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ericsong1125UID: 2493162

It is more important to use land for human need than to save land for endangered animals

As the fast social development and increasing of population, we have been facing amount of problems. Within those, limited land resource should be more severe. Public opinions towards it could be divided into two parts: land used for human need and for saving endangered animals. In my point of view, I don't think that land is more important for human than animals. Actually, it should be used reasonably.

Land is basic of human development. Thousands of years of human developments are all based on land using. Land plays a fundamental and basic role in people's living, country's expansion and any kinds of wars. Land brings to human not only its available space but also sorts of resources it contains. Facing overly increasing of population and overload of cities, efficiency of exploration land becomes desiderating to be solved. Land exploration must be matched with economic and social development otherwise our world would be bogged into worse circle and threaten human living. Even though, those countries and regions which are lack of land resource do not adapt methods could be harm to natural environment. Macao builds its runway of airport on the land which made by padding stones into sea; Tokyo explores its underground resources to abate overload of city construction. Therefore, Land should be used reasonably although human need is important.

Saving land for natural environment is to keep our world more harmony. Nature provides not only animals and plants, but also a suitable environment for human living and using. The existence of endangered animals is a kind of performance of biologic diversity which keeps the balance of natural environment. If gradually increasing more endangered animals and plants distinct, it would be a calamity for human. Scientific research statics show that millions of species distinct in last one hundred years which have greatly changed food chain and made single specie more vulnerable; if it can not be controlled, human would be distinct from the earth. Thus, using land for endangered animals is an indispensable way to prolong the human living.

To solve these problems, people should take more intelligence for making a suitable and reasonable decision which could satisfying human need and would not be harm to nature. Appropriate method in using land could be the correct solution.

holdingUID: 2285054

As the fast social development and increasing of population, we have been facing amount of problems. Within those, limited land resource should be more severe. Public opinions towards it could be divided into two parts: land used for human need and for saving endangered animals. In my point of view, I don't think that land is more important for human than animals. Actually, it should be used reasonably.

Land is basic of human development. Thousands of years of human developments are all based on land using. Land plays a fundamental and basic role in people's living, country's expansion and any kinds of wars. Land brings to human not only its available space but also sorts of resources it contains. Facing overly increasing of population and overload of cities, efficiency of exploration land becomes desiderating to be solved. Land exploration must be matched with economic and social development otherwise our world would be bogged into worse circle and threaten human living. Even though, those countries and regions which are lack of land resource do not adapt methods could be harm to natural environment. Macao builds its runway of airport on the land which made by padding stones into sea; Tokyo explores its underground resources to abate overload of city construction. Therefore, Land should be used reasonably although human need is important. （这一段的论述并没有提到土地之于动物之间的关系，虽然段落本身很出色，但我觉得应该缩小这段所占比例，再起一段论述动物生存和土地之间的关系，这样看着文章更加协调，更加贴题）

Saving land for natural environment is to keep our world more harmony. Nature provides not only animals and plants, but also a suitable environment for human living and using. The existence of endangered animals is a kind of performance of biologic diversity which keeps the balance of natural environment. If gradually increasing more endangered animals and plants distinct, it would be a calamity for human. Scientific research statics show that millions of species distinct in last one hundred years which have greatly changed food chain and made single specie more vulnerable; if it can not be controlled, human would be distinct from the earth. Thus, using land for endangered animals is an indispensable way to prolong the human living. (个人感觉这一段的说理并不是很清楚，可以从生物多样性的角度来论述保护濒危动物对人类生活的影响)

To solve these problems, people should take more intelligence for making a suitable and reasonable decision which could satisfying human need and would not be harm to nature. Appropriate method in using land could be the correct solution.

文章整体没有什么毛病，水平有限也提不出很好的建议，只是就大的论述上提出一些自己的看法
共勉

ericsong1125UID: 2493162

谢谢，评价的很中肯

bnu2006UID: 2202466

我也觉得这样