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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies
are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you
prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer






have you ever let all the pressure go after watching a comedy?
have you ever been sleeping because of a boring programme?have you ever learned something about how to face the life from a amusing but significant movie?
if you do not have those experience,you can not know how useful the amusing programme is.
first of all,the main reason for my perspective is that the interesting and amusing programme will bring me a good mood and it also release my stress.i am so sensitive that i always imagine me as the leading role while i am watching movie.so i will be very  happy after i watch a comedy, just as i  experience that drama myself. for instance,i always use my computer to watch the comedy which is played by Chaplin when i have a depressing mood.and i am amused by Chaplin's action even if i have watched that movie several times.the most important is that i can have a good mood after watching his comedy.

in addition,the more interesting and exciting a programme is,the more easier people can be attracted.i can spend a long time on the entertainment progremma rather than the serious one.because the first one  is easier to understand than the other one.i do not want to spend my spare time on that educational documentary,expencially after i study for a long time.i need to watch some amusing programme to fit the bored time.and if i watch a serious progremma ,i will be more boring.

moreover,the amusing programme also can teach me some useful knowledge.for example,a chinese comedy called 'XIAO ZHE HUO XIA QU',although it is a comedy,the optimistic spirit of main character influence me deeply.his optimistic spirit encourages me whenever i encounter some troubles.

in a word,although the serious programme has some advantages such as educational significance,making people think,i perfer to watch the amusing programme becacue it makes me happy,optimistic and humorous.
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发表于 2009-4-5 23:15:22 |只看该作者
Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you/prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
have you ever let all the pressure go after watching a comedy? have you ever been sleeping because of a boring programme? have you ever learned something about how to face the life from a(an) amusing but significant movie?(整个开头都没有明确出你究竟prefer哪个type)
  if you do not have those experience, you can not know how useful the amusing programme is.(这句话可以挪到第一段末尾) first of all, the main reason for my perspective is that the interesting and amusing programme(用movie或者film吧,文章说的是这个,不用说成是节目) will bring me a good mood and it also release my stress. i am so sensitive that i always imagine me as the leading role while i am watching movie. so i will be very  happy after i watch a comedy, just as i  experience that drama myself. for instance, i always use my computer to watch the comedy which is played by Chaplin when i have a depressing mood. and i am amused by Chaplin's action even if i have watched that movie several times. the most important is that i can have a good mood after watching his comedy.
  in addition, the more interesting and exciting a programme is, the more easier people can be attracted. i can spend a long time on the entertainment progremma rather than the serious one. because the first one  is easier to understand than the other one. i do not want to spend my spare time on that educational documentary, expencially(especially) after i study for a long time. i need to watch some amusing programme to fit the bored(boring) time. and if i watch a serious progremma , i will be more boring(bored).
   moreover, the amusing programme also can teach me some useful knowledge. for example, a chinese comedy called 'XIAO ZHE HUO XIA QU', although it is a comedy, the optimistic spirit of main character influence(s) me deeply. his optimistic spirit encourages me whenever i encounter some troubles.
   in a word, although the serious programme has some advantages such as educational significance, making people think, i prefer to watch the amusing programme becacue it makes me happy, optimistic and humorous.

额。。。不知楼主是不是匆忙之间打出来的,全文都没有大写啊,而且有不少单词的拼写错误。这虽然是小问题,但还是应该注意一下的,如果有时间的话还是应该尽量打认真点的,毕竟上考场也是要打的。关于文章,我觉得文章句型单词过于简单了,其实我一点也不支持通篇大词,然后句子成分过于复杂让人难以理解的文章,但我觉得楼主可以稍微加点从句进去润下色应该会好些。呵呵,一点拙见,还望见谅哈。

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have you ever let all the pressure go after watching a comedy?have you ever been sleeping because of a boring programme(这个我怎么看怎么奇怪啊)?have you ever learned something about how to face the life from a amusing but significant movie?If you do not have those experience,you can not know how useful the amusing programme is.最好说明自己的观点哦

first of all,the main reason for my perspective is that the interesting and amusing programme will bring me a good mood and it also release my stress.i am so sensitive that i always imagine me as the leading role while i am watching movie.so i will be very  happy after i watch a comedy, just as i  experience that drama myself. for instance,i always use my computer to watch the comedy which is played by Chaplin when i have a depressing mood.and i am amused by Chaplin's action even if i have watched that movie several times.the most important is that i can have a good mood after watching his comedy.
in addition,the more interesting and exciting a programme is,the more easier people can be attracted.i can spend a long time on the entertainment progremma(拼写错误) rather than the serious one.because the first one  is easier to understand than the other one(这里还是用serious one 比较好).i do not want to spend my spare time on that educational documentary,expencially (拼写错误)after i study for a long time.i need to watch some amusing programme to fit the bored time.and if i watch a serious progremma ,i will be more boring.

moreover,the amusing programme also can teach me some useful knowledge.for example,a chinese comedy called 'XIAO ZHE HUO XIA QU',although it is a comedy,the optimistic spirit of main character influence me deeply.his optimistic spirit encourages me whenever i encounter some troubles(加个in life 吧会好点)in a word,although the serious programme has some advantages such as educational significance,making people think,i perfer to watch the amusing programme becacue it makes me happy,optimistic and humorous.

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