【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组熊爱棒棒糖的 第11次作业】

熊爱棒棒糖UID: 2598861

It is better to use ones’ knowledge and experience to solve the problems than ask others for advice."

Following the industrial revolution, our lives turn out to be more complex gradually. We have to solve the problems of technologies in the process of production as well as those happen in our social lives. Could we ask others for advice or rely on ourselves? For me, I would like to use my knowledge and experience rather than asking others for advice.

Firstly, others’ advices on your problem may not be perfectly suitable for your particular situation. Taking an example happened around me two years ago, a friend lives in my neighborhood once asked me for an advice of her future learning. Her parents found that the major in the public relationship would be popular and it would be easy for her to find jobs. So they advised her to choose the public relation as her major in the university. However, she was not interested in this major at all because her personality is introversion and not good at communication. She just wanted to be a painter in the future. Unfortunately, she gave up and took her parents’ advice. It is said that she failed to pass her final examinations. Obviously, if she had insisted to make decision according to her own experiences but not to ask the advices which influenced her life greatly, she
could have been better now.


Secondly, the knowledge we keep
in our mind would accumulate if we choose to rely on ourselves. According to what we have discussed above, it is reliable for us to trust ourselves. When we meet the problems in the work, we need first to try to solve the problem on ourselves rather than relying on others’ help or suggestions without any effort of our own. With constantly learning, I believe, we could become professionals in the end.
Admittedly, the knowledge and experience we have learned and acquired should not be enough to solve everything we have come across in our lives. It is necessary for us to modestly ask methods to solve problems. However, whenever we ask others for methods, we should make sure that these problems we could not settled by ourselves. What’s more, the skeptical spirits to the answers should be kept and make sure that the answers provided by others are right.
In a word, even though others would be prior to us in the different ranges of knowledge, we should try our best to solve the problems by ourselves. The concerned books would help us to settle the problems, which would improve our abilities and experience after researching them.

soilinkinUID: 2163892

Following the industrial revolution, our lives turn out to be more complex gradually. We have to solve the problems of technologies in the process of production as well as those happen in our social lives. Could we ask others for advice or rely on ourselves? For me, I would like to use my knowledge and experience rather than asking others for advice.

Firstly, others’ advices on your problem may not be perfectly suitable for your particular situation. Taking an example happened around me two years ago,（taking what happened around me two years ago for example） a friend lives(lived) in my neighborhood once asked me for an advice of(about) her future learning. Her parents found that the major in the public relationship would be popular and it would be easy for her to find jobs. So they advised her to choose the public relation as her major in the university. However, she was not interested in this major at all because her personality is introversion and not good at communication. She just wanted to be a painter in the future. Unfortunately, she gave up and took her parents’ advice. It is said that she failed to pass her final examinations. Obviously, if she had insisted to make decision according to her own experiences but not to ask the advices which influenced her life greatly, she could have been better now.

Secondly, the knowledge we keep in our mind would accumulate if we choose to rely on ourselves. According to what we have discussed above, it is reliable for us to trust ourselves. When we meet the problems in the work, we need first(firstly) to try to solve the problem on ourselves rather than relying on others’ help or suggestions without any effort of our own. With constantly learning, I believe, we could become professionals in the end.

Admittedly, the knowledge and experience we have learned and acquired should not be enough to solve everything we have come across in our lives. It is necessary for us to modestly ask (for) methods to solve problems. However, whenever we ask others for methods, we should make sure that these problems we could not settled by ourselves. What’s more, the skeptical spirits to the answers should be kept and make sure that the answers provided by others are right.

In a word, even though others would be prior to us in the different ranges of knowledge, we should try our best to solve the problems by ourselves. The concerned books would help us to settle the problems, which would improve our abilities and experience after researching them.

文章基本没什么问题...如果能有几句出彩的句子就完美了...

jenniferwyyUID: 2534935

Following the industrial revolution, our lives turn out to be more complex gradually. We have to solve the problems of technologies in the process of production as well as those happen in our social lives.（什么意思啊LZ偶没有看明白撒） Could we ask others for advice or rely on ourselves? For me, I would like to use my knowledge and experience rather than asking others for advice.  n  F3 g- E$ _/ ]
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Firstly, others’ advices on your problem may not be perfectly suitable for your particular situation. Taking an example happened around me two years ago, a friend lives in my neighborhood， once asked me for an advice of her future learning. Her parents found that the major in the public relationship would be popular and it would be easy for her to find jobs. So they advised her to choose the public relation as her major in the university. However, she was not interested in this major at all because her personality is introversion（introversed这个是adj） and not good at communication. She just wanted to be a painter in the future. Unfortunately, she gave up and took her parents’ advice. It is said that she failed to pass her final examinations. Obviously, if she had insisted to make decision according to her own experiences but not to ask the advices which influenced her life greatly, she1 S. w: |. E8 Lcould have been better now. 3 C* @2 z5 N: R3 f9 ~

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Secondly, the knowledge we keep in our mind would(be) accumulated if we choose to rely on ourselves. According to what we have discussed above, it is reliable for us to trust ourselves. When we meet the problems in the work, we need first to try to solve the problem on ourselves rather than relying on others’ help or suggestions without any effort of our own. With constantly learning, I believe, we could become professionals in the end.(这句有点用的过头了难道是专业人士？？)
Admittedly, the knowledge and experience we have learned and acquired should not be（isn’t） enough to solve everything we have come across in our lives. It is necessary for us to modestly ask(other people for advice) methods to solve problems. However, whenever we ask others for methods, we should make sure that these problems we could not settled by ourselves. What’s more, the skeptical spirits to the answers should be kept and make sure that the answers provided by others are right.
In a word, even though others would be prior to us in the different ranges of knowledge, we should try our best to solve the problems by ourselves. The concerned books would help us to settle the problems, which would improve our abilities and experience after researching them.
我是两方面都写的 但是有童鞋介意我不要这么些 LZ怎么看来 我觉有有时候两方面都写方便