TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组桑梓的 第二十八次作业

桑梓UID: 2613051

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I usually turn to my friends for help whenever I find something difficult, as far as I am concerned, I can learn a lot from both older friends and friends at my age. It is just unfair to say whose ideas are better. in my opinion, it depends on what kind of problems you are dealing with.

When face important decisions like which major to study in university or which job suits me better, I would like to consult my older friends, since they have gone through problems like this when they were at my age. From their experiences, they can tell which decision is better. I still remember when I was eighteen, graduating from high school, I really did not know which area I should major in. At that time, my friends at my age were all facing this problem, and all of us were confusing with all the choices. We could not make our own decision, let alone give advice to others. Then I asked one of my friend who were studying in university then, she told me what subjects were required to learn for different majors, and what life liked for students in different majors. Moreover, based on what she known about me, she recommended pharmaceutical science to me. Because of the information and advice I got from her, I chose pharmaceutical science as my major, and it turns out that I chose the right major. Without the advice of my older friend, I can not make a good decision like that.

On the other hand, friends at my age are helpful too, especially in our daily life. Since we are going through the same situation together, we have similar perspective on life, it is easy to understand each other. There are no so-called "generation gaps" between us, it is easier for us to communicate. Friends at my age give me advice on what I should dress, what cream fit my skin better,or which movie is fabulous. Sometimes,my problems can not be understood by my older friends, and at that time, it is the advice from the friends at my age that is valuable.

From what has been discussed above, I believe it is clear that both the advice from older friends or friends at my age is valuable. Instead of judging the advice's value, we should make good use of our friends' advice.

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

I usually turn to my friends for help whenever I find something difficult, as far as I am concerned, I can learn a lot from both older friends and friends at my age.（首句逻辑不太好，这个，你为什幺先说一句“我经常向我朋友寻求帮助呢”，好像跟后面没什么联系） It is just unfair to say whose ideas are better. in my opinion, it depends on what kind of problems you are dealing with.7 B3 l" B3 ^* N4 Q& L" i
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When face important decisions like which major to study in university or which job suits（这里用suit or fit？） me better, I would like to consult my older friends, since they have gone through problems like this when they were at my age. From their experiences, they can tell which decision is better. I still remember when I was eighteen, graduating from high school, I really did not know which area I should major in. At that time, my friends at my age were all facing this problem, and all of us were confusing with all the choices. We could not make our own decision, let alone give advice to others. Then I asked one of my friend who were studying in university then, she told me what subjects were required to learn for different majors, and what life liked for students in different majors（这句语法不对吧，中式了）. Moreover, based on what she known about me, she recommended pharmaceutical science to me. Because of the information and advice I got from her, I chose pharmaceutical science as my major, and it turns out that I chose the right major. Without the advice of my older friend, I can not make a good decision like that.（恩恩，高考志愿的这个例子很好啊，很能说明问题~）9 t) C4 ^3 I8 ^/ t

On the other hand, friends at my age are helpful too, especially in our daily life. Since we are going through the same situation together, we have similar perspective on life, it is easy to understand each other. There are no so-called "generation gaps" between us, it is easier for us to communicate. Friends at my age give me advice on what I should dress, what cream fit my skin better,or which movie is fabulous. Sometimes,my problems can not be understood by my older friends, and at that time, it is the advice from the friends at my age that（which） is valuable.  S: f* @1 y2 N1 e8 ]) g4 U
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From what has been discussed above, I believe it is clear that both the advice from older friends or friends at my age is valuable. Instead of judging the advice's value, we should make good use of our friends' advice.

桑梓什么时候考？ 加油啊~~

jackie1983UID: 2484456

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use% A2 ?' s. w6 D2 f7 t9 q  U
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I usually turn to my friends for help whenever I find something difficult, as far as I am concerned, I can learn a lot from both older friends and friends at my age. It is just unfair to say whose ideas are better. in my opinion, it depends on what kind of problems you are dealing with.
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When face（facing） important decisions like which major to study in university or which job suits me better, I would like to consult my older friends, since they have gone through problems like this when they were at my age. From their experiences, they can tell which decision is better. I still remember when I was eighteen, graduating from high school, I really did not know which area I should major in. At that time, my friends at my age were all facing this problem, and all of us were confusing with all the choices. We could not make our own decision, let alone give advice to others. Then I asked one of my friend（friends） who were studying in university then, she told me what subjects were required to learn for different majors, and what life liked（?） for students in different majors. Moreover, based on what she known (knew) about me, she recommended pharmaceutical science to me. Because of the information and advice I got from her, I chose pharmaceutical science as my major, and it turns out that I chose the right major. Without the advice of my older friend, I can not make a good decision like that.

On the other hand, friends at my age are helpful too, especially in our daily life. Since we are going through the same situation together, we have similar perspective on life, it is easy to understand each other. There are no so-called "generation gaps" between us, it is easier for us to communicate. Friends at my age give me advice on what I should dress, what cream fit(fits) my skin better,or which movie is fabulous. Sometimes,my problems can not be understood by my older friends, and at that time, it is the advice from the friends at my age that is valuable.) j* W& I0 [, T$ g. r+ U  l

From what has been discussed above, I believe it is clear that both the advice from older friends or friends at my age is valuable. Instead of judging the advice's value, we should make good use of our friends' advice.
楼主分了不同的情况来讨论，论述的都很充分，长短句结合使用的不错，很少有什么语法错误，值得学习~
我在60楼，欢迎回拍～

桑梓UID: 2613051

这周六就考了 现在好崩溃啊…… 2# 网兜妮妮

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

没事，加油加油啦，
作文已经提高了很多，错误已经很少了。
好运啊，桑梓~~

桑梓UID: 2613051

谢谢妮妮
希望考试的时候RP能爆一下吧……
你也加油啊
5# 网兜妮妮