TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 奔跑蜗牛 第十一次作业

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第十一次作业
It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?(08.5.31)

When is comes to solving problems or making important decision, people like to seek advice from family or friends, because they believe that two minds are better than one. Though listing to the advice of family or friends can lead more benefits, from my personal alone, I prefer to solve questions or make decision alone instead or following others’ opinions.

It is true that we can learn something or handle problems without suffering by listening advice of trust and respect people. Besides, the perspectives which other people offer to you may shed some light on the situation and can help you weigh the positive and negative of the situation. Furthermore, a person learns a lesson for over 10 years, but he or she can convey this to another person only 10 minutes. Through other people’s experience can save a lot of time.

However, if we spend too much time to listening other people’s advice, we might loss our own aims or loss the confidence to deal with things independent. People use their own experience to convince that their perspectives are accurate; however, each person has his unique situation and knowledge background. If we simply to follow other people’s opinion instead of to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions, we may not achieve progress or even making the same mistake over and over again.

In addition, through personal experience and knowledge to handle problems can lead to direct result of our own action, and the consequence may be concrete and unforgettable. For instance, we can remember we totally messed up the practice course and kept that in mind until now, but forgot the instruction said the teacher. It demonstrates that though their experience and knowledge are rich and abundant, we should usually learn by ourselves because of concrete and unforgettable.

What is more, it is no harm to asking advice from others, but if we always ask advice from our friends, it may bring them bothers, it is not wise decision to do that.

I do not want to undervalue the importance of other people’s advice. In some situations, their opinions are helpful. However, I prefer to we should use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions, and their opinions are purely for consideration.

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When is comes to solving problems or making important decision, people like to（would like to,or,like doing) seek advice from family(families) or friends, because they believe that two minds are better than one. Though listing(listening) to the advice of family(families)
or friends can lead(give us)
more benefits, from my personal(这是个形容词，应该用名词）
alone, I prefer to solve questions（problems） or make decision alone instead or following others’ opinions.
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It is true that we can learn something or handle problems without suffering by listening to
advice of trust(reliable) and respect(noble) people. Besides, the perspectives which other people offer to you may shed some light on不错！
the situation and can help you weigh the positive and negative（加个名词，这两个都是形容词） of the situation. Furthermore, a person learns a lesson for over 10 years, but he or she can convey this to another person only 10 minutes. Through other people’s experience can save us a lot of time.) i" r- R! f4 _/ @8 }

However, if we spend too much time to listening(spend+动词ing)
other people’s advice, we might loss（lose) our own aims or loss the confidence to deal with things independently. People use their own experience to convince that their perspectives are accurate; however, each person has his unique situation and knowledge background. If we simply (to)删掉 follow other people’s opinion instead of to use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions, we may not achieve progress or even making（make,前面是may)
the same mistake over and over again.: y0 h  u  x/ l0 J0 n
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In addition, through personal experience and knowledge to handle problems can lead to direct result of our own action, and the consequence may be concrete and unforgettable. For instance, we can remember we totally messed up （with）
the practice course and kept that in mind until now(until now和现在有关，不能跟一般过去时一起）, but forgot the instruction said
(by) the teacher. It demonstrates that though their experience and knowledge are rich and abundant, we should usually learn by ourselves because of concrete and unforgettable(这两个都是形容词，换名词）.; \# F9 G: {1 z" Y% q4 g5 F( P
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What is more, it is no harm to asking（ask)
advice from others, but if we always ask advice from our friends, it may bring them bothers, it is not (a) wise decision to do that.
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I do not want to undervalue the importance of other people’s advice. In some situations, their opinions are helpful. However, I prefer to(prefer to do sth or prefer sth,放这里都不合适，用believe之类的就好了) we should use our own knowledge and experience to solve questions, and their opinions are purely for consideration.