TOEFL 4—6月-Dark_Tournament小组写作 ilovelxlx 第十一次作业

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TOEFL 4—6月-Dark_Tournament小组写作 ilovelxlx 第十一次作业(补交的)

It’s better to use ownknowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people foradvice?(08.5.31)


                                                                                                                   BY ilovelxlx

When people trapped into dellamas or making an important decision,they have the option to solve it alone or ask other people for help. The decision may be distinctive and depend on one’s personal attitude.Some of them work out of it by themselves in order to improve their ability to solve problems independently.In my opinion, I prefer to deal with it by asking for help.

First, an individual experience and knowledge may have a limited range. As normal individual, people more or less are lack of common senses in some realms.when we face problems in these fields which we are not fimilier with, asking an expert for help may be the most effective and efficient way to solve the problem.For example, as a high school student,I always collapse into exhaustion with all the difficulties in my homework, rather than think a math problem more than 2 hours, I find that asking my teacher or classmates a better way.So ask for help can save your time and get a more comprehensive answer.

What’s more , asking for help teaches you how to discuss and share ideas with others. Sometimes a student can’t solve an academic problem or do a research independently . However, a team may solve it with discussion and cooperation quickly. For example, excellent academic achievements are work out with groups, such as the discovery of the structure of DNA,Warton and Crick helps and gets abundent information from each other. At the same time , you make a bunch of friends. As a result, Asking for help improve your ability of teamwork.

At last, it could increase your knowledge more quickly than solve a problem alone. Today we live in a world that knowledge is increasing by multiplying and becomes more and more specialized.It’s almost impossible for us study in all realms so asking for help becomes one ofthe neccissary skills for us to inrich our knowledge. Victor Hugo,one of thegreatest French writer,said : In the eyes of youth we see a flame, but in theeyes of the aged we see light. It says old people can tell us truth and teaches how to be wiser than before if we ask them when we trapped into dellamas.

In one conclusion,Asking for help not only made a more effective and efficient way to solve aproblem, but also teach us how to share ideas with other and expand ourknowledge. It’s deniable that in a board sense it always lead us to success.
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希望大家多多指教,我是菜鸟啊

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

为什么没有人帮我改呢?:mad:

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

晚交的人帮我改下吧 路过有空也帮改下 谢谢啊

风中随想UID: 2517785

When people are trapped into dellamas or making an important decision,they have the option to solve it alone or ask other people for help. The decision may be distinctive and depends on one’s personal attitude.Some of them work it out by themselves in order to improve their ability to solve problems independently.In my opinion, I prefer to deal with it by asking for help.

First, an individual experience and knowledge may have a limited range. As a normal individual, people more or less are (in) lack of common senses in some realms.when we face problems in these fields which we are not fimilier with, asking an expert for help may be the most effective and efficient way to solve the problem.For example, as a high school student,I always collapse into exhaustion with all the difficulties in my homework, 这里应该是句号，因为这是两个独立的句子rather than think a math problem more than 2 hours, I find that asking my teacher or classmates a better way.So ask for help can save your time and get a more comprehensive answer.

What’s more , asking for help teaches you how to discuss and share ideas with others. Sometimes a student can’t solve an academic problem or do a research independently . However, a team may solve it with discussion and cooperation quickly. For example, excellent academic achievements are work out with groups, such as the discovery of the structure of DNA,Warton and Crick helps and gets abundent information from each other. At the same time , you make a bunch of friends. As a result, Asking for help improve your ability of teamwork.

At last, it could increase your knowledge more quickly than solve a problem alone. Today we live in a world that knowledge is increasing by multiplying and becomes more and more specialized.It’s almost impossible for us study in all realms逗号so asking for help becomes one of the neccissary skills for us to inrich our knowledge. Victor Hugo,one of the greatest French writer,said : In the eyes of youth we see a flame, but in the eyes of the aged we see light. It says old people can tell us truth and teaches how to be wiser than before if we ask them when we trapped into dellamas.

In one(去掉one) conclusion,Asking for help not only made a more effective and efficient way to solve a problem, but also teach us how to share ideas with other加s and expand ourknowledge. It’s deniable that in a board sense it always lead us to success.

风中随想UID: 2517785

可能你太紧张了所以有些错的单词语法，有些句子貌似说的不很地道，中国味浓。。其他没有什么大问题吧。不错！我觉得你多练练能提高很多哦！当局者迷旁观者清，交换着看看对双方很有帮助的！

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

好 谢谢啊

ilovelxlxUID: 2613222

那个是我记得好象是BE LACK OF STH,好象没有IN吧