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in daily life,we often confront different kinds of troubles,and most times we prefer to listen carefully to other's voice and also ask for advices from acquaintance,and i think this is a good way of getting ourself walking out of difficulties and be more effective than handling issues along, the reasons can be explained as below,

once with curiosity,i believe in the masses have much more energy and precious experience than anyone alone,obviously we are not almighty on every daily aspects,so we need to listen to really professional advices from experts, for instance, when we get sick because of so much burden which is so common to modern people living at a rapid rhythm. at this time, we'd better to see a doctor and do follow professional orders,if don't do this, and resist to resting as owner willing,that is absolutely a manner wrecking own healthy.

yet another reason is that the more suggestions we consider carefully the less chances we may make mistakes,as it's hard for us to figure everthing at one time,and when  we ask  lots of people for favors , it's will be easily arrange smoothly and perfectly. take my own experience as a example,in my sophomore year,i met a chance to present a important conference,but i was hesitating because i still lacked some necessary materials,and at last my classmate reminded me how to prepare these materials and helped me achieve my goal,so i thanked them from my heart, without them, there wouldn't be so a pleasure time of attending a important conferences.

taking into account of all these effects,we may reach the conclusion that at most time asking advices from other peoples is essential important beacause this can lead us in a right direction and reduce our mistakes.

写完后，隐隐的感觉写跑题了，汗。。。。

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in daily life,we often confront different kinds of troubles,and mosttimes we prefer to listen carefully to other's[others'] voice and also ask foradvices from acquaintance,and i think this is a good way of gettingourself[ourselves] walking out of difficulties and be more effective than handlingissues along[alone], the reasons can be explained as below,
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+ k# u5 g4 ?. Ronce withcuriosity,i believe in the masses[不好] have much more energy and preciousexperience than anyone alone,obviously we are not almighty on everydaily aspects,so we need to listen to really professional advices fromexperts, for instance, when we get sick because of so much【many】 burden whichis so common to modern people living at a rapid rhythm. at this time,we'd better to see a doctor and do follow professional orders,if don'tdo this, and resist to resting as owner willing,that is absolutely amanner wrecking own healthy.
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yet[转折？] another reason is that the more suggestions we consider carefullythe less chances we may make mistakes,as it's hard for us to figureeverthing at one time,and when  we ask  lots of people for favors ,it's will be easily arrange smoothly and perfectly. take my ownexperience as a【an】 example,in my sophomore year,i met a chance to presenta【an】 important conference,but i was hesitating because i still lacked somenecessary materials,and at last my classmate reminded me how to preparethese materials and helped me achieve my goal,so i thanked them from myheart, without them, there wouldn't be so a pleasure time of attendinga important conferences.: @* R. a7 P2 V& a( y' e( V4 ~
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taking into account of all these effects,we may reach the conclusionthat at most time asking advices from other peoples is essentialimportant beacause this can lead us in a right direction and reduce ourmistakes.

确实有点跑，要说make decision嘛
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