〖TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组ZRTIBT的第十二次作业

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Along with the rapid development of our society, one of the controversial topics many people discuss about nowadays is that whether teacher should assign homework for students every day or not. When it refers to this subject people's opinions are divergent. Quite a few people are in favor of agreeing with this idea. They claim that it is teacher's duty to assign student's daily homework and correct them. However, the others state that after full day classes students are too tired to do extra homework. After careful deliberation in my mind, I undoubtedly reckon that teacher should assign homework for students every day. Here are numerous reasons why I advocated this idea; here I would explore only a few of the most significant reason.

First and foremost, the mean reason is that the daily homework can help students to review the new knowledge what they had learnt in class . To illustrate this there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: Every time before I do my daily homework, I looked back what I learn today day, then review the book and my notes again. The more times I read the book, the more deep I comprehend the knowledge. After that I regard my homework as a short quiz, to find out which question I did not understand well. This method of doing homework I become the first one in my class. It may be said without fear of exaggeration that homework plays a crucial role in the studying process. This example may explain why Confucius, the greatest philosophizer in ancient China, said that gain new insights through reviewing old materials.

Besides, teacher can acknowledge which part is difficult for students to understand through their homework. And adjust his/her teaching plan in time, to make sure he/she explain every confuse questions clearly and most of students absorbed the knowledge. For instance, when my Spanish teacher Ale correct our homework, he found us confound the word “pensar” and “querer”. Because when they translated in Chinese they have the same meaning. But they are used in totally different situation. Pensar means miss, querer means want. When Ale acknowledged this problem, in the following classes he focuses on the difference between synonyms. Now I can use the similar verbal in the right condition.

Last but not least, daily homework scores can be a part of final exam scores. To encourage students pay more attention to everyday homework, keep students study every day, not just working hard the day before the final exam. Daily homework can let students understand if we want achieved a great goal, we can cut it apart and accomplished it step by step.

Judging from the evidence offered, obviously, we can draw the conclusion that teacher should assign homework every day because daily homework have unchangeable status in the process of studying. It benefits both teachers and students.

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Along with the rapid development of our society, one of the controversial topics many people discuss about nowadays is that whether teacher should assign homework for students every day or not. When it refers to this subject people's opinions are divergent. Quite a few people are in favor of agreeing with this idea. They claim that it is teacher's duty to assign student's daily homework and correct them. However, the others state that after full day classes students are too tired to do extra homework. After careful deliberation in my mind, I undoubtedly reckon that teacher should assign homework for students every day. Here are numerous reasons why I advocated this idea; here I would explore only a few of the most significant reason.
是不是借鉴了模板呀，怎么写的那么标准

First and foremost, the mean reason is that the daily homework can help students to review the new knowledge what they had learnt in class . To illustrate this there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: Every time before I do(done) my daily homework, I looked back what I learn(learnt) today (day), then review(ed) the book and my notes again. The more times I read the book, the more deep I comprehend the knowledge. After that I regard my homework as a short quiz, to find out which question I did not understand well. This method of doing homework I become the first one（top one) in my class.(很奇怪，难道回家作业只有你一个人做你同学都不做的嘛？因为这个原因说你是班级第一有点牵强） It may be said without fear of exaggeration that homework plays a crucial role in the studying process. This example may explain why Confucius, the greatest philosophizer in ancient China, said that gain new insights through reviewing old materials.
这段上来就举出观点然后有了例子，结构不错，最后的引用很好，但讲事情的时候要注意时态一致

Besides, teacher can acknowledge which part is difficult for students to understand through their homework. And adjust his/her teaching plan in time, to make sure he/she explain every confuse questions clearly and most of students absorbed the knowledge. For instance, when my Spanish teacher Ale correct our homework, he found us confound the word “pensar” and “querer”. Because when they translated in Chinese they have the same meaning. But they are used in totally different situation. Pensar means miss, querer means want. When Ale acknowledged this problem, in the following classes he focuses on the difference between synonyms. Now I can use the similar verbal in the right condition.
这个写的不错，例子也很好
Last but not least, daily homework scores can be a part of final exam scores. To encourage students pay more attention to everyday homework, keep（ing) students study every day(这句话不是重复前一句嘛？）, not just working hard the day before the final exam. Daily homework can let students understand if we want achieved a great goal, we can cut it apart and accomplished it step by step.

总体来说还不错，但有些句子一看就是背着来的，这样感觉不是很好