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TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 ilovelxlx 第十二次作业

Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.


The controversy whether daily homework is necessary for students has been argued for so long since the schools have existed. In most cases students believe that only good home work is no home work. But it’s hard to imagine without daily homework how can we be sure that we have entirely understand the knowledge we’ve acquired? In my opinion, I think it’s necessary for students to have daily homework.

First, students will been given all kinds of classes, including mathematics, chemistry, history, physics, biology, geography, and the list will go on. According to Ebbinghaus’s theory of forgetting curve people will forget almost 70% we have learned in two days without review. So the homework provides a good opportunity for us to sure whether we’ve completely comprehend the knowledge we have learned. I also believe the old saying: practice makes perfect. Daily homework helps us to have a much deeper and more comprehensive impression about knowledge we’ve learned.

What’s more, it has been said in the Bible that human beings have the nature of sloth when they have born. if the teacher do not assign daily homework, I believe most children will not practice and review the knowledge by themselves, even some of them play computer games all nights after they back home. Students, especially young boys and girls, are lack of a kind of ability to well-plan their study and common senses of learning. As a result, without daily home work, eventually, they may fail the exam. So daily homework made students subconsciously review their knowledge.

At last, daily homework teaches us how to share ideas and solve a problem in teams. As a student, when I have some math problems I will have a discussion and share my ideas with my classmates to find a easier way to solve the problem. It improve the ability to teamwork. Teamwork becomes a more effective and efficient way to deal with all troubles as the development of the society.

In conclusion, daily homework is necessary for students at least for nowadays students. It helps students to have a deeper comprehension and lay a solid foundation for their future study, at the same time teaching them how to work as a team. Students will get benefits from it.
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为啥没人来呢?我是104楼

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The controversy whether daily homework is necessary for students has been argued for so long since the schools have existed. In most cases students believe that only (好像不要only比较通顺)good home work is no home work. But it’s hard to imagine without daily homework how can we be sure that we have entirely understand the knowledge we’ve acquired? In my opinion, I think it’s necessary for students to have daily homework.

First, students will been given all kinds of classes, including mathematics, chemistry, history, physics, biology, geography, and the list will go on. According to Ebbinghaus’s theory of forgetting curve people will forget almost 70% we have learned in two days without review. So the homework provides a good opportunity for us to sure whether (把whether改成that怎么样?)we’ve completely comprehend the knowledge we have learned. I also believe the old saying: practice makes perfect. Daily homework helps us to have a much deeper and more comprehensive impression about knowledge we’ve learned. 7 A9 V5 s$ |# {# O

What’s more, it has been said in the Bible that human beings have the nature of sloth when they have born. if the teacher do not assign daily homework, I believe most children will not practice and review the knowledge by themselves, even some of them play computer games all nights after they back home. Students, especially young boys and girls, are lack of a kind of ability to well-plan their study and common senses of learning. As a result, without daily home work, eventually, they may fail the exam. So daily homework made students subconsciously review their knowledge.

At last, daily homework teaches us how to share ideas and solve a problem in teams. As a student, when I have some math problems I will
would have a discussion and share my ideas with my classmates to find a easier way to solve the problem. It improve the ability to do
teamwork. Teamwork becomes a more effective and efficient way to deal with all troubles as the development of the society.

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In conclusion, daily homework is necessary for students at least for nowadays students. It helps students to have a deeper comprehension and lay a solid foundation for their future study, at the same time teaching(teach,与have并列) them how to work as a team
in a team. Students will get benefits from it.

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本帖最后由 lulufriend 于 2009-3-17 12:11 编辑

1# ilovelxlx

The controversy whether daily homework is necessary for students has been argued for so long since the schools have existed. In most cases students believe that only good(the best) home work is no home work(总觉得很怪). But it’s hard to imagine without daily homework how can(/) we can be(make) sure that we have entirely understand the knowledge we’ve acquired? In my opinion, I think it’s necessary for students to have daily homework.



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First, students will been(be) given all kinds of classes, including mathematics, chemistry, history, physics, biology, geography, and the list will go on(...). According to Ebbinghaus’s theory of forgetting curve, people will forget almost 70% we have learned in two days without review. So the homework provides a good opportunity for us to sure(assure) whether we’ve completely comprehend(ed) the knowledge we have(had) learned.(时态有点乱) I also believe the old saying: practice makes perfect. Daily homework helps us to have(grasp) a much deeper and more comprehensive impression about knowledge we’ve learned.



What’s more, it has been said in the Bible that human beings have the nature of sloth when they have born. If the teacher do(es) not assign daily homework, I believe most children will not practice and review the knowledge by themselves, even some of them play computer games all nights after they (get) back home. Students, especially young boys and girls, are lack of a kind of ability to well-plan their study and common senses of learning. As a result, without daily home work, eventually, they may fail the exam. So daily homework made students subconsciously review their knowledge.(可以做替换)
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At last, daily homework teaches us how to share ideas and solve a problem in teams. As a student, when I have some math problems I will have a discussion and share my ideas with my classmates to find a easier way to solve the problem. It improve(s) the ability to(of) teamwork. Teamwork becomes a more effective and efficient way to deal with all troubles as the development of the society.(其实我觉得这点很好啊~还可以有所展开~)9 i6 ~$ L% t: t% {
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In conclusion, daily homework is necessary for students at least for nowadays students. It helps students(them) to have a deeper comprehension and lay a solid foundation for their future study, at the same time teaching them how to work as a team. Students will get benefits from it.

整体上不错啊~~因为最近比较忙~昨晚只改到一半~不好意思~

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only good home work is no home work.好象是本来就有的一句话 从185COPY的

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The controversy whether daily homework is necessary for students has been argued for so long since the schools(似乎) have existed. In most (of the)cases students believe that only good home work is no home work(???). But it’s hard to imagine without daily homework how can we be sure that we have entirely understand the knowledge we’ve acquired? In my opinion, I think it’s necessary for students to have daily homework.
First, students will been(???) given all kinds of classes, including mathematics, chemistry, history, physics, biology, geography, (例子有点多)and the list will go on. According to Ebbinghaus’s theory of forgetting curve people will forget almost 70% we have learned in two days without review(ing). So the homework provides a good opportunity for us to sure whether we’ve completely comprehend the knowledge we have learned. I also believe the old saying: practice makes perfect. Daily homework helps us to(to去掉) have a much deeper and more comprehensive impression about(on) knowledge we’ve learned.
What’s more, it has been said in the Bible that human beings have the nature of sloth when they have born. if the teacher do(does) not assign daily homework, I believe most (of the)children will not practice and review the knowledge by themselves, even some of them play computer games all nights after they (are )back home. Students, especially young boys and girls, are lack of a kind of ability to well-plan their study and common senses of learning. As a result, without daily homework, eventually, they may fail the exam. So daily homework made(makes) students subconsciously review their knowledge.
At last, daily homework teaches us how to share ideas and solve a problem in teams. As a student, when I have some math(maths) problems I will have a discussion and share my ideas with my classmates to find a easier way to solve the problem. It improve the ability to teamwork. Teamwork becomes a more effective and efficient(????) way to deal with all troubles as the development of the society.
In conclusion, daily homework is necessary for students at least for nowadays students. It helps students to have a deeper comprehension and lay a solid foundation for their future study, at the same time teaching them how to work as a team. Students will get benefits from it.

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