【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 第五次作业by 梦灵草】

梦灵草UID: 2600629

Do you agree or disagree, technology make people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.

Currently, when it comes to the influence of technology, people’s opinions are divergent and distinctive on such a controversial issue. A large majority of people hold the insight that the development of technology is creating more complicated modern lives, in that it will result in people’s lives busier than before. However, I firmly-held viewpoint is that the advancement of science and technology has in turn brought about our lives simpler.

The advance in science and technology will definitely bring about much convenience and entertainment in life such as in terms of eating, lodging and traveling. It is many facilities like running water system, the power of electricity system, coupled with traffic system that make the people’s lives simpler. Apart from the fundament facilities for life, the advancement of technology is also able to support some other resources, for instance, inventions like computer and Internet. Depend upon the web technology, information are available the people who surf in the Internet.

The advance in science and technology will considerately take the people in work and study simpler. In the past, we have to find the data and information in the library. Nowadays, It is certainly more convenient to sit at a place in which there exists a computer that link the Internet and work on the computer, such as programmer who bring a notebook and write down the program. Needless to say, It is the application of science and technology that reduce people’s work hour.

However, the more convenient lives we have, the more complicated the technology we use. Automobiles, fearful to say, play a vital role in the daily life, by contrast technology are complex in automobile industry.

Based upon the above listed evidence of the issue discussed here I may safely and confidently restate viewpoint that science and technology make people’s lives simper. There is no denying the fact that the science and technology shall keep progressing, yet the point which matters is the people’s attitude toward it and their way of utilizing it.

zhongguowutongUID: 2250051

Currently, when it comes to the influence of technology, people’s opinions are divergent and distinctive on such a controversial issue. A large majority of people hold the insight that the development of technology is creating more complicated modern lives, in that it will result in people’s lives busier than before. However, I firmly-held viewpoint is that the advancement of science and technology has in turn brought about （删）our lives simpler.% J2 `9 I2 [# d4 P' B+ T, O5 s
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The advance in science and technology will definitely bring about much convenience and entertainment in life such as （删）in terms of eating, lodging and traveling. It is many facilities like running water system, the power of electricity system, coupled with traffic system that make the people’s lives simpler. Apart from the fundament facilities for life, the advancement of technology is also able to support some other resources, for instance, inventions like computer and Internet. Depend upon the web technology, information are available (添)to the people who surf in the Internet.; P. p/ G- i1 ^" y1 X; e

# H) K9 d; Y  Y. v0 f; EThe advance in science and technology will considerately（considerably）take the people in work and study simpler. In the past, we have to find the data and information in the library. Nowadays, It is certainly more convenient to sit at a place in which there exists（删）a computer that link the Internet and work on the computer, such as programmer who bring a notebook and write down the program. Needless to say, It is the application of science and technology that reduce people’s work hours. 7 |; w/ \( U& w) ?

& ^4 t3 M0 d# P. JHowever, the more convenient lives we have, the more complicated the technology we use. Automobiles, fearful to say, play a vital role in the （删）daily life,by(In) contrast, technology are complex in automobile industry.
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6 w: V9 }& i7 p6 {( HBased upon the above（删） listed evidence(添)aboveof the issue discussed here I may safely and confidently restate viewpoint（删） that science and technology make people’s lives simper(simpler). There is no denying（no one can deny）
the fact that the science and technology shall keep progressing(going forward), yet the point which matters(what matters)
is the people’s attitude toward (添)to it and their way of utilizing(建议：using) it.
建议：
1．“there be”和“It be”句型适当少用
2. 冗长累赘的词和短语建议少用，可适当参看native speaker’s essay 或OG
Shining sentence:
Currently, when it comes to the influence of technology, people’s opinions are divergent and distinctive on such a controversial issue.