【Dark_Tournament 小组第7次作业】by tanyangbj

tanyangbjUID: 2601443

Recently, people only do what they want to do rather than they should do. It is amazing that several years ago this phenomenon is not exist and it has loomed up in a incredible extent. I think people in these behaviors have an irresponsible attitude to themselves and I do not approve that. So my opinion is negative to the thought of doing something they like----- that is the doing something they should do.
The main reason for I advocate the opinion which prevent people from their irresponsible behaviors is that: people should think about their future when they are young, and endeavor to get the targets and dreams by trying their best. What is more, only by do something they should do in the period of learning or working, can they accommodate the skills which can make their future more comfortable. Moving on to a wider theme, I strongly admit a statement that: “do some thing you need, do something indeed.” This tells us that: man needs some skills to maintain his family, and make their family happy. For an instance, my friend—Chen, graduates from a college several years ago. When he found a job, he realized that no one would hire you if you have not any skills. In that condition, he merely found a job which helps some enterprises to deliver the company instructions for a instead. Now, he has learned some technique in the computer and finally got a great job in an IT corporation.
Another essential factor that people should try their best to do something they should do is the responsibility a common people should embrace in the society. No one can deny that we live in a whole family— the human society, and we need to make some contributions to the society that accommodate the place to everyone in the world. Obviously, take your own business and do it best is a nice method to show your ability in helping the society in looming. History is replete with evidences to demonstrate that. 80% fortune in world is created by the educational people, especially the skilled workers. 94.3% beggars are people in the young did not learn some skills. That absolutely prove a truth that you should do something you need do, and by this way you can get a brighten future.
Weighting the pros and cons in whether people do something they should do, the conclusion is apparent concise, that is you must to do something you should do, even if the awkward or gloomy you would face, but for a long period, it is beneficial to your development.

qing200UID: 2507993

Recently, people only do what they want to do rather than they should do. It is amazing that several years ago this phenomenon is(过去时was) not exist (exist 是动词，应该did not exist)and it has loomed up in a incredible extent. I think people in these behaviors have an irresponsible attitude to themselves and I do not approve that. So my opinion is negative to the thought of doing something they like----- that is the doing something they should do.
' M4 S- `  U- I" P3 K% qThe main reason for I advocate the opinion which prevent people from their irresponsible behaviors is that: people should think about their future when they are young, and endeavor to get the targets and dreams by trying their best. What is more, only by doing something they should do in the period of learning or working, can they accommodate the skills which can make their future more comfortable. Moving on to a wider theme, I strongly admit a statement that: “do some thing you need, do something indeed.” This tells us that: man needs some skills to maintain his family, and make their family happy. For an instance, my friend—Chen, graduates from a college several years ago. When he found a job, he realized that no one would hire you if you have not any skills这里个第二人称似乎有点怪，no one would hire a people who does not have any skills. In that condition, he merely found a job which helps some enterprises to deliver the company instructions (删for a) instead. Now, he has learned some technique in the computer and finally got a great job in an IT corporation.
- H& C/ g4 r4 w0 m# b' o/ C( mAnother essential factor that people should try their best to do something they should do is the responsibility a common people should embrace in the society. No one can deny that we live in a whole family— the human society, and we need to make some contributions to the society that accommodate the place to everyone in the world. Obviously, take your own business and do it best is a nice method to show your ability in helping the society in looming. History is replete with evidences to demonstrate that. 80% fortune in world is created by the educational people, especially the skilled workers. 94.3% beggars are people in the young did not learn some skills. That absolutely prove a truth that you should do something you need do, and by this way you can get a brighten future.
+ \4 u9 E8 n8 f" k( hWeighting the pros and cons in whether people do something they should do, the conclusion is apparent concise, that is you must to do something you should do, even if the awkward or gloomy you would face, but for a long period, it is beneficial to your development这个结尾不是在回答题目的同意还是不同意，就是说你是表达自己的观点而不是支持或反对那个观点，这似乎不太合题意，个人观点，参考。

整篇文章不错，
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neozhongnlUID: 2448721

Recently, people only do what they want to do rather than they should do. It is amazing that several years ago this phenomenon is（DID） not exist and（BUT） it has loomed up in a incredible extent. I think people in these behaviors have an irresponsible attitude to themselves and I do not approve that. So my opinion is negative to the thought of doing something they like----- that is the doing something they should do（你的观点似乎SHIFT FROM了主题）.

The main reason for I（MY） advocate（ING） the opinion which prevent people from their irresponsible behaviors is that: people should think about their future when they are young, and endeavor to get the targets and dreams by trying their best. What is more, only by do something they should do in the period of learning or working, can they accommodate the skills which can make their future more comfortable. Moving on to a wider theme, I strongly admit a statement that: “do some thing you need, do something indeed.” This tells us that: man needs some skills to maintain his family, and make their family happy. For an instance, my friend—Chen, graduates from a college several years ago. When he found a job, he realized that no one would hire you if you have not any skills. In that condition, he merely found a job which helps some enterprises to deliver the company instructions for a instead. Now, he has learned some technique in the computer and finally got a great job in an IT corporation.

Another essential factor that people should try their best to do something they should do is the responsibility a common people should embrace in the society. No one can deny that we live in a whole family— the human society, and we need to make some contributions to the society that accommodate the place to everyone in the world. Obviously, take your own business and do it best is a nice method to show your ability in helping the society in looming. History is replete with evidences to demonstrate that. 80% fortune in world is created by the educational people, especially the skilled workers. 94.3% beggars are people in the young did not learn some skills. That absolutely prove a truth that you should do something you need do, and by this way you can get a brighten future.

Weighting the pros and cons in whether people do something they should do, the conclusion is apparent concise, that is you must to do something you should do, even if the awkward or gloomy you would face, but for a long period, it is beneficial to your development

（所选的叙述主题和题目给的主题相差太大，可能不大好

熊爱棒棒糖UID: 2598861

Recently, people only do what they want to do rather than they should do. It is amazing that several years ago this phenomenon is(was) not exist(existed) and it has loomed up in a incredible extent(这里的连接词不是and,两个之间的内容是转折关系). I think people in these behaviors have an irresponsible attitude to themselves and I do not approve that. So my opinion is negative to the thought of doing something they like----- that is the doing something they should do.
, O) O* ~7 u9 b- [2 QThe main reason for I advocate the opinion which prevent people from their irresponsible behaviors is that: people should think about their future when they are young, and endeavor to get the targets and dreams by trying their best. What is more, only by do something they should do in the period of learning or working, can they（they can） accommodate the skills which can make their future more comfortable. Moving on to a wider theme, I strongly admit a statement(believe) that: “do some thing you need, do something indeed.” This tells us that: man needs some skills to maintain his family, and make their family happy. For an instance, my friend—Chen, graduates(graduated) from a college several years ago. When he found a job, he realized that no one would hire you if you have not any skills. In that condition, he merely found a job which helps（helped） some enterprises to deliver the company instructions for a instead(for temporary). Now, he has learned some technique in the computer(he has learned some computer technique) and finally got a great job in an IT corporation.
: G' x; ^+ U, G/ NAnother essential factor that people should try their best to do something they should do is the responsibility a common people should embrace in the society. No one can deny that we live in a whole family— the human society, and we need to make some contributions to the society that（which） accommodate（单复数） the place to everyone in the world. Obviously, （主语缺少）take your own business and do it best is a nice method to show your ability in helping the society in looming. History is replete with evidences to demonstrate that. 80% fortune in world is created by the educational people, especially the skilled workers. 94.3% beggars are people in the young did not learn some skills. That absolutely prove a truth that you should do something you need do, and by this way you can get a brighten future.（同样，这里的连接词不是and,你的逻辑关系的转折）
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