〓DIES IN FLAMS〓 Issue7

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7. "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

The video camera, of course, is an accurate and convincing tool to record life and it plays an important role in our life. At the same time, written record is irreplaceable for it has its inimitable advantage. Both of the two record tools are required.

On one hand, indeed, the video camera can record life exactly, authentically and vividly. As the crystal of humanity’s wisdom, the video camera is delicate, convenient and quick. With the video camera, a huge library’s information can be put in a video CD, which is a thin piece of plastic and take a little room. When we go on a peregrination, the beautiful scenery can be record by the video camera, and it would record things pictorially and vividly. If we observe some particular phenomenon, using the video camera is a great choice, for some slight appearances are hardly seen at the very start especially some appearance of experiment, and we need to watch them over and over. Some significant events also need the video camera for that only the video camera can emerge the event originally. Another aspect, the video camera can record things with a picture in a second, but if you do in a written way, it might take more time. Thus, the video camera is important for recording things.

However, on the other hand, the written record has its own superiority to keep its irreplaceable status. It doesn’t necessarily need high-tech device, and what you need is just a pen and some blank paper. In the field of science research, every professor or researcher use written record to state their research achievements with the papers. It also must use the written records as soon as possible when a scientist suddenly comes up with a great idea, maybe in his dream. Some comments on events are also in the form of written record served as the magazine and newspaper for people to read, for video sometimes isn’t feasible for reading such as on the bus or a period during one’s breakfast. Besides, an avalanche of fictions and bibles are recorded by the written records, the same with several of the magazines and newspapers. Humanity’s civilization can be developed, largely because the written records and then people can work from their predecessor’s work. The written records wouldn’t irritate one’s eyes, either, for the principle is to use the reflected light. Thus, it’s certain that written records won’t be substituted.

Hence, a combination between the video camera and written record can be the best method for record lives. We shouldn’t underestimate the human intelligence and many people already use them together rationally. For both of these record methods are not suitable for all conditions but when combined together, we can choose a proper way to record anything in any case. People can use the video to emerge the original thing and use the written records to make some comment. For example, in the field of science research, the phenomenon of experiment can be recorded by the video camera and the theory can be explained by written record. Then it would be a perfect record for the science. Another example, some custom medias such as some magazines and books always sell with a CD as a gift- which contains some multimedia information- to make magazines and books more attractive and appealing. These are the great advantages the combination can bring to us: a more vivid and colorful world.

In sum, both of the two methods of recording are important and just picking only one of them is unwise. The best way is to bind them together, for they are supplement to each other.

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The video camera, of course, is an accurate and convincing tool to record life and it plays an important role in our life. At the same time, written record is irreplaceable for it has its inimitable advantage. Both of the two record tools are required.开头简洁提出观点

On one hand, indeed, the video camera can record life exactly, authentically and vividly. As the crystal of humanity’s wisdom, the video camera is delicate, convenient and quick. With the video camera, a huge library’s information can be put in a video CD, which is a thin piece of plastic and take a little room. When we go on a peregrination, the beautiful scenery can be record by the video camera, and it would record things pictorially and vividly. If we observe some particular phenomenon, using the video camera is a great choice, for some slight appearances are hardly seen at the very start especially some appearance of experiment, and we need to watch them over and over. Some significant events also need the video camera for that only the video camera can emerge the event originally. Another aspect, the video camera can record things with a picture in a second, but if you do in a written way, it might take more time. Thus, the video camera is important for recording things.
我觉得这段可以再深入，毕竟题目强调了accurate and convincing这方面，所以个人觉得这方面的论述稍微加深一些

However, on the other hand, the written record has its own superiority to keep its irreplaceable status. It doesn’t necessarily need high-tech device, and what you need is just a pen and some blank paper. In the field of science research, every professor or researcher use written record to state their research achievements with the papers. It also must use the written records as soon as possible when a scientist suddenly comes up with a great idea, maybe in his dream. Some comments on events are also in the form of written record served as the magazine and newspaper for people to read, for video sometimes isn’t feasible for reading such as on the bus or a period during one’s breakfast. Besides, an avalanche of fictions and bibles are recorded by the written records, the same with several of the magazines and newspapers. Humanity’s civilization can be developed, largely because the written records and then people can work from their predecessor’s work. The written records wouldn’t irritate one’s eyes, either, for the principle is to use the reflected light. Thus, it’s certain that written records won’t be substituted.

Hence, a combination between the video camera and written record can be the best method for record lives. 这里总结了观点，很好We shouldn’t underestimate the human intelligence and many people already use them together rationally. For both of these record methods are not suitable for all conditions but when combined together, we can choose a proper way to record anything in any case. People can use the video to emerge the original thing and use the written records to make some comment. For example, in the field of science research, the phenomenon of experiment can be recorded by the video camera and the theory can be explained by written record. Then it would be a perfect record for the science. Another example, some custom medias such as some magazines and books always sell with a CD as a gift- which contains some multimedia information- to make magazines and books more attractive and appealing. These are the great advantages the combination can bring to us: a more vivid and colorful world.

In sum, both of the two methods of recording are important and just picking only one of them is unwise. The best way is to bind them together, for they are supplement to each other.结尾可以再深化
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作者逻辑很清楚，文章观点很清晰，如果在论述VC时更加深入一些会更好。个人观点，楼主指教哦~~