【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 jessie18第27次作业】

jessie18UID: 2596971

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.

Scientific progress brings us many conveniences and advanced machines, with the help of technology students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. However, upon the question, the next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Different people have different opinions due to their diverse cultural backgrounds. From my personal angle, I am in favor of the opinion that students will still use printed books.

First of all, it is true that printed books are very convenient for us to bring wherever we go. As is known to all, printed books are smaller and portability than any other electronic books. The computer is always ponderous and we can not carried anywhere with it. It can be easily demonstrated by thousands of examples in our daily life. A typical instance is when we go to school from home by train, during the trip we may feel very tiresome, so we can take an interesting printed book or a textbook. It not only helps us to pass the idle time, but also can increase our knowledge. It is much easier than carry a computer. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is obvious that printed books should not be vanished, we will still use it after the next twenty years even the hundred years later.

In addition, students who use printed books can reduce the radiations emitted by a computer and protect their eyes. You know, the computer send out radiations are harmful to our health. A people, without doubt, would cause serious illness such as lose his or her hair , headache, skin cancer, and so on, if he or she always has a long time use a computer. There are numerous instances closely fit the notion, just like my friend Lily. She often use the electronic books to study instead our schoolbooks, she thought study on computer is good than the printed books because technology can increase the speed at which she imbibes information. But recently she often felt a headache when she use the computer, our school doctor suggest her not to use the computer too often because the radiations are harmful to her health. So suppose what if all the printed books had disappeared, how can we avoid these harms and protect our eyes?

Furthermore, if everybody use computer to study, university must prepare many computers in order to fulfill every students’ needs. It will cost too much, and the tuition would increase, this will increase the burden on our parents. What is more, printed books have value for preservation. So I think we will continue to use printed books.

To sum up, although study on internet is important in students’ education and learning, it still can not take the place of printed books. So taking into account all the factors discussed above, we could safely come to the conclusion that the next twenty years from now on, students will still use printed books.

gaofei323UID: 2588256

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.


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Scientific progress brings us many conveniences and advanced machines, with the help of technology students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. However, upon the question(没有question啊，后面改问句，或者改statement), the next twenty years from now on, students will not use printed books any more. Different people have different opinions due to their diverse cultural backgrounds. From my personal angle, I am in favor of the opinion that students will still use printed books.

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First of all, it is true that printed books are very convenient for us to bring wherever we go. As is known to all, printed books are smaller and more portability than any other(不要any other，electronic book和printed book本来就不是一类) electronic books. The computer is always ponderous and we can not carried anywhere with it（carry it everywhere）. It can be easily demonstrated by thousands of examples in our daily life. A typical instance is when we go to school from home by train, during the trip we may feel very tiresome, so we can take an interesting printed book or a textbook. It not only helps us to pass the idle time, but also can increase our knowledge. It is much easier than carry（carrying） a computer. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is obvious that printed books should not be vanished, we will still use it after the next twenty years even the hundred years later.+ I3 R6 b" T- L& C
In addition, students who use printed books can reduce（would achieve less 电脑本身辐射不会减小） the radiations emitted by a computer and protect their eyes. You know, the computer send out radiations that are harmful to our health. A people, without doubt, would be caused serious illness such as lose his or her hair , headache, skin cancer, and so on, if he or she always has a long time to use a computer. There are numerous instances closely fit the notion, just like my friend Lily. She often use the electronic books to study instead of our schoolbooks, she thought study on computer is good（better） than the printed books because technology can increase the speed at which she imbibes information. But recently she often felt a headache when she use the computer, our school doctor suggest her not to use the computer too often because the radiations are harmful to her health. So suppose what if all the printed books had disappeared, how can we avoid these harms and protect our eyes?(感觉稍微有点啰嗦，简洁一点好)

Furthermore, if everybody use computer to study, university must prepare many computers in order to fulfill every students’ needs. It will cost too much, and the tuition would increase, this will increase the burden on our parents. What is more, printed books have value for preservation. So I think we will continue to use printed books.


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To sum up, although studying on internet is important in students’ education and learning, it still can not take the place of printed books. So taking into account all the factors discussed above, we could safely come to the conclusion that the next twenty years from now on, students will still use printed books.

文章不错 结构 语言都挺好
个别语法应该注意一下 有的地方简洁一点更好~
加油~
我记得我昨晚发了。。。 怎么丢了 不好意思哈

我记得我昨晚发了

gaofei323UID: 2588256

不好意思 怎么也改不了彩色了 不知道是怎么了。。。

jessie18UID: 2596971

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谢谢哦 呵呵 加油哦