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kturyUID: 2274868

9月9日 那个更好，serious movie 还是 amusing movie？（2007.3.23 ）
40' 411words  感谢批改，有拍必回！
Nowadays, people can choose various types of movie to look because of the rapid development of mass media. Such as comedy and amusing movies or serious movies are all being popular to the public. Some people hold the opinion that the serious movie is better than the amusing one. I, however cast doubt on that point, I prefer amusing movies.

To the beginning with, amusing movies bring a lot of benefits to me. First, the relaxation, which be offered by the talent actors' activities and excellent performances skills, which help me relax the pressure from work and study. For example, Mr. Bean always played funny activities and surprise behaviors, which make me laugh. Laughing is the best way the reducer the blue and upset moods. Second, making friends with the people who share the same love for amusing movies is a good thing.  we can get a little together and we talk, discuss and laugh. All these make my life more fun. Take the Apple Pie's movie party as an example, many Apple pie's fans got together, we talk about the actors and the plots. Meanwhile I make many friends, and one of them even gave a watch as a souvenir. Thus the amusing movie definitely make my life more colorful.

Secondly, I had learned many useful things from amusing movies. it is so easy to learn something through a happy and relax condition. Such as the Kongfu Pander, the pander's father said: if you want something to be special, just think that it is special. I know this word means if one wants to be succeeded, he/she should be full of confidence. It is important to realize this point because of the confidence as a requirement be demanded in the career.

Last, serious moves, admittedly, reflect some social problem. serious moves sometimes use the history events to represent the history. it is clear to present the historical thoughts and better to be understand the history. Also serious movies which content crime senses, violence, and sex, clearly show the current social problems. These problems make people to retrospect and recorrect their behaviors. But, we also can see the amusing movies discuss these social problems via another way.

To sum up, from different people views, it is hard to say serious movies and amusing movies which one is better. But from my point of view, I receive a lot of benefits from amusing movies. Thus I think the amusing style is better.

layfolkUID: 2418021

     Nowadays, people can choose various types of movie to look because of the rapid development of mass media. Such as comedy and amusing movies or serious movies are all being popular to the public. Some people hold the opinion that the serious movie is better than the amusing one. I, however cast doubt on that point, I prefer amusing movies.
      To the beginning with(to begin with), amusing movies bring a lot of benefits to me. First, the relaxation, which be offered by the talent actors' activities and excellent performances skills, which help me relax the pressure from work and study. For example, Mr. Bean always played funny activities and surprise(surprising) behaviors, which makes me laugh. Laughing is the best way of reducing blue and upset moods. Second, making friends with the people who share the
same love for amusing movies is a good thing.  We can get a little together and we talk, discuss and laugh. All these make my life more fun. Take the Apple
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     Secondly, I had learned many useful things from amusing movies. it is so easy to learn something through a happy and relax condition. Such as the Kongfu Pander, the pander's father said: if you want something to be special, just think that it is special. I know this word means if one wants to be succeeded, he/she should be full of confidence. It is important to realize this point because of the confidence as a requirement be demanded in the career.7G%h0?9vwR;n#`
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Last, serious moves, admittedly, reflect some social problem. serious moves sometimes use the history events to represent the history. it is clear to present the historical thoughts and better to be understand the history. Also serious movies which content crime senses, violence, and sex, clearly show the current social problems. These problems make people to retrospect and recorrect their behaviors. But, we also can see the amusing movies discuss these social problems via another way.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE&bxv        O*K9DL
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micheal0626UID: 2368075

Nowadays, people can choose various types of movie to look because of the rapid development of mass media. Such as comedy and amusing movies or serious movies are all being popular to the public. Some people hold the opinion that the serious movie is better than the amusing one. I, however, cast doubt on that point, I prefer amusing movies.

To the beginning with, amusing movies bring a lot of benefits to me. First, the relaxation, which be (is) offered by the talent actors' activities and excellent performances skills, which helps me relax the pressure from work and study. For example, Mr. Bean always played funny activities and surprise behaviors, which make me laugh. Laughing is the best way the reducer the blue and upset moods. Second, making friends with the people who share the same love for amusing movies is a good thing.  we can get a little together and we talk, discuss and laugh. All these make my life more fun. Take the Apple Pie's movie party as an example, many Apple pie's fans got together, we talk (talked) about the actors and the plots. Meanwhile I make many friends, and one of them even gave a watch as a souvenir. Thus the amusing movie definitely make my life more colorful.

Secondly, I had (have) learned many useful things from amusing movies. it is so easy to learn something through a happy and relax condition. Such as the Kongfu Pander, the pander's father said: if you want something to be special, just think that it is special. I know this word means (meaning) if one wants to be succeeded, he/she should be full of confidence. It is important to realize this point because of the confidence as a requirement be demanded in the career.
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Last, serious moves, admittedly, reflect some social problem. serious moves sometimes use the history events to represent the history. it is clear to present the historical thoughts and better to be understand the history. Also serious movies which content crime senses, violence, and sex, clearly show the current social problems. These problems make people to retrospect and recorrect (correct) their behaviors. But, we also can see the amusing movies discuss these social problems via another way.

To sum up, from different people views, it is hard to say serious movies and amusing movies which one is better. But from my point of view, I receive a lot of benefits from amusing movies. Thus I think the amusing style is better.

micheal0626UID: 2368075

我去了，怎么和我在文档里改不一样呢?字体还这么小,你先将就看看吧,我下次改进呀.
奎,我建议你看看范文,他们的写作思路值得你借鉴.还有总的来说你和我在作文上的毛病是一样的，句式太单一了，长短句也用的不好,作文应该长短句搭配起来写的,呵呵，就这么多了，大家一起努力吧~
也不知道我改的对不，你看看吧,对了，还有个问题就是你这篇作文的时态有点混乱.注意一下吧~

kturyUID: 2274868

呵呵 恩我一会看看   打球去吧

micheal0626UID: 2368075

哥们，你怎么知道我晚上要打球呢?而且是天天的,我感觉我现在比职业的还职业了呢~呵呵~

kturyUID: 2274868

改天领教一下你出神入化的左手,:) :)

kturyUID: 2274868

波波... 呵呵 还挺好听的 按照你的建议和批改 我又改了一下 现在掐时间写就是容易出错.时态写了前面后面就忘了,下次写的时候我一定注意这点. 以前写总是缺少例子,这次找了个issue的例子用了用,感觉挺爽:loveliness: !


9.9  Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, people can choose various types of movie to watch because of the rapid development of mass media. Such as comical and entertaining movies or serious movies are all being popular to the public. Some people hold the opinion that the serious movie is better than the amusing one. I, however, cast doubt on that point, I prefer amusing movies.

To the beginning with, amusing movies bring a lot of benefits to me. First, the relaxation, offered by the talent actors' and actresses’ enthralling representations and excellent performances skills, that helps me relax the pressure from the work and study. For example, Mr. Bean always played funny activities and amazing behaviors, which make me laugh. Laughing is the best way to reduce the blue and upset moods. Second, making friends with the people who share the same love for amusing movies is a good thing. We can get a little together and we talk, discuss and laugh. All these make my life more fun. Take the Apple Pie's movie party as an example, many Apple pie's fans got together, we talked about the actors and the plots. Meanwhile I make many friends, and one of them even gave a watch as a souvenir. Thus the amusing movie definitely makes my life more colorful.

Secondly, I have learned many useful things from amusing movies. it is so easy to learn something through a happy and relaxed condition. Such as the Kongfu Pander, the pander's father said: if you want something to be special, just think that it is special. This word means that if one wants to be succeeded, he/she should be full of confidence. It is important to realize this point because of the confidence as a requirement demanded in the career. Furthermore, after watched the Fight Club, I changed the prime opinion about life and I deeply understood the importance of optimism.

Last, serious moves, admittedly, reflect some social problems. The function of the movies can be denoted as “expressionism”—the directors’ and actors’ use of a medium to express unique passion and insight. The typical instance is The Last Miner, dark and somber, sometimes cured, these early works evidence Mr. lee’s intense desire to express the misery and poverty of humanity as he saw it among the miners in ShanXi province. Also serious movies which content crime senses, violence, and sex, clearly show the current social problems. These problems make people to retrospect and correct their behaviors. Nevertheless, reflecting social problems is not only the character bore by serious movies. We also can see the amusing movies discuss these social problems via another way.

To sum up, from different people views, it is hard to say serious movies and amusing movies which one is better. But from my point of view, I receive a lot of benefits from amusing movies. Thus I think the amusing style out weight serious style.