TOEFL4-6 Dark-Tournament小组第14次作业by liurui8802

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can learn more from watching television than reading books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.(07.02.03)


People adopt different ways to learn about the world. Some prefer to get insightful ideas from books, while some would like to watch TV for the newest thoughts and innovations. In my view, I would recommend watching TV as a better method, a way which is faster, more efficient and more interesting.



There is a proverb"it is not a  big mistake if you buy home a wrong book, but the time you spend reading a wrong book." Surely, flipping through a brick-like book require a genuine interest and resistance. It is a disaster when we find that we have finished half of a book yet we have not seen anything right to our taste.However, watching television will offer you a big feast: numerous channels to choose, diversified programmes to watch, and different ideas to spark your own. Not only will you quickly discover the areas you wish to know, but you will get the larger picture of the area in just a few hours.



In addition, not  publication can compete TV for the speed it catches up with the newest events, the heated debate, or the most astounding discovery. From news you get a glimpse of the accidents happening around the world; through the talk show we consider some big issues concerning the whole society; via the education channels you peer into the most exciting technology.Compared to books, which take authors months to write and editors weeks to modify——when it arrives at your hands it may already be out of date—— TV offers a more efficient way.



Besides, as the pressure coming from every aspects of our lives, the time for reading books has been crowded out or,moderately speaking, squeezed. People turn to TV as the main way to learn about the world.Thus, during a relaxed discussion or a quite get-together, we are prone to share the programmes we enjoy. By exchanging different views about events,big issues and ideas, we are more likely to come to a profound understanding of the world and knowledge.No doubt, it is far more interactive and enjoyable by virtue of TV than reading a book locked in your room.



In conclusion, TV, as far as I am concerned,beats books as a better way to learn about the world. With its speed, variety, and topics, we stand at the forefront of the Information Age.


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People adopt different ways to learn about the world. Some prefer to get insightful ideas from books, while some would like to watch TV for the newest thoughts and innovations. In my view, I would recommend watching TV as a better method, a way which is faster, more efficient and more interesting.
   There is a proverb"it is not a  big mistake if you buy home a wrong book, but the time you spend reading a wrong book." Surely, flipping through a brick-like book requires a genuine interest and resistance. It is a disaster when we find that we have finished half of a book yet we have not seen anything right to our taste.However, watching television will offer you a big feast: numerous channels to choose, diversified programs to watch, and different ideas to spark your own. Not only will you quickly discover the areas you wish to know, but you will get the larger picture of the area in just a few hours.
   In addition, there is no  publication that can compete with TV for the speed as it catches up with the newest events, the heated debates, or the most astounding discoveries. From news you get a glimpse of the affairs happening around the world; through the talk show we consider some big issues concerning about the whole society; via the education channels you peer into the most exciting technology.Compared to(with) books, which take authors months to write and editors weeks to modify——when it arrives at your hands it may already be out of date—— TV offers a more efficient way.
    Besides, as the pressure coming(用deriving好些吧) from every aspects of our lives, the time for reading books has been crowded out or,moderately speaking, squeezed. People turn to TV as the main way(means不要经常用重复词语) to learn about the world.Thus, during a relaxed discussion or a quite get-together, we are prone to share the programs we enjoy. By exchanging different views about events,big issues and ideas, we are more likely to come to a profound understanding of the world and knowledge.No doubt, it is far more interactive and enjoyable by virtue of TV than reading a book locked in your room.
   In(As a) conclusion, TV, as far as I am concerned,beats books as a better way(换一个吧) to learn about the world. With its speed, variety, and topics, we stand at the forefront of the Information Age.
总体来说还是很好的，用了蛮多高端词汇，但是有些单词重复出现的频率太高了些，老师说要用不同的词表达同一个意思来体现你的词汇量。还有就是你文章中出现了不少you，这好像蛮忌讳的吧，据说写托福作文最好 不要说对方会怎么怎么样的。额，你四六级都是500多分，我都只有400多，可能越改越差了，还望见谅，请多多指教啦:loveliness: