issue41 卡了时间，大家看看哈

king888UID: 2285811

TOPIC: ISSUE41 - "Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
WORDS: 395          TIME: 0:45:00          DATE: 2007-1-28
1 开头， 说明nonmainstream science是有好处的
2 nonmainstream science 可以帮助人们在关键时刻缓解压力，甚至救命
3 一些当时的nonmainstream science 可以变成mainstream science
4 必须承认一些nonmainstream science 是不可取的
5 结尾

The discussion of the high controversial issue about the nonmainstream and the mainstream among people not only in the American but also in the other countries all over the over has come into vogue during the last decade. Just what is the dangerous about the speaker's claim? The judgment should be dispersed and the decision should be detailed considered before the analyses. In my opinion, some the nonmainstream can make contribution to our society to some extent, though sometimes the they are indeed take us into the twilight zone of psychological emotion.

It is unilateral to only accept the mainstream science; further reflection tells me that some nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuit sometimes can contribute for us by satisfying our special needs, which is not provided by the “socalled” mainstream science. For example, as far as I know, nowadays as the accelerating changing society, humans including students are under so deep burden that sometimes they cannot sustain and then they may choose suicide by themselves. At this time, their psychological emotions are on the twilight zone of collapse, we need the “socalled” nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling to encourage them to see the brighter future. Only little time they can work, but they save the collapse live actually.

On the other hand, going hand on hand of critical thinking is tolerable. Something we today think they are nonmainstream science may becoming “socalled” mainstreams, which are defined only by people. Majority of people accept, then they are mainstream science, by contrast, they are nonmainstream science. For example, the Copernicus's Theory of Heliocentricsm during the time the genius lives was accepted as the nonmainstream science and outraged the religious belief, and stemmed the torrent of the mainstream science--geocentricism suggested by Aristotle. But nowadays, none of us will deny the heliocentricism is the actually mainstream science. It's important to realize the important of some nonmainstream science today we think.

It's also admitted the dangerous of certain nonmainstream science because sometimes they literally bring about the unused and pernicious things to us. It impact our normal science ideology, and make us do experiment detouredly.

All in all, although the nonmainstream science may injure us in some certian times, it can give us psychological release from the stress of our everyday lives. But certain restricting the bound of the nonmainstream is literally needed for it can devote for society best.

dallenlinUID: 2247050

    The discussion of the high controversial issue about the nonmainstream and the mainstream among people not only in the American but also in the other countries all over the over(world) has come into vogue during the last decade. Just what is the dangerous about(to) the speaker's claim? The judgment should be dispersed and the decision should be detailed(ly) considered before the analyses. In my opinion, some the(delete) nonmainstream can make contribution to our society to some extent, though sometimes the(delete) they are indeed take us into the twilight zone of psychological emotion.  
  
  It is unilateral to only accept the mainstream science; further reflection tells me that some nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuit sometimes can contribute for us by satisfying our special needs, which is not provided by the “socalled” mainstream science. For example, as far as I know, nowadays as(in) the accelerating changing society, humans including students are under so deep burden that sometimes they cannot sustain and then they may choose suicide by themselves(这个词画蛇添足). At this time, their psychological emotions are on the twilight zone of collapse, we need the “so-called” nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling to encourage them to see the brighter future. Only little time (can)they can(delete) work, but they save the collapse live(两个名词怎么连在一起) actually.   

  On the other hand, going hand on hand of critical thinking is tolerable. Something we today think they are nonmainstream science may becoming “so-called” mainstreams, which are defined only by people. Majority of people accept, then they are mainstream science, by(on) contrast, they are nonmainstream science. For example, the Copernicus's Theory of Heliocentricsm during the time the genius lives was accepted as the nonmainstream science and outraged the religious belief, and stemmed the torrent of the mainstream science--geocentricism suggested(这词好象不是很恰当) by Aristotle. But nowadays, none of us will deny (that)the heliocentricism is the actually mainstream science. It's important to realize the important(importance) of some nonmainstream science today (as) we think.

   It's also admitted(that) the dangerous(danger) of certain nonmainstream science(怎么感觉结构不完整) because sometimes they literally(这词用在这什么意思?) bring about the unused(该是useless) and pernicious things to us. It impact our normal science ideology, and make us do experiment detouredly. (这段没时间还不如不写)  

  All in all, although the nonmainstream science may injure us in some certain(这两个词怎么连起来用?) times, it can give us psychological release from the stress of our everyday lives. But certain restricting the bound of the nonmainstream is literally needed for it can devote for society best.

我个人觉得用词,还有语句结构都不是很好, 不过一开始就45分钟能写出来已经很厉害了



[ 本帖最后由 dallenlin 于 2007-1-31 19:49 编辑 ]

tongwawawUID: 2176887

The discussion of the high controversial issue about the nonmainstream and the mainstream among people not only in the American （America）but also in the other countries all over the over（？什么结构world？） has come into vogue during the last decade. Just what is the dangerous about the speaker's claim? The judgment should be dispersed and the decision should be detailed considered before the analyses. In my opinion, some the nonmainstream can make contribution to our society to some extent, though sometimes the they are indeed take us into the twilight zone of psychological emotion.

It is unilateral to only accept the mainstream science; further reflection tells me that some nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling, psychic and paranormal pursuit sometimes can contribute for（benefit） us by satisfying our special needs, which is not provided by the “socalled” mainstream science. For example, as far as I know, nowadays as the accelerating changing society, humans including students are under so deep burden that sometimes they cannot sustain and then they may choose suicide by themselves（呵呵，suicide当然时by themselve了）. At this time, their psychological emotions are on the twilight zone of collapse, we need the “socalled” nonmainstream science such as fortune-telling to encourage them to see the brighter future. Only little time they can work, but they save the collapse live actually. （说的太绝对，而且没有依据，我又想argue你啦）

On the other hand, going hand on hand of critical thinking is tolerable. Something we today think they are nonmainstream science may becoming “socalled” mainstreams, which are defined only by people. Majority of people accept, then they are mainstream science, by contrast, they are nonmainstream science. For example, the Copernicus's Theory of Heliocentricsm during the time the genius lives was accepted as the nonmainstream science and outraged the religious belief, and stemmed the torrent of the mainstream science--geocentricism suggested by Aristotle. But nowadays, none of us will deny the heliocentricism is the actually mainstream science. It's important to realize the important （importance）of some nonmainstream science today we think.

It's also admitted the dangerous of certain nonmainstream science because sometimes they literally bring about the unused （太chinese啦，unuseful）and pernicious things to us. It impact our normal science ideology, and make us do experiment detouredly. 这段没有展开，可以理解，以后应该补充上

All in all, although the nonmainstream science may injure us in some certian times,（bring harm to us sometimes） it can give us psychological release from the stress of our everyday lives. But certain restricting the bound of the nonmainstream （certain ristriction of nonmainstream）is literally needed（desired会不会好一些呢～） for it can devote for society best.（什么意思？）

能在规定时间内写完实在是很不容的事情，楼主还应该在表达上多下功夫

muerghqUID: 2272725

也许时间紧张的原因吧，出了很多语言错误，不错现在限时写成这样已经很不错了，崇拜，呵呵
上面两个人改过了，我就不改了
但说一下总体影响：
总体感觉论据太少，太单薄，例子不够，很多都没有展开
呵呵，一起加油