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gree or disagree: The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

Along with the rapidly economic development, the number of tourists is increasing in recent decades. Some people claim that traveling by themselves would be a better way to enjoy the experience of traveling. As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that leading by a tour guide is the best way to travel for following reasons.

For people who want to adopt a convenient and safety traveling, it is wise for them to join in a group led by a tour guide. With a tour guide, tourist does not need to worry about the transportation, meals, and hotel and so on, for all these things are perfectly arranged by the tour guide. The only thing that the tourists need to do is enjoying the scenery and happiness during the travel. The energy and time that tourists who travel by themselves, have to used to think about transportation, meals, and hotel, can used to enjoy the happiness and the scenery during the travel when people travel in a group toured by a tour guide. What is more, an investigation shows that people traveling in a group with a tour guide will be safer than those traveling by themselves. Tour guide is more familiar with the conditions of interest places and have more experiences in traveling, so that they can give valuable suggestions to tourists to keep safe. And in most cases people travel by themselves often in smaller groups than that of a group led by tour guide. The evildoers are more likely to attacked people who are alone or in small groups. So it is safer for people to travel in a group led by tour guide.

Traveling in a group led by tour guide, tourists can enjoy a happier traveling experience. The interpretation of interest places made by tour guide will spark tourists’ great interest. And they can enjoy the histories and stories related to the interest places they are seeing. Such interpretation is often as interest as, if not more than is the scenery in the tourist attraction.

Besides, traveling in a group led by tour guide will be more economic for tourists. It looks as if it is more expensive to traveling in a group led by tour guide for tourist has to pay for the tour guide and the agency. But people seem to fail to take in to account the fact that the costs they spend on transportation, meals, hotel, and even the tickets of interest places are greatly discounted when done by tour agency. Therefore, traveling in a group led by tour guide actually saves money.

From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that joining in a group led by tour guide is the best way to travel, for it brings more happiness, more security, and even saves money. Traveling is a matter of happiness—a matter few people would like to ignore it. But people should not only consider the happiness of traveling, safety and even costs are also should be taken into account.

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From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although traveling by oneself indeed enjoy many obvious advantages such as freedom, its disadvantages should not be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is unwise for people to risk their lives and waste more money to travel by them instead of in a group led by tour guide.

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gree or disagree: The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

Along with the rapidly economic development, the number of tourists is increasing in recent decades. Some people claim that traveling by themselves would be a better way to enjoy the experience of traveling. As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that leading by a tour guide is the best way to travel for following reasons.
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