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题目
Issue47 Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect-that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
翻译： 社会对于智力还是重视不够，比如推理和认知的能力。

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类别：社会类（总频率47）
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提纲
（1） 智力是什么？我们的社会真的没有足够重视吗？当然不是的.
（2）每个孩子从出生就开始被教育，“知识就是力量”作为信条，除了上学，还要上各种培训班，给孩子造成了很大的压力，也影响了孩子的一生。
（3）作为与智力相对的feeling的重视却几乎空白，父母忙于工作，更重视孩子的学习成绩，学校也顾不上所有学生的心理，没有专门的心理课，等等。有一项统计说现在每年有几十万的年轻人自杀，可见问题的严重性。
（4）好在现在社会已经越来越意识到这个问题了，家长们也不再望子成龙，而只是希望孩子成为一个身体和心理都健康的人。
（5）结尾。

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字数：538 words
时间：1小时15分钟
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正文
What is intellect? It is the power of knowing, including reasoning and other cognitive skills; in addition, it is the power as distinguished from the power to feel and to will. The level of intellect is often called as IQ (intelligence quotient), and its contrary, that is the power to feel and to will, is often called as EQ (emotion quotient). The two figures can basically reveal a person's character. However, we have to admit the fact that whoever, parents, teachers, or employers, are all mainly care the former while overlook the latter, which have brought many problems to the society. Thus, we can say that the author's opinion is totally wrong; in fact, society has placed too much emphasis on the intellect and should transfer some emphasis on the emotion. In the following I will discuss the issue to support my opinion.

Every child, since born, is educated passively. They are told repeatedly that knowledge is power and without knowledge they can hardly survive in the society, and so forth. Everyone regard the intellect so seriously that when a child is referred to, people often first ask how about his IQ. As intellect is so emphasized by the whole society, almost all parents try their best to let their children received good education, and besides, they send the children to many kinds of training classes, such as painting, singing, dancing, piano, and the like. Admittedly, their wish is beautiful, and they want their children more competitive in the society. Unfortunately, the effect of parents' efforts is often unsatisfactory; the children have to endure great press and every day they are busy to develop their intellect, whether forwardly or forcedly.

With the great emphasis on intellect, the emphasis on feeling or emotion, which is the contrary of intellect, is nearly blank, especially in some developing countries. On the one hand, parents are busy with the job to feed the family, and they are more care the study grades of children while have little energy to think about the children's psychology. On the other hand, at school, there is no special psychology class for students, and the teachers have to take care many students and also cannot consider the students' feeling or emotion. Thus, the children's emotion is neglected by the society and the result is that more and more children have psychology problems because of the press, failure, and etc. A recent survey shows that every year there are near million of young people commit suicide, and it is shocking fact that can reveal the ponderance of overlooking emotion.

Still, we are delighted to find that the problem has been recognized by the society and many improvements have been done. Now more and more parents are not any longer expect their children to be a famous or successful person, however, they only wish their children can grow up healthily, whether physically or psychologically. This is a dramatic progress and I believe in the future, IQ and EQ will be equal emphasized by the society.

To sum up, we can conclude that the author's standpoint is false, and society should place equal emphasis on intellect and emotion, which is more beneficial to individuals, families, and finally the whole society.

wyq3335UID：2162300

What is intellect? It is the power of knowing, including reasoning and other cognitive skills;(改.) in addition, it is the power as distinguished from the power to feel and to will. The level of intellect is often called as IQ (intelligence quotient), and its contrary, that is the power to feel and to will, is often called as EQ (emotion quotient). The two figures can basically reveal a person's character. However, we have to admit the fact that whoever, parents, teachers, or employers, are all mainly care the former while overlook the latter, which have brought many problems to the society. （既然提到这些人，应当逐一放在下段展开一下，老板这个下面就没有展开。否则逻辑就不严密.第一段很关键，是下面展开的方向，最后要呼应第一段。这样才环环相扣）Thus, we can say that the author's opinion is totally wrong; in fact, society has placed too much emphasis on the intellect and should transfer some emphasis on the emotion. In the following I will discuss the issue to support my opinion.(有点多余)

Every child, since born, is educated passively. （过于绝对）They are told repeatedly that knowledge is power and without knowledge they can hardly survive in the society, and so forth. Everyone regard the intellect so seriously that when a child is referred to, people often first ask how about his IQ.（WHEN 句放后面） As intellect is so emphasized by the whole society（从文中看不到整个社会强调智商，更多看到父母）, almost all parents try their best to let their children received good education, and besides, they send the children to many kinds of training classes, such as painting, singing, dancing, piano, and the like. Admittedly, their wish is beautiful, and they want their children more competitive in the society. Unfortunately, the effect of parents' efforts is often unsatisfactory;（句号） the children have to endure great press and every day they are busy to develop their intellect, whether forwardly or forcedly.

With the great emphasis on intellect, the emphasis on feeling or emotion, which is the contrary of intellect, is nearly blank, especially in some developing countries. On the one hand, parents are busy with the job（”their careers” ） to feed the family, and they are more care (+for)the study grades of children while have little energy to think about the children's psychology（”mentality” is better ）(but why parents did so? Why in such countries intellect is much more important, because life is not easy to them. They have no time to think about the mental health, to live is the first thing to them. Then the intellect is be strengthened.). On the other hand, at school, there is no special psychology class for students, and the teachers have to take care many students and also cannot consider the students' feeling or emotion.（所有老师都需要照顾许多学生，只是发展中国家更多。到底是因为没有心理课，还是因为老师照顾不过来。要说个明白） Thus, the children's emotion is neglected by the society and the result is that more and more children have psychology（MENTAL） problems because of the press, failure, and etc. A recent survey shows that every year there are near （+a）million of young people commit suicide, and it is（+a） shocking fact that can reveal the ponderance of overlooking emotion(典型的中国式英语:忽视感情的严重性consequence is better than ponderance).

Still, we are delighted to find that the problem has been recognized by the society and many improvements have been done.(why have such improvements? Because the society is developing and the life is better, they have time and competence to consider such problems. and because many mental problems goes up,  they have to turn to emphasize the mental development否则这句话很突然.加上因果关系对自己论点更有说服力。) Now more and more parents are not any longer expect their children to be a famous or successful person, however, they only wish their children can grow up healthily, whether physically or psychologically(“mentally” is better). This is a dramatic progress and I believe in the future, IQ and EQ will be equal(+ly)emphasized by the society.

To sum up, we can conclude that the author's standpoint is false, and society should place equal emphasis on intellect and emotion, which is more beneficial to individuals, families, and finally the whole society.(最后一句似乎多余，套话。)

智恩UID：2160717

提纲
（1） 智力是什么？我们的社会真的没有足够重视吗？当然不是的.
（2）每个孩子从出生就开始被教育，“知识就是力量”作为信条，除了上学，还要上各种培训班，给孩子造成了很大的压力，也影响了孩子的一生。
（3）作为与智力相对的feeling（是想说情感吗？）的重视却几乎空白，父母忙于工作，更重视孩子的学习成绩，学校也顾不上所有学生的心理，没有专门的心理课，等等。有一项统计说现在每年有几十万的年轻人自杀，可见问题的严重性。
（4）好在现在社会已经越来越意识到这个问题了，家长们也不再望子成龙，而只是希望孩子成为一个身体和心理都健康的人。
（5）结尾。

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字数：538 words
时间：1小时15分钟
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正文
What is intellect? It is the power of knowing（是不是该换成knowledge，或者是想表达获得知识的这种能力？？）, including reasoning and other cognitive skills; in addition, it is the power as distinguished from the power to feel and to will. The level of intellect is often called as IQ (intelligence quotient), and its contrary, that is the power to feel and to will, is often called as EQ (emotion quotient). The two figures can basically reveal a person's character. However, we have to admit the fact that whoever（无论谁，这里有点绝对）, parents, teachers, or employers, are all mainly care the former while overlook the latter, which have brought many problems to the society. Thus, we can say that the author's opinion is totally wrong; in fact, society has placed too much emphasis on the intellect and should transfer some emphasis on（to 吧，transfer··· to···）  the emotion. In the following I will discuss the issue to support my opinion.

Every child, since born, is educated passively. They are told repeatedly that knowledge is power and without knowledge they can hardly survive in the society, and so forth. Everyone regard the intellect so seriously that when a child is referred to我觉得用refer，不太恰当）, people often first ask how about his IQ. As intellect is so emphasized by the whole society, almost all parents try their best to let their children received（去掉ed，let···do） good education, and besides, they send the children to many kinds of training classes, such as painting, singing, dancing, piano, and the like. Admittedly, their wish is beautiful, and they want their children（to be） more competitive in the society. Unfortunately, the effect of parents' efforts is often unsatisfactory; the children have to endure great press and every day they are busy to develop（deveoping，be busy doing） their intellect, whether forwardly or forcedly.

With the great emphasis on intellect, the emphasis on feeling or emotion, which is the contrary of intellect, is nearly blank, especially in some developing countries. On the one hand, parents are busy with the job to feed the family, and they are more care（about） the study grades of children while have little energy to think about the children's psychology. On the other hand, at school, there is no special psychology class for students（这主要是在中国，你要提一提，在美国是有的，而且现在好多高中已经有心理健康课，我以前所在的高中就有，只是重视不够）, and the teachers have to take care many students and also cannot consider the students' feeling or emotion. Thus, the children's emotion is neglected by the society and the result is that more and more children have psychology（psychological） problems because of the press, failure, and etc. A recent survey shows that every year there are near million of young people commit suicide, and it is shocking fact that can reveal the ponderance of overlooking emotion.

Still, we are delighted to find that the problem has been recognized by the society and many improvements have been done. Now more and more parents are not any longer expect（ing） their children to be a famous or successful person, however, they only（太绝对了） wish their children can grow up healthily, whether physically or psychologically. This is a dramatic progress and I believe in the future, IQ and EQ will be equal（equally） emphasized by the society.

To sum up, we can conclude that the author's standpoint is false, and society should place equal emphasis on intellect and emotion, which is more beneficial to individuals, families, and finally the whole society.

@amy@UID：209096

非常感谢wyq3335和智恩的细心修改~~

What is intellect? It is the power of knowing, including reasoning and other cognitive skills. In addition, it is the power as distinguished from the power to feel and to will. The level of intellect is often called as IQ (intelligence quotient), and its contrary, that is the power to feel and to will, is often called as EQ (emotion quotient). The two figures can basically reveal a person's character. However, we have to admit the fact that most people, including parents, teachers, or employers, are all mainly care the former while overlook the latter, which have brought many problems to the society. Thus, we can say that the author's opinion is totally wrong; in fact, society has placed too much emphasis on the intellect and should transfer some emphasis to the emotion.

Most children, since born, are educated passively. They are told repeatedly that knowledge is power and without knowledge they can hardly survive in the society, and so forth. Everyone regard the intellect so seriously that people often first ask how about his IQ when a child is mentioned. At schools, intellectual students are more likely to be praised by teachers; at companies, individuals with high IQ are more possible to get the offers from employers. As intellect is so emphasized by the whole society, parents have to try their best to let their children received good education, and besides, they send the children to many kinds of training classes, such as painting, singing, dancing, piano, and the like. Admittedly, their wish is beautiful, and they want their children to be more competitive in the society. Unfortunately, the effect of parents' efforts is often unsatisfactory. The children have to endure great press and every day they are busy developing their intellect, whether forwardly or forcedly.

As the energy of parents and society is limited, so with the great emphasis on intellect, the emphasis on feeling or emotion, which is the contrary of intellect, is nearly blank, especially in some developing countries, such as in China. On the one hand, to live a good life is not an easy thing, and parents have to be busy with their careers to feed the family, thus they have little energy to think about the children's psychology. On the other hand, at most schools, there is no special psychology class for students, and under the great employ pressure and the extent of intellect be strengthened by employers, the teachers have to utilize any time to teach students more knowledge. Thus, the children's emotion is neglected by the society and the result is that more and more children have mental problems because of the press, failure, and etc. A recent survey shows that every year there are near a million of young people commit suicide, and it is a shocking fact that can reveal the consequence of overlooking emotion.

Still, with the developing of society, life is much better, and parents or society have time to consider the increasing mental problems. We are delighted to find that many improvements have been done. Now more and more parents are not any longer expecting their children to be a famous or successful person, however, they would rather their children grow up healthily, whether physically or mentally. More and more companies consider not only a student’s grade, but also whether he can cooperate and get along well with others. The whole society has begun to propagandize the importance of emphasizing on EQ by all kinds of medias. This is a dramatic progress and I believe IQ and EQ will be equally emphasized by the society in the future.

To sum up, we can conclude that the author's standpoint is false, and society should place equal emphasis on intellect and emotion, which is more beneficial to individuals, families, and finally the whole society.