『Toefl Dark_Tournament写作组laqfanfan第21次作业』

laqfanfanUID: 2618864

Is it better to spend money on something that lasts long time, such as an expensive piece of jewelry, or spend on something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation?

It is true that increasingly intriguing affinity will attract people to enjoy entertainment or release pressure of competitive job market and responsibility of family. Some people hold the opinion that it is better to spend money on something that lasts long time, as being never change. However, other people insist that it is better to have something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation. As for me, I prefer something that is relatively permanent to those which is brief as following reasons.

To begin with, relatively permanent things may rise in value in the future. We can make a profit of it and change for something more promising. Take gold for example, its value will ups and downs just as stocks. A good fortune can result a mount of money. Futhermore, preserving some precious jewelry can not only make for money , but also plays a very improtant role when we lack of money,to guard against an unpredictable future. Overall, I enjoy life by being a producer, not a consumer.

Anothor essential reason is that permanent things would be a perfect reminder, being never changed. A husband would buy a jewelry for his wife as a gift for her birthday. For they might enjoy a certain concert, but hardly could it be permanently impressive. Memories are always not reliable. We tend to simple forget anything-at best,memories are somewhat distorted-if time past long enough.

In general, I confirm that it is more intellectual to have purchase of a eternal thing which can also bring emotion of art to our heart. A valuable painting hanging on the wall ,teeming the house with a courteously atmosphere. As such reasons are numerous. Lastly, to highlight my viewpoint ,I will spend money on something that lasts long time.

gundammoleUID: 2300958

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It is true that increasingly intriguing affinity will attract people to enjoy entertainment or(and) release pressure of competitive job market and responsibility of family. Some people hold the opinion that it is better to spend money on something that lasts long time, as being never change(has never been changed). However, other people insist that it is better to have something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation. As for me, I prefer something that is relatively permanent to those which is brief as following reasons.
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To begin with, relatively permanent things may rise in value(the value of relatively permanent things may rise感觉这样子比较顺) in the future. We can make a profit of it and change for something more promising. Take gold for example, its value will ups and downs just as stocks. A good fortune can result a (+great)mount of money. Futhermore(Furthermore), preserving some precious jewelry can not only make for money , but also plays a very improtant (important) role when we lack of money, to guard against an unpredictable future. Overall, I enjoy life by being a producer, not a consumer. 8 O9 O( A: t2 H, U- B


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Anothor (Another) essential reason is that permanent things would be a perfect reminder, being never changed. (being never changed用在这里是什么意思?是想表示恒久不变吗?用法不恰当) A husband would buy a jewelry for his wife as a gift for her birthday. For they might enjoy a certain concert, but hardly could it be permanently impressive. (As a gift, he can also take her to a certain concert, but it can hardly be a permanent impression.) Memories are always not reliable. We tend to simple (simply) forget anything-at best, memories are somewhat distorted-if time past long enough.( X' a6 M1 S4 R  ]% z4 A
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In general, I confirm that it is more intellectual to have purchase of (have purchase of可直接改为purchase )a eternal thing which can also bring emotion of art to our heart. A valuable painting hanging on the wall, teeming the house with a courteously atmosphere.(这句话想表达什么?句子不完整) As such reasons are numerous. Lastly, to highlight my viewpoint, I will spend money on something that lasts long time.

holdingUID: 2285054

It is true that increasingly intriguing affinity will attract people to enjoy entertainment or release pressure of competitive job market and responsibility of family. Some people hold the opinion that it is better to spend money on something that lasts long time, as being never change (changed). However, other people insist that it is better (换一种比较级会更好)to have something that provides a short-term pleasure, such as a vacation. As for me, I prefer something that is relatively permanent to those which is （are）brief as following reasons.

To begin with, relatively permanent things may rise in value in the future. We can make a profit of it and change for something more promising. Take gold for example, its value will ups and downs (be up and down) just as stocks. A good fortune can result a mount of money. Futhermore (拼写错误furthermore), preserving some precious jewelry can not only make for money , but also plays (作为can后面的并列结构，改为play) a very improtant （拼写错误important）
role when we lack of money, to guard against an unpredictable future. Overall, I enjoy life by being a producer, not a consumer. 4 b0 P( E% u' h3 k


Anothor (Another) essential reason is that permanent things would be a perfect reminder, being never changed. A husband would buy a jewelry for his wife as a gift for her birthday. For they might enjoy a certain concert, but hardly could it be permanently impressive. Memories are always not reliable. We tend to simple forget anything-at best, memories are somewhat distorted-if time past long enough.8 t* T7 a8 I( H  p& l

In general, I confirm that it is more intellectual to have purchase of a eternal thing which can also bring emotion of art to our heart. A valuable painting hanging on the wall ,teeming the house with a courteously atmosphere. As such reasons are numerous. Lastly, to highlight my viewpoint ,I will spend money on something that lasts long time.

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