce need the allowance of both sides’ employers(?请教). With the development of the society, most people thought the rule was not reasonable and marriage or divorce are(was) their freedom, then they reflected their attitudes to the legislature, (and then)at last the rule was abolished. Otherwise(没有转折意味), if people simply disobey and resist the law when they think it unjust, the society's stabilization will be broken and finally influence people's life greatly. It is not a wise idea.
Admittedly, in some society, especially slavery society and feudality society, laws are used only to maintain the governor's behalf, and then sacrifice most people's behalf
(主题句没有把段落主旨说明白). If this kind of laws is not changed through legal program, it will suffer strong resist(resistance), and finally result in the revolution of society. (Take the famous Roman law as an example学习). It was a very important law that influenced most of the legal system of the world, but later it lost its legitimacy because of its discrimination to the lower class, (and注意连词)then finally the Twelve Table of Rome replaced it. Of course, this case exists rarely in democracy country.

In conclusion, I hope I have expressed my opinion that laws must be obeyed and should be modified by legal way except special cases. (感觉结尾很清楚表达了作者的观点,但前面的段落主旨句和开头描述得不太好)  

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(有一个疑问:落后的法律究竟是不是unjust laws,unjust laws,我觉得是恶法的意思,不等同于落后的需要变革的法律,一起探讨!!)
(另外,amy还要多加强文章句式的变化)

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发表于 2005-12-20 21:28:10 |只看该作者
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Law is defined as body of official rules and regulations, and it is used to govern a society and control the behaviors of its members. Just and unjust laws are both relative concepts that are hard to distinguish. It is possible that some law is "just" in some people's opinion, but "unjust" in other's opinion. The "just" and "unjust" referred above are people's notion, so it is natural that a law is considered dramatically different. Thus we cannot assert that laws have two kinds: just and unjust.

Laws are so compulsive that every individual not only has responsibility to obey it but also has to obey it; otherwise, he will be punished according to the law items. On the other hand, a statute that is neither obeyed nor enforced is empty law(这里想表达:没有被遵守或强制的法律是空洞的法律。). A society can have many kinds of laws: criminal law can deal with murder, theft, adultery, or the like; economical law provides a rule for economic activity and settles the dispute between both sides of the trade; tax law makes sure that tax is handed in according to the tax standard. It is undoubted that every one whether he is a civilian or an official are equal in front of laws and all must obey laws.

Laws should accord with the profits of most people, and laws will be changed with the development of the society. When some items of a law are behind the times, and can no longer to reveal most people's profits, it should be modified by legal ways. In most societies, there are special agencies to manage the modifications, such as legislature, court, and the like. For example, in some country, several years ago, marriage and divorce need the allowance of both sides’ leaders of their working places. (这里我是想说:结婚和离婚需要得到双方工作单位领导的同意,不知道能不能表达这个意思)With the development of the society, most people thought the rule was not reasonable and marriage or divorce was their freedom, then they reflected their attitudes to the legislature, at last the rule was abolished. If people simply disobey and resist the law when they think it unjust, the society's stabilization will be broken and finally influence people's life greatly. It is not a wise idea.

Admittedly, in some society, especially slavery society and feudality society, laws are used only to maintain the governor's behalf, and then sacrifice most people's behalf. If this kind of laws is not changed through legal program, it will suffer strong resistance, and finally result in the revolution of society. Take the famous Roman law as an example. It was a very important law that influenced most of the legal system of the world, but later it lost its legitimacy because of its discrimination to the lower class, and then finally the Twelve Table of Rome replaced it. Of course, this case exists rarely in democracy country.

In conclusion, I hope I have expressed my opinion that laws must be obeyed and should be modified by legal way except special cases.

[ Last edited by @amy@ on 2005-12-20 at 21:41 ]
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