issue88 by dingyi0311

dingyi0311UID: 2627919

88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

The speaker asserts that the technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics I concede that the customs and ways of living are influenced by the technologies, for the reasons that the technologies in the decades has changed our ways of living. Yet, the speaker`s claim that the technologies are the decisive factors are arbitrate. In addition the ethics are seldom been influenced by the technologies.

It is true that The customs has changed as the application of the technologies innovations. Some of the old fastival are been keept by the new generations, the details has been changed by the new technologies. Chinese people used to burn paper, candles, and joss sticks to honor the ancestors. Thanks to the Technologies, the pappers are made like the real money, which means send money to the dead ones, and joss sticks and candles are replaced by the electronic bulb so as to save the money and reduce the annoying smoke.

Admittedly, technologies has influence the ethics of today`s people. The tube baby has been created for the families that could not give birth to their own children. However, the cell was fertilized through artificial process, and the father of the children is actually not the real biological father as the sperm are from the anonymous donator. There are many ethic problems arouse along with the new technology. If the children grow up, should they have the right to know their biological father, and should the real biological father have the responsibility to raise the child who he has never met? In fact, our ethic opinion toward this technology has shifted


However, the speaker`s assertion that the technologies are the determine factor are two arbitrate. Many custom and ethics remain the same even the technology developed rapidly. Some of the old Chinese festivals are the same as it was thousands years ago: At the first several days of the New Year, people go round to the neighbors, relatives, and friends to express their best wishes. The consistency is also evident in the ethics, the opinions people hold for the war, murder, and stealth are remain the same.

In sum, the customs and ethics have been changed by the technologies in details, yet, it is have not determined the customs and ethics.

wu-intrepidUID: 2659758

The speaker asserts that the technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics I concede that the customs and ways of living are influenced by the technologies, for the reasons that the technologies in the decades has changed our ways of living. Yet, the speaker`s claim that the technologies are the decisive factors are arbitrate是arbitrary吧. In addition the ethics are seldom been influenced by the technologies.

It is true that The customs has changed as the application of the technologies innovations. Some of the old fastival festival are been keept by the new generations, the details has been changed by the new technologies. Chinese people used to burn paper paper?烧纸？我想老外不理解的, candles, and joss sticks to honor the ancestors. Thanks to the Technologies, the pappers are made like the real money, which means send money to the dead ones, and joss sticks and candles are replaced by the electronic bulb so as to save the money and reduce the annoying smoke. 这段老外一定读晕了，另外其实这个例子不是很强，最多说明技术改变的不是传统，而是我们对传统的践行的方式
Admittedly, technologies has influence the ethics of today`s people. The tube baby has been created for the families that could not give birth to their own children. However, the cell was fertilized through artificial process, and the father of the children is actually not the real biological father as the sperm are from the anonymous donator. There are many ethic problems arouse along with the new technology. If the children grow up, should they have the right to know their biological father, and should the real biological father have the responsibility to raise the child who he has never met? In fact, our ethic opinion toward this technology has shifted这就和你开头的seldom冲突了，除非你说明像这样的例子极少，属于例外才行啊


However, the speaker`s assertion that the technologies are the determine factor are two arbitrate. Many customs and ethics remain the same even the technology 一致用复数吧developed rapidly. Some of the old Chinese festivals are the same as it was thousands years ago: At the first several days of the New Year, people go round to the neighbors, relatives, and friends to express their best wishes. The consistency is also evident in the ethics, the opinions people hold for the war, murder, and stealth are remain the same.想法很好，不过建议从更高度来阐释传统和道德的连续性，要不就太平淡显得没说服力了

In sum, the customs and ethics have been changed by the technologies in details, yet, it is have not determined the customs and ethics.
你是限时的吧，看来字数还不大够，例子的相关性和深度要加强，其实这个问题困扰着所有人,哎..难啊

另外一个建议是，开头能否润色下，开头和argument很像，这样给考官第一印象可能就不好了，J这篇issue开头不错，可参考。总体不错了，多找找素材就行:D

lollipops80UID: 2619379

issue88 by dingyi0311
88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."

The speaker asserts that the technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics. I concede that the customs and ways of living are influenced by the technologies, for the reasons that the technologies in the decades has changed our ways of living. Yet, the speaker`s claim that the technologies are the decisive factors are arbitrary. In addition the ethics are seldom been influenced by the technologies.观点可以的

It is true that customs has changed with the application of technologies innovations. Some of the old fastival are kept by the new generations, the details has been changed by the new technologies. Chinese people used to burn paper, candles, and joss sticks to honor the ancestors. Thanks to new technologies, the pappers are made like the real money, which means send money to the dead ones, and joss sticks and candles are replaced by the electronic bulb so as to save the money and reduce the annoying smoke. 习俗改变了，这个例子可以，但是最好再加一段，说习俗要体现的文化内涵其实没变，人们还是通过了新的方式在纪念先人，这个内涵是不变的，没有受到科技发展的影响

Admittedly, technologies has influence the ethics of today`s people. The tube baby has been created for the families that could not give birth to their own children. However, the cell was fertilized through artificial process, and the father of the children is actually not the real biological father as the sperm are from the anonymous donator. There are many ethic problems arouse along with the new technology. If the children grow up, should they have the right to know their biological father, and should the real biological father have the responsibility to raise the child who he has never met? In fact, our ethic opinion toward this technology has shifted.这个例子不错~~


However, the speaker`s assertion that the technologies are the determine factor are too arbitrate. Many custom and ethics remain the same even the technology developed rapidly. Some of the old Chinese festivals are the same as it was thousands years ago: At the first several days of the New Year, people go round to the neighbors, relatives, and friends to express their best wishes. The consistency is also evident in the ethics, the opinions people hold for the war, evil, and morality are remain the same.最好最后一句展开下，举例子，但是例子本人也没有想出来，汗。。。

In sum, the customs and ethics have been changed by the technologies in details, yet, it dose not determine the customs and ethics.

pinokuUID: 2435028

88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics." The speaker asserts that the technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics I concede that the customs and ways of living are influenced by the technologies, for the reasons that the technologies in the decades has changed our ways of living. Yet, the speaker`s claim that the technologies are the decisive factors are arbitrate. In addition the ethics are seldom been influenced by the technologies. It is true that The customs has changed as the application of the technologies innovations. Some of the old fastival are been keept by the new generations, the details has been changed by the new technologies这句把意思表述的比较好. Chinese people used to burn paper, candles, and joss sticks to honor the ancestors. Thanks to the Technologies, the pappers are made like the real money, which means send money to the dead ones, and joss sticks and candles are replaced by the electronic bulb so as to save the money and reduce the annoying smoke. Admittedly, technologies has influence做名词后加on，做动词变形 the ethics of today`s people. The tube baby has been created for the families that could not give birth to their own children. However, the cell was fertilized through artificial process, and the father of the children is actually not the real biological father as the sperm are from the anonymous donator. There are many ethic problems arouse along with the new technology. If the children grow up, should they have the right to know their biological father, and should the real biological father have the responsibility to raise the child who he has never met? In fact, our ethic opinion toward this technology has shifted However, the speaker`s assertion that the technologies are the determine factor are two arbitrate. Many custom and ethics remain the same even the technology developed rapidly. Some of the old Chinese festivals are the same as it was thousands years ago: At the first several days of the New Year, people go round to the neighbors, relatives, and friends to express their best wishes. The consistency is also evident in the ethics, the opinions people hold for the war, murder, and stealth are remain the same. In sum, the customs and ethics have been changed by the technologies in details, yet, it is have not determined the customs and ethics. 最开始你认为ethics is seldom influenced，但是后来你admittedly以后就没有再阐述你的这个观点，虽然你however段里头有，但是感觉有点混乱。你可以整理一下思绪，然后把逻辑弄的更明白一点。例子可以稍微拓展两句

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