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It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor （06.12.16 & 08.1.5）

people without friends are like flowers without sunshine, while friends without sense of humor is like fish without water. A majority of people hold the opinion that we had better make friends with intelligent people than with a humorous friends, for smart person will make us learn more skills from them and inspire us thought profoundly. Contrary to the opinion of numerous people, is my heartfelt
agreement with the idea that make friends with people who have a sense of humor is indispensable.


It is goes without saying that we saty with a humorous person, who will bring a great amount of enjoyment and rapture. They even can courage us in some special manner. we can take a glance at a common example, my intimate, Mark who is fill with humorous cells at every pore and I always willing to accompanying with him due to he can make me forget diverse troubles and tedious trivias by his homorous talent. Like last time, I was falling to a chemistry examination and felt so depressed. while nothing was taking to me , he just imitated as a duck and were voicing: brave birds! You can get achievement if you stick on flying. With his interesting encouragement, I as rebirth and obtain new couragement in my chemistry course. In short, I am fortunate have a hormous friends as Mark, my life is full of sunshine and never have depression.


Another point worthy mentioning is a friend with the sense of humor is just express that who with a intelligence ability. As we know, pople who have a amusement capacity reveals they have a agile brain to get to know knowledge in various areas. Virtually, while humorous people make others laughing invariably is unconsciously, the gift that is they innately endowed with. They could easy translate all the problems or some boring things into a light-hearted manner and always construct enjoyable atmosphere by their expceptional intelligence. It is no exaggerating to say that friends with sense of humor equals with even more intellgence.

considerable though the advantages of make friends with interesting people enjoy are, it doesn't mean we can live under the illusion that make friends with intelligent people have nothing to us, if their wise thought and deal with things ability are taken into consideration. To some extent, make friends with intelligent people might be also bring some benefits to us.

Though there may be one or two merits of intelligent friends, i believe that the benefits from make friends with sense of humor epople is more obvious, for pradise is just a place where we can get on with humorous friends eternal.

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people without friends are like flowers without sunshine(此句可删除）, while friends without sense of humor is like fish without water（你想表达的人如果没有幽默感的朋友就鱼离开了水吧？People without friends who have sense of humor is like fish without water此句已经体现出你的观点了）. A majority of people hold the opinion that we had better make friends with intelligent people than with a humorous friends, for smart person will make us learn more skills （for smart person spur us to learn more skills) from them (去掉from them)and inspire us thought (动词不定式 to ponder) profoundly. Contrary to the opinion of numerous people, is my heartfelt$ k& Y- T6 R/ x9 Z3 @. }
agreement with the idea that make friends with people who have a sense of humor is indispensable.(本文所论证的是重要性，不是必须性）
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It is goes without saying that we saty（saty?) with a humorous person, who will bring a great amount of enjoyment and rapture. They even can courage us in some special manner. we can take a glance at a common example, my intimate, Mark who is fill(filled) with humorous cells at every pore and I always willing to accompanying(accompany) with him due to （due to=because of 后接名词或名词短语,直接用because)he can make me forget diverse(diverse褒义词，numerous) troubles and tedious trivias by his homorous talent(i invariably willing to accompany with my intimate Mark who is filled with humorous cells at every pore because he managed to make me forget numerous troubles and tedious trivias) Like last time, I was falling to a chemistry examination (I failed a test in chemistry)and felt so depressed. while nothing was taking to me (改成to my surprise, he just imitated as a duck and were voicing(he just imitated duck's voice and said): brave birds! You can get achievement if you stick on(stick on没有坚持的意思 stick to) flying. With his interesting(kindly) encouragement, I as rebirth and obtain new couragement(I became confident) in my chemistry course. In short,I am fortunate have a hormous friends as Mark, my life is full of sunshine and never have depression.(Fortunately,my humorous friend as Mark lead to fulfillment of my life which is full of sunshine.)
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Another point worthy mentioning is a friend with the sense of humor is just express that who with a intelligence ability(上句两个动词有歧义 a friend with the sense of humor frequently have association with intelligence.. As we know, pople(Those) who have a amusement capacity reveals they have a(an) agile brain(mind) to get to know(apply) knowledge in(to) various areas. Virtually, while humorous people make others laughing(laugh) invariably is unconsciously(be后接形容词或名词）, the gift that is they innately endowed with（Virtually,the gift which humorous people unconsciously make others laugh is innately endowed with). They could easy(unexpectedly) translate(translate可以这样用吗？） all the problems or some boring things into a light-hearted manner（加to deal with) and always construct(construct是建筑 建设，构造字句的意思) enjoyable (creat a friendly)atmosphere by their expceptional intelligence. It is no exaggerating to say that friends with sense of humor equals with even more (that of)intellgence.
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considerable though the advantages of make friends with interesting people enjoy are（这句不懂）, it doesn't mean we can live under the illusion that make friends with intelligent people have nothing to us, if their wise thought and deal with things ability（bright thought and the ability of coping with complicated situation are taken into consideration. To some extent, make friends with intelligent people might be also bring some benefits to us.. @) b& j; v9 [+ V3 B- J
Though there may be one or two merits of intelligent friends, i believe that the benefits from make friends with sense of humor epople is more obvious, for pradise is just a place where we can get on with humorous friends eternal
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