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@amy@UID：209096

题目
Issue11 "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

翻译： 所有的国家都应该支持发展一所全球性的大学，它的主要目的是要让学生们致力于解决世界上最难缠的社会问题。

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类别：国际类（总频率36）
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提纲
（1）反对观点。
（2）世界上最难缠的社会问题有：环境污染、气候变暖、种族冲突、贫富不均、恐怖主义等等，这些问题的造成有很复杂的原因。
（3）建立一所全球性的大学，虽然可以增进来自不同国家的学生的交流，可是却很难让他们去解决这些社会问题。因为学生的首要目的还是学习，他们可能很难对这些社会问题有深刻地认识，而且这些问题需要国家间的政治合作，学生很难做到这点。
（4）建立全球性的大学很难，因为涉及到如何管理。不同国家的实力不同，这样就很容易造成某些发达国家占主导的情况，这样对解决这些社会问题没有帮助。

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字数：429 words
时间：45分钟
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正文
I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that a global university is built up by all nations to deal with the world's most persistent social problems. Such a global university can do little benefit to the problems, moreover, to build up such a university itself is a problem indeed.

What are the world's most persistent social problems? Environment pollution, the warming of global temperature, race confliction, the odds of wealth, terrorism, and the like are all this kind of problem. All those problems are troubling the nations all around the world, and those problems have different reasons respectively. Environment problems result from the overexploitation of resources and neglecting of environment protection. Race conflictions result from the different belief or the scramble of profits. All the problems are very serious and need to be resolved as soon as possible. A common ground of those problems is that they all need the collaboration of nations, so is it feasible to build up a global university and let the students engage in the solving process of the problems as the speaker suggests? The answer is certainly not.

On the one hand, a global university has many advantages, but it is nearly useless for the solving of the problems. We admit that a global university can promote the communication of students from different countries, and let them learn each other. However, the primary purpose of students is to study advanced knowledge. As a student, it is fairly hard to have deep cognition about those persistent social problems. Moreover, the problems come down to many realms and need the governments' collaboration, which is also difficult to accomplish by a students.

On the other hand, to build up a global university and make it operate normally is very difficult. The first trouble is how to manage it. Since the nation power of different nations varies greatly, then it is totally possible that such a global university is mainly controlled by several developed countries, which is completely useless for those problems. Firstly, the emphasis of different countries is dissimilar, then to solve which problem first will bring drastic disputations. For example, terrorism maybe the top problem need to be solved for America; whereas, for Israel and Pakistan, what should to deal with first maybe the race confliction problem. Secondly, because the language and custom differences, how to arrange the teaching activities will cause great efforts.

To sum up, to solve those social problems, we cannot depend on a global university; on contrary, the governments should increase cooperation and mobilize the related departments to make progress.

yogurt4UID：198389

恩.AMY好勤快的说,赞个^^
刚开始限时的时候字写的比较少  练习多了就好了 会在同样的时间越写越多
对在哪些地方停下来思考,哪些地方不能停  有更好的感觉和控制

总之,无论句子有多么惨不忍睹,手都不要停  这样才能越写越快,越写越多
ISSUE往往要展开才能谈它写的好不好
最后就上升到鬼子说的那个境界：３５分钟写作文，１０分钟修改
听上去很艰难　呵呵

句式要用自己最熟悉的那种　　转折，顺承，开头，结尾．．．．用什么样的句子要快速反应过来，换的只是词汇．这应该是所谓的摸版吧．形式的地方节约时间，力气就可以花到说理和举例子上了　　

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leedgenUID：160823

I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that a global university is built up by all nations to deal with the world's most persistent social problems. Such a global university can do little benefit to the problems, moreover, to build up such a university itself is a problem indeeds这句写得有点不对劲啊，本身是个问题是这么表达的么？求助下一位了.

What are the world's most persistent social problems? Environment pollution, the warming of global temperature, race confliction, the odds of wealth, terrorism, and the like are all this kind of problem. All those problems are troubling the nations all around the world, and those problems have different reasons respectively. Environment problems result from the overexploitation of resources and neglecting of environment protection. Race conflictions result from the different belief or the scramble of profits. All the problems are very serious and need to be resolved as soon as possible. A common ground of those problems is that they all need the collaboration of nations, so is it feasible to build up a global university and let the students engage in the solving process of the problems as the speaker suggests? The answer is certainly not.这段分析persistent social problems很透彻

On the one hand, a global university has many advantages, but it is nearly useless for the solving of the problems. We admit that a global university can promote the communication of students from different countries, and let them learn each other. However, the primary purpose of students is to study advanced knowledge. As a student, it is fairly hard to have deep cognition about those persistent social problems. Moreover, the problems come down to many realms and need the governments' collaboration, which is also difficult to accomplish by a （a去掉）students.

On the other hand, to build up a global university and make it operate normally is very difficult. The first trouble is how to manage it. Since the nation power of different nations varies greatly, then(then去掉) it is totally possible that such a global university is mainly controlled by several developed countries, which is completely useless for those problems. Firstly, the emphasis of different countries is dissimilar, then to solve which problem first will bring drastic disputations. For example, terrorism maybe the top problem need to be solved for America; whereas,这个例子是不是不太合适，恐怖主义不只是美国要解决的问题啊？ for Israel and Pakistan, what should to deal with first maybe the race confliction problem. Secondly, because the language and custom differences, how to arrange the teaching activities will cause great efforts.

To sum up, to solve those social problems, we cannot depend on a global university; on （the） contrary, the governments should increase cooperation and mobilize the related departments to make progress.

限时完成的作文很了不起啊，什么时候我也能限时成功啊
我发现amy的框架和我的差不多耶，呵呵

kito9695UID：209685

ssue11 第一次在45分钟匆匆完成

题目
Issue11 "All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."

翻译： 所有的国家都应该支持发展一所全球性的大学，它的主要目的是要让学生们致力于解决世界上最难缠的社会问题。

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类别：国际类（总频率36）
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提纲
（1）反对观点。恩，好，老是见平衡观点了，这个观点新
（2）世界上最难缠的社会问题有：环境污染、气候变暖、种族冲突、贫富不均、恐怖主义等等，这些问题的造成有很复杂的原因。
（3）建立一所全球性的大学，虽然可以增进来自不同国家的学生的交流，可是却很难让他们去解决这些社会问题。因为学生的首要目的还是学习，他们可能很难对这些社会问题有深刻地认识，而且这些问题需要国家间的政治合作，学生很难做到这点。
（4）建立全球性的大学很难，因为涉及到如何管理。不同国家的实力不同，这样就很容易造成某些发达国家占主导的情况，这样对解决这些社会问题没有帮助。

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字数：429 words
时间：45分钟
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正文
I do not agree with the speaker's opinion that a global university is built up by all nations to deal with the world's most persistent social problems. 开门见山Such a global university can do little benefit to the problems, moreover, to build up such a university itself is a problem indeed.暗示文章结构，很好的写法
开头我很喜欢，嘿嘿

What are the world's most persistent social problems? Environment pollution, the warming of global temperature, race confliction, the odds of wealth请教？？, terrorism, and the like?? are all this kind of problem. All those problems are troubling the nations all around the world, and those problems have different reasons respectively. For example,后面只提到两个问题，家上举例吧Environment problems result from the overexploitation of resources and neglecting of environment protection. ;Race conflictions result from the different belief or the scramble of profits. All the problems are very serious and need to be resolved as soon as possible. A common ground of those problems is that they all need the collaboration of nations, so is it feasible to build up a global university and let the students engage in the solving process of the problems as the speaker suggests? The answer is certainly not.这段有个很严重的问题，缺少主旨句，我觉得你在提纲中表述的很好：世界上最难缠的社会问题有：…等等，这些问题的造成有很复杂的原因;主旨应当是，由于世界上…复杂的原因，不同的原因,因此不适合建立全球性大学；这段给人的感觉像是后面两个分论点的总的主旨段，用一整段来表明不适合建立的意思，似乎有点不妥，不知道我说清楚了没有？？

On the one hand, a global university has many advantages, but it is nearly useless for the solving of the problems. We admit that a global university can promote the communication of students from different countries, and let them learnfrom each other. However, the primary purpose of students is to study advanced knowledge. As a student, it is fairly hard to have deep cognition about those persistent social problems. Moreover, the problems come down to many realms and need the governments' collaboration, which is also difficult to accomplish by 去掉a students.

On the other hand, to build up a global university and make it operate normally is very difficult. The first不如改成the primary trouble is how to manage it. Since the nation power怎么理解？ of different nations varies greatly, then it is totally possible that such a global university is mainly controlled by several developed countries费解, which is completely useless for those problems. Firstly, the emphasis of different countries is dissimilar, then to solve which problem first will bring drastic disputations. For example, terrorism maybe the top problem need to be solved for America; whereas, for Israel and Pakistan, what should to deal with first maybe the race confliction problem. Secondly, because ofthe language and custom differences, how to arrange the teaching activities will cause great efforts.这段安排的不太好，firstly下面有很多例子，而secondly只用了一句话叙述

To sum up, to solve those social problems, we cannot depend on a global university; on the contrary, the governments should increase cooperation and mobilize the related departments to make progress.结尾简洁且提出自己的见解，好啊！！

需要改进噢~