醉红尘的十六次作业，大家拍拍哦

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Recently the issue of whether people are busy doing different things that they can do few things well or not has been in the limelight. Different people hold different perspective on this subject. Arguing for people truly bit of more than they can chew are those people who hold the opinion that we should put our whole heart into doing one thing. Coincident with their opinion is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that in daily world where needs multiple-ability people except for those experts.

First and foremost, doing diverse things can make our lives unusually more colorful when compared with those experts’. When we take a job in a new field, all of these, the coworkers, the circumstance, are so fresh that we can be attracted to the new job, new field. Our history is filled with the examples of this phenomenon; we may cite a typical one from the thousands. When Mao, the well-known chairman of China, were young he changed almost every school in Changsha and studied each subject in those schools, as we all know, he is not a notable leader of China, but also a famed rhymist. Apparently, but for his numerous interests, how can he make our country and leave remarkably rhymes at the same time.

Furthermore, personal experience leads me to conclude that our society is calling for multiple-people. When I enrolled in Zhejiang University, I was imparted that I had to learn all kinds of classes, which included economics, chemistry, English, mathematics which I dislike. When I ask my advisor why I had to learn mathematics, he said all the classed are related to each other, if you had no idea of the others, you could not get a wonderful grade in the others.

On the contrary, as a matter of fact, doing one thing well also has some advantages. Just take the experts for example, they all have a deeply knowledge in their own fields, consequently, they develop the theory and invent tools for our society, without them, how can we make a further development of our society.

Notwithstanding that there may be one or two disadvantages to do various things, I maintain that the advantages of doing numerous kinds of things outweigh any benefit we gain from merely engaging oneself in one thing all his/her life which is vapid.

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模板的水平明显高出你的实际写作水平，建议不要用这模板。我的写作27，没有套任何模板。还是返璞归真的好。

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1# 醉红尘

谢谢指点，我刚开始写，没有模板不知道怎么办，是我自己整理的啊，也不行吗？高手指教啊

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1# 醉红尘

谢谢指点，我刚开始写，没有模板不知道怎么办，是我自己整理的啊，也不行吗？高手指教啊
醉红尘 发表于 2009-3-29 19:26

全写大白话也能拿满分的，不信去问老师。模板越少越好。所以开始练习的时候就写白话，别加那些花哨的。我考试就是这样的。我写百话写了万多字，自然白话就写的好了，不用恶心的，谁都看的出来的模板了。加油练习吧。

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Recently the issue of whether people are busy doing different things that they can do few things well or not has been in the limelight. Different people hold different perspective on this subject. Arguing for people truly bit of more than they can chew are those people who hold the opinion that we should put our whole heart into doing one thing. Coincident with their opinion is my heartfelt agreement with the idea that in daily world where needs multiple-ability(multiple ability 或者 multi-ability)people except for those experts.

First and foremost, doing diverse things can make our lives unusually more colorful when compared with those experts’. When we take a job in a new field, all of these, the coworkers, the circumstance, are so fresh that we can be attracted to the new job, new field. Our history is filled with the examples of this phenomenon; we may cite a typical one from the thousands. When Mao, the well-known chairman of China, were young he changed almost every school in Changsha and studied each subject in those schools, as we all know, he is not a notable leader of China, but also a famed rhymist. Apparently, but for his numerous interests, how can he make our country and leave remarkably rhymes at the same time.

Furthermore, personal experience leads me to conclude that our society is calling for multiple-people(multi-ability people). When I enrolled in Zhejiang University, I was imparted that I had to learn all kinds of classes, which included economics, chemistry, English, mathematics which I dislike. When I ask my advisor why I had to learn mathematics, he said all the classed are related to each other, if you had no idea of the others, you could not get a wonderful grade in the others. (如果这里用逗号，那么后面的两个半句在逻辑上和前面的related to each other没有必然关系)

On the contrary, as a matter of fact, doing one thing well also has some advantages. Just take the experts for example, they all have a deeply knowledge in their own fields, consequently, they develop the theory and invent tools for our society, without them, how can we make a further development of our society.3 U1 ^% u- K& H' _6 R: n

Notwithstanding that there may be one or two disadvantages to do various things, I maintain that the advantages of doing numerous kinds of things outweigh any benefit we gain from merely engaging oneself in one thing all his/her life which is vapid.(如果这里的outweigh没有把这个句子变成了比较句，那么which这个从句可能削弱了你的观点，因为可以理解为：比那些索然无味的生活更好，这就不是一般情况了)

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3# 醉红尘

谢谢啊，我会改进的，先从简单练习。主要是刚开始弄，有点急于求成的感觉。多谢前辈指教