【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文babff的 第17次作业】

babffUID: 2539532

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate
with other well is more important today than in the past. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your answer.（03/04/07

with the rapid development of scientific technology,the world becomes more and more smaller.as a result of that, people are more interdependent than before.we can not live alone ，we should chat ,work and even share our habitations with others.so as gregarious human beings,we should cooperate with others as much as we can.


firstly,the main reason for my perspective is that one person can not have enough time and knowledge to solve a complex problem.as we know,most of the complex softwares are often done by a group of software engineers.for example,the microsoft operating system,which is finished by a large numbers of software engineers,some of them are responsible for writing codes,the others ought to checkout them.and if you ask me whether a genius can finish the whole work by himself or herself?the answer is impossible,because he or she can not have enough time to write all the codes in his or her all life.that is why we must cooperate with others to finish a complex problem.

in addition,the development of internet provides us more opportunities to cooperate with others,and we can solve most of the problem which we encounter by cooperating with others on the internet.for instance,i take part in a study group of toefl on the internet, because there are few students in my university preparing toefl test together with me.i can chat with my groupmates about my confusion about the test, we encourage each other and also we revise the compositions each other.

furthermore,we will be more innovative by cooperating with other people. i like to cooperate with others because the other person can always provide an unexcepted idea.for example,there are a lot of means to solve a mathematics problem.and if you ask different classmates to solve the same problem,and then compare all the methods,you will be more innovative than others.

in a word,we can not live alone because human is gregarious,so if we want to do something more efficiently and innovatly,we should cooperate with other frequently.











OK了，谢谢童鞋等我哈。。。最近很忙。。实在不还意思。。嘿嘿

soilinkinUID: 2163892

我要是拍了你奈我何...

jenniferwyyUID: 2534935

那先占位了

soilinkinUID: 2163892

with the rapid development of scientific technology,the world becomes more and more smaller（more和smaller都是比较级，只用smaller就可以了）.as a result of that, people are more interdependent than before.（因为世界变小了，人们就开始相互依赖，这个逻辑有点问题吧）we can not live alone ，we should chat ,work and even share our habitations with others.so as gregarious human beings,we should cooperate with others as much as we can.

firstly,the main reason for my perspective is that one person can not have enough time and knowledge to solve a complex problem.as we know,most of the complex softwares are often done by a group of software engineers.for example,the microsoft operating system,which is finished by a large numbers of software engineers,some of them are responsible for writing codes,the others ought to checkout them（这里用法好像不对吧，应该是check them或者check them for errors）.and if you ask me whether a genius can finish the whole work by himself or herself?the answer is impossible,because he or she can not have enough time to write all the codes in his or her all life.that is why we must cooperate with others to finish a complex problem.

in addition,the development of internet provides us more opportunities to cooperate with others,and we can solve most of the problem（problems） which we encounter by cooperating with others on the internet.for instance,i take part in a study group of toefl on the internet, because there are few students in my university preparing toefl test together with me.i can chat with my groupmates about my confusion about the test, we encourage each other and also we revise the compositions each other.

furthermore,we will be more innovative by cooperating with other people. i like to cooperate with others because the other person can always provide an unexcepted idea.for example,there are a lot of means to solve a mathematics problem.and if you ask different classmates to solve the same problem,and then compare all the methods,you will be more innovative than others.

in a word,we can not live alone because human is gregarious,so if we want to do something more efficiently and innovatly,we should cooperate with other frequently.

文章没什么大的问题...但是语句略显生硬...
提醒下LZ一定要扣题啊...最后一定要回到题中的the ability to cooperate...而且题目要求是现在和过去对比...lz多少有些走题了吧...

jenniferwyyUID: 2534935

with the rapid development of scientific technology, the world becomes more and more smaller. As a result of that, people are more interdependent than before. we can not live alone ，we should chat ,work and even share our habitations with others. so as gregarious human beings, we should cooperate with others as much as we can.

firstly,the main reason for my perspective is that one person can not have enough time and knowledge to solve a complex problem.as we know,most of the complex softwares are often done by a group of software engineers.for example,the microsoft operating system,which is finished by a large numbers of software engineers,some of them are responsible for writing codes,the others ought to checkout them（check them out）.and if you ask me whether a genius can finish the whole work by himself or herself?the answer is impossible,because he or she can not have enough time to write all the codes in his or her all life.that is why we must cooperate with others to finish a complex problem.

in addition,the development of internet provides us more opportunities to cooperate with others,and we can solve most of the problem(复数) which we encounter by cooperating with others on the internet.for instance,i take part in a study group of toefl on the internet, because there are few students in my university preparing toefl test together with me.i can chat with my groupmates about my confusion about the test, we encourage each other and also we revise the compositions each other.

furthermore,we will be more innovative by cooperating with other people. i like to cooperate with others because the other person can always provide an unexcepted idea.for example,there are a lot of means to solve a mathematics problem.and if you ask different classmates to solve the same problem,and then compare all the methods,you will be more innovative than others.

in a word,we can not live alone because human is gregarious,so if we want to do something more efficiently and innovatly,we should cooperate with other frequently.

LZ实在对不起上次想给你修改的 但是你米有写好说要等会 后来我最进学校忙论文的事情都忘记了
和上面的一样楼主要扣题 还有大小写一定要区分啊 我一弄到WORD里面全是红色的 吓死我了