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Law is defined as body of official rules and regulations, and it is used to govern a society and to control去掉to the behaviors of its members. 用定义开头,很好Just and unjust 错了,形容词作主语are both relative concepts that are hard to distinguish. It is possible that some lawlaws可数 is "just" in some people's opinion, but "unjust" in other's opinion. Here感觉这里有些别扭, the "just" and "unjust" are people's notion, so it is natural that a law is considered dramatically different. Thus we cannot assert that laws have two kinds: just and unjust.
Law isLaws are socompulsive that every individual not only has responsibility to obey it but also has to obey it; otherwise, he will be punished according to the law items. On the other hand, a statute that is neither obeyed nor enforced is empty law这句没看明白. A society can have many kinds of laws: criminal law can deal with murder, theft, adultery, or the like; economical law provides a rule for economic activity and settles the dispute between both sides of the trade; tax law makes sure that tax is handed in according to the tax standard. 这组排比的例子值得借鉴It is undoubted that every one whether he is a civilian or an official are equal beforein front of ,before感觉不对 laws and all must to去掉to obey laws.
Laws should accord with the profits of most people, and laws will be changed with the development of the society. When some items of a law are behind the times, and can no longer to reveal most people's profits, it should be modified through(by更合适一些吧) legal ways. In most societysocieties, there are special agencies to manage (this kind of things有些别扭,不如直接用this), such as legislature, court, and the like. For example, in some country, several years before(ago), marriage and divorce need the allowance of both sides’ employers(?请教). With the development of the society, most people thought the rule was not reasonable and marriage or divorce are(was) their freedom, then they reflected their attitudes to the legislature, (and then)at last the rule was abolished. Otherwise(没有转折意味), if people simply disobey and resist the law when they think it unjust, the society's stabilization will be broken and finally influence people's life greatly. It is not a wise idea.
Admittedly, in some society, especially slavery society and feudality society, laws are used only to maintain the governor's behalf, and then sacrifice most people's behalf(主题句没有把段落主旨说明白). If this kind of laws is not changed through legal program, it will suffer strong resist(resistance), and finally result in the revolution of society. (Take the famous Roman law as an example学习). It was a very important law that influenced most of the legal system of the world, but later it lost its legitimacy because of its discrimination to the lower class, (and注意连词)then finally the Twelve Table of Rome replaced it. Of course, this case exists rarely in democracy country.
In conclusion, I hope I have expressed my opinion that laws must be obeyed and should be modified by legal way except special cases. (感觉结尾很清楚表达了作者的观点,但前面的段落主旨句和开头描述得不太好)
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(有一个疑问:落后的法律究竟是不是unjust laws,unjust laws,我觉得是恶法的意思,不等同于落后的需要变革的法律,一起探讨!!)
(另外,amy还要多加强文章句式的变化)
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