6,7月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 大沉的 第13次作业

chenchao0301UID：2637342

It is often heard that some people prefer to stay with
freinds, while some others prefer to keep alone.As life is full
of different cicumstances,I'd like to enjoy different periods of  
time in different ways.For those happy and glorious moments
I'd rather be with my friends, such as when I received my
bachlor's degree,while for some exhuasting and pressure
moments I may choose to stay alone,like the one or two days
before a big exam,for example,the entrence exam to college in
China.So to stay alone or with friends?It depends.  

Stay with friends can help me to share my happiness,and by sharing this
happiness can extend to a larger scale.Take the graduation
ceremony of my collge for instance.It's a big event in my life
because I got my bachelor's degree and it was a new step
forward to the society from when on I will be not only a
cunsumer but also a contributor to the construction of the
society.I sincerely like to stay with my friends and let them be
proud of me.And the lauphter during the ceremony has
remained in my mind ever since and it will probabaly last
forever.

On the other hand,some times I'd like to keep
alone.For keeping alone can help me  clear my mind and calm
down.It is widely proved in China's classic phylosophy that by
being alone one can get an  easier access  to the truth.For
myself,as a student, the days before a  test is really tough.I'd
rather find a place to keep alone both for a quieter
environment to study and  to calm down,and relax.At those
times I often wake up earlier and went to a classroom or a
reading room in the library ,not with any of my freinds or
classmates.

Once a mental health expert in my community gave a lecture at
local scholl,she mentiond that we humans have different
spyclogical needs under different cicumstances.To stay with
friends or to be alone depends on the needs of ourslves.So it
dosen't matter which way you choose,what does matter is
wheather you can have a better feeling by choosing this way.

chineseladyUID：2403976

因为格式的原因好像有一两个地方看的不是很清楚. 不过总体写的很扣题. 中间部分跟第一段很接洽. 中间提到考试, 这个例子很生动的, 很接近. 比我的要好多了. 我只是1.2句就完了. 你写的例子丰满.值得学习. 语法结构都可以. 这个格式看不出段落....不好意思了. 还有大考试: big exam 变formal exam or seriour exam?

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chineseladyUID：2403976

不好意思啊,搞宣传喽:D