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Issue175 同主题第三期,感觉写得不好,希望能快点恢复状态,留链互拍~ [复制链接]

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Issue175 It is always an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be worked out by a team, but true innovation results from the enterprise and unique perception of an individual.

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革新的动力往往来自于个人;革新的细节可能来自于团队,但是实质的革新都是个人努力和独特思维的结果。

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(1)反对观点。
(2)在以前,确实革新的动力往往来自于个人,很多的发明都是源自于个人的努力,例如:爱迪生发明的灯泡,比尔盖茨写的MS-DOS操作系统等等。
(3)但是,随着社会越来越复杂,不仅革新的细节需要来自于团队,实质的革新也不能单单依靠个人努力,比如:航空事业、生物研究等等。
(4)而且,个人努力和团队努力并不冲突,比如一个团队每个人在一个不同的方面有所创新,结合起来可能取得很大的成就。

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I do not agree with the speaker's opinion, and I think whether individual or team can be the impetus for innovation. In addition, not only the details but also true innovation can be resulted from a team.

Admittedly, in the past, the impetus for innovation is always from an individual. During that period, the world was correspondingly simple, so it is possible for an individual to make invention or true innovation. There were lots of examples in the history. For example, Edison invented bulb mainly depending on himself; Bill Gates finished the MS-DOS operating system only by his own efforts.

However, with the development of societies, the world becomes more and more complex, and team is more and more important in the process of innovation than before. Since the complication of innovation, it is certain that the detail should be worked out by a team. Furthermore, the true innovation also cannot only depend on an individual’s enterprise and unique perception. For example, it is unimaginable to make improvement in space flight region or biology region since an individual cannot consider comprehensively in all facets because it is not likely that one can master all sub-facets. Thus, team has great advantages than individual. There is an old saying, “Many heads are better than one.” When many people work together, with discussion and prompt each other, they can think out good ideas more probably. Even if the final innovation is brought by an individual, the other’s contribution cannot be neglected.

Moreover, in fact, personal enterprise and unique perception do not conflict with team's work. Many individuals form a team. When processing a large project, each member can be expert of different facet and can be the impetus for innovation of his sub-region. Then, collecting all the members' innovation as a whole is more likely to make great improvement or important invention. For instance, to launch a space shuttle needs many fields’ knowledge, such as physics, astronomy, aeronautics, and even politics. Unless all the experts from different fields cooperate well, the plan cannot be processed favorably.

To sum up, the impetus for innovation does not limit to individuals, and it also can be from a team. Actually, with the cooperation of every team's members, it is more likely to make great innovation.
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发表于 2006-2-9 14:15:26 |只看该作者
I do not agree with the speaker's opinion, and I think whether(either? amy是想表达两者都可以吗?) individual or team can be the impetus for innovation. In addition, not only the details but also true innovation can be resulted from(result from不用被动,而且前面的detail应该是被完成,不是由...产生呀?不懂撒) a team.

Admittedly, in the past, the impetus for innovation is always from an individual. During that period, the world was correspondingly simple, so it is possible for an individual to make invention or true innovation. There were lots of examples in the history. For example, Edison invented bulb mainly depending on himself; Bill Gates finished the MS-DOS operating system only by his own efforts.再分析分析这些individual的enterprise的重要,字数就多了。amy可以看看jingjing的那篇分析,我觉得他这点写的很好的

However, with the development of societies, the world becomes more and more complex, and team is more and more important in the process of innovation than before. Since the complication of innovation, it is certain that the detail should be worked out by a team. Furthermore, the true innovation also cannot only depend on an individual’s enterprise and unique perception. For example, it is unimaginable to make improvement in space flight region or biology region since an individual cannot consider comprehensively in all facets because it is not likely that one can master all sub-facets. Thus,(a) team has great advantages than(an) individual. There is an old saying, “Many heads are better than one.” 用得好啊,学习,我好像从来不知道用谚语或者名言,唉,关键是偶不知道啦When many people work together, with discussion and prompt each other, they can think out good ideas more probably. Even if the final innovation is brought by an individual, the other’s contribution cannot be neglected.这里还可以添点brainstorming的内容,嘿嘿

Moreover, in fact, personal enterprise and unique perception do not conflict with team's work. Many individuals form a team. When processing a large project, each member can be expert of different facet and can be the impetus for innovation of his sub-region. Then, collecting all the members' innovation as a whole is more likely to make great improvement or important invention. For instance, to launch a space shuttle needs many fields’ knowledge, such as physics, astronomy, aeronautics, and even politics. Unless all the experts from different fields cooperate well, the plan cannot be processed favorably.这段同body2的看法,要再展开分析一下才好

To sum up, the impetus for innovation does not limit to individuals, and it also can be from a team. Actually, with the cooperation of every team's members, it is more likely to make great innovation.结尾不错,简洁、观点明确

这个题目可能不太好写,明显不如以前amy的issue精彩啊,加油,这篇再修改修改吧
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