Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组winterscui的 第11次作业

winterscuiUID: 2611266

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?

Learning through personal experience andlearning through advice of others are two major paths that pave the way forfinal fulfillment, the former depend on our own brain and the later depend onthe wisdom of others. When you encounter a problem, making it clear that theadvantages and disadvantages of the situation is necessary, and then you canconsider which path you want to choose.

At times, when one is stuck in a question,which others never meet, the only method to solve it is using his own knowledgeand experience, just like what happened to Einstein, standing at the leadingedge of Physics, few people could understand his theory and on one can give himadvice, so he had to use his brain to solve his question. As common people, wealso have some problem to face by ourselves, such as how to get along withother people, how to realistically judge the ability of yourself, and how to understandwho you are. Advice from relatives and friends would help you often, but if youaspire to climb on the top of certain field, learning individually is required.

Asking the advice of others instead of getting everything done by oneself isusually effective and efficiency, as a single thought of someone is far lessshining compare with the wisdom of group. Forexample, I am poor at basketball formally,fortunately, friends shared with me many experiences, which finger me the rightway to enjoy this sport and then my skill of basketball improved rapidly. Inthe period of knowledge explosion, advice could make our learning in the area which we are unfamiliar with quickly and easily.

Based on the above argument, it is safe to draw the conclusion that whether you solve problem byusing your own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice isdepending on the environment you are in. Bothways work. With the advice from relatives and friends, pretty soon, you willhave more experience of your own.

babffUID: 2539532

Learning through personal experience andlearning through advice of others are two major paths that pave the way forfinal fulfillment, the former depend on our own brain and the later depend onthe wisdom of others. When you encounter a problem, making it clear that theadvantages and disadvantages of the situation is necessary(making the advantages and disadvantages of the situation clear is necessary), and then you canconsider (can make a decision that)which path you want to choose.(感觉第一段套模板套的太僵硬了)

At times, when one is stuck in（on） a question,which others never meet, the only method to solve it is using his own knowledgeand experience, just like what happened to Einstein, standing at the leadingedge(???) of Physics, few people could understand his theory and on(no) one can give himadvice, so he had to use his brain to solve his question. As common people, wealso have some problem to face by ourselves, such as how to get along withother people, how to realistically judge the ability of yourself, and how to understandwho you are. Advice from relatives and friends would help you often, but if youaspire to climb on the top of certain field, learning individually is required." K0 I7 Z$ U0 k" M8 E

Asking the advice of(from) others instead of getting everything done by oneself isusually effective and efficiency(重复，没必要), as a single thought of someone is far lessshining compare with the wisdom of group. Forexample, I am poor at basketball formally,fortunately, friends shared with me many experiences, which finger me the rightway to enjoy this sport and then my skill of basketball（is） improved rapidly. Inthe period of knowledge explosion, advice could make our learning in the area which we are unfamiliar with quickly and easily.7 U! |8 q$ \2 R: X2 B
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Based on the above argument, it is safe to draw the conclusion that whether you solve problem byusing your own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice isdepending on the environment (that)you are in. Bothways work. With the advice from relatives and friends, pretty soon, you willhave more experience of your own.

tp_ningchenUID: 2610155

1# winterscui
Learning through personal experience andlearning through advice of others are two major paths that pave the way forfinal fulfillment, the former depend on our own brain and the later depend onthe wisdom of others. When you encounter a problem, making it clear that theadvantages and disadvantages of the situation is necessary, and then you canconsider which path you want to choose.

At times, when one is stuck（这不是被骗的意思吗？） in a question,which others never meet, the only method to solve it is using his own knowledge and experience, just like what happened to Einstein, standing at the leading edge of Physics, few people could understand his theory and on one can give him advice, so he had to use his brain to solve his question. As common people, we also have some problem to face by ourselves, such as how to get along withother people, how to realistically judge the ability of yourself, and how to understandwho you are. Advice from relatives and friends would help you often, but if you aspire to climb on the top of certain field, learning individually is required.
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Asking the advice of others instead of getting everything done by oneself isusually effective and efficiency, as a single thought of someone is far lessshining compare with the wisdom of group. Forexample, I am poor at basketball formally,fortunately, friends shared （with me） many experiences with me(这样是不是更流畅？）, which finger me the rightway to enjoy this sport and then my skill of basketball improved rapidly. Inthe period of knowledge explosion , advice could make our learning in the area which we are unfamiliar with quickly and easily.$ @% Z/ f. H* ?; h& h, A

Based on the above argument, it is safe to draw the conclusion that whether you solve problem byusing your own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice isdepending on the environment you are in. Bothways work. With the advice from relatives and friends, pretty soon, you willhave more experience of your own.
很好哦，只是是不是应该开头就把立场表明呢？