issue226,[color=#1200ff]更BT的题目,做好准备了,大家攻击吧![/color]
Issue 226People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront arc more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
人们错误地认为他们碰到的问题要比他们前辈碰到的问题更复杂、更具挑战性。这个错觉最终会随着知识和经验的积累消失的。
I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness of the threats resulted from deteriorated environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west europe countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments. Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists.
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years. With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening.
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience. (531 words)
最近写的都是BT的,这个感觉是最恐怖的一个,大家批吧
我当靶子! FT!
IMONG吧,怎么改这么个标题啊????
我晕! position
Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
我觉得这个没能抓住题目
题目是"人们会有这个错觉(这个错觉是认为他们比前辈遇到的问题更复杂和有挑战性),但是这个错觉会消失(因为知识和经验的增长)"
而你是说了"他们的确遇到的问题比前辈复杂和有挑战,这些问题都会被解决"
你前半句同意的部分,只是题目里那个错觉的内容,后半句部分和题目无关.没能体现题目里,有错觉,但是错觉会消失这种关系
body1:感觉这种论述的着手点不错,但是具体论述还有些问题
On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution.直到on the one hand结束的部分,都没能体现出这个角度出发得出的结论和more complex的关系,顶多体现出它的enough complex....
body2:
Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area.
论述到这,你的论证过程是
提出个现象A,然后由A-->B
我认为如果下面再有足够说服力的FOR EXAMPLE的话,应该是来解释A->B这个关系,而不是再具体解释这个现象A是个什么样子.
但是你的for example,前面两个例子都是在反复说明这个现象A.....
第三个例子AIDS我看不到和这前面的哪句论述有关....TS?没体现出more.....现象A?和A--B就更不是了....
body3:这个body写的好啊....尤其下面的例子连续堆的爽,很有说服力
偶吹毛求疵了.....啥时候偶对我自己的文章这么挑就好了,分特 本文对题目的观点是部分肯定：
否定这是一个错觉(illusion)，但肯定增加的知识和经验可以解决复杂(complex)和挑战性(challenging)的问题（事实上的消除，而非错觉的消除）。 I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think (前面已经有了in my point of view) it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment(可删) pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness(unconscious) of the threats resulted from deteriorated(可以换成aggravated 避免重复) environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west europe countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.
一个问题: 前人制造的问题,还是当代出现的问题,不都是我们目前要面对的吗(problems we confront today)??而且除了举例以外你并没有证明为什么more complicated
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while (now) what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments.(not only....but also 用的很勉强 我估计可能是先想到这个句式在去想意思怎么表达) Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists.
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written(once appeared) in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years (可不要). With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening(为什么是opening?).
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience.(开头的简单重复 不好) Issue 226
People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront arc more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
人们错误地认为他们碰到的问题要比他们前辈碰到的问题更复杂、更具挑战性。这个错觉最终会随着知识和经验的积累消失的。
I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
部分赞同作者的观点
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness of the threats resulted from deteriorated environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west europe countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.
好像只是证明了有很多问题需要解决，没体现MORE，如果用从前和现在的对比，是不是更能体现“更”字，因为只有有了参照物，才能有比较。
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments. Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists.
这段有点偏
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years. With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening.
没的说，很好！！
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience. (531 words)
最近写的都是BT的,这个感觉是最恐怖的一个,大家批吧
我当靶子!
一点建议，仅供参考！！！！ 谢谢新新小破孩：
直到on the one hand结束的部分,都没能体现出这个角度出发得出的结论和more complex的关系,顶多体现出它的enough complex....
哎！
对，你们都提出来这个问题了
:(
过两天我得好好改改这一块
但是你的for example,前面两个例子都是在反复说明这个现象A.....
啊？
没明白
最近天天写BT题目，写的我彻底晕死掉了
给我讲清楚点啊？
body3:这个body写的好啊....尤其下面的例子连续堆的爽,很有说服力
嘿嘿，这个我爱听
:D :D :D
偶吹毛求疵了.....啥时候偶对我自己的文章这么挑就好了,分特
没事，偶要求你！
哈哈 谢谢九 月爱上乒乓球：
(前面已经有了in my point of view)
噢，对对，忘记了，谢谢提醒！
the environment(可删) pollution
恩，改！
the action of polluting especially by environmental contamination with man-made waste;
while (now) what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments.(not only....but also 用的很勉强 我估计可能是先想到这个句式在去想意思怎么表达)
呵呵，这个倒不是，是写到这儿感觉这么说合适就顺手写了
不过可能表达不清楚吧，回头改改咯
a new prelude for human challenge universe opening(为什么是opening?).
我想说：拉开了新的序幕，不过可能没说清楚吧
(开头的简单重复 不好)
是，写到最后，我快疯了都，想不出来如何结尾了，唉！
有什么好的建议吗？
谢谢！ 谢谢juliozhao
我觉得BODY1确实是没有对比，应该改！
BODY2呢，我没觉得偏啊？只是围绕着题目中的challenging说的，与BODY1的complex呼应，可能还是老毛病吧，没写明白对比
谢谢！ 真有面子啊, 嘿嘿
俺捧个人场儿 :p
宿舍晚上11点熄灯 嘿嘿 现在来看看 不说优点了拉
Issue 226People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront arc more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
人们错误地认为他们碰到的问题要比他们前辈碰到的问题更复杂、更具挑战性。这个错觉最终会随着知识和经验的积累消失的。
I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.（问题的确复杂而困难了，但可以用知识和经验解决）
1。人们面临的问题更复杂且困难 是知识积累和科技发展的结果
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness of the threats resulted from deteriorated environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on（前人造成的问题--言外之意是易于解决？）. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america（嗯？） and west europe countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.（只说了一个全球化带来的问题，我觉得不足以说明今天的问题就比过去复杂了。过去面临的战争还比现在多呢，那举个战争的例子是不是就是说过去比现在复杂呢？还有这个分类，环境问题永远不是一个过去时态的东东，是正在进行的！人们无时无刻不在破坏环境，怎么能推给前人呢？）
2。问题更有挑战性
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments. Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists. （部分从主观需求角度来考虑的，最后举了个医学的例子，完全不相干。我认为挑战性是难度的体现，说出难度来就可以了）
3。问题可以被解决
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years. With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening.（还是得说优点~~嘿嘿~~~我很支持把前面的例子拿到后面再次利用，充分体现了结构的coherence）
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience.
BT题目！！
如果让我写可能大部分赞同作者观点~~~~~因为生活背景不同，远古人的穿衣问题，大概不一定比现在的全球化问题简单~~~~我是这样想的！嘿嘿
只挑毛病了~~其实写得挺好的~~~好多词儿狒狒都没见过！加油！ I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through increasing knowledge and experience.
With the development of the society, problems people confront are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution. As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness(改为unconscious) of the threats resulted from deteriorated environments. Consequently, what we confront(what confronts us) currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west europe countries(不要忽视大小写), gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever. (论证的两个hand似乎没有对比关系)
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy(satisfaction), followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments. Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists. (例子的排列有点乱,既然最后一个例子集中在medicine，那么前面的最好也focus在某个领域；还有，travelling the world 似乎不是scientis所能管得事吧)
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years. With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening.
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience.
再来说说你的开头和结尾，我觉得你的论点在于：1.的确比前人的复杂而有挑战性；2.另外，你要说明这个是事实而不是假象。
但是我觉得你的body第三段稍微做一下调整，将该段的论证点调整为尽管随着科技的进步，这些问题都能被很好的解决，但是这些知识的引入只能更为充分的说明问题的复杂和挑战性。
BTW:我的文章到现在还没人改，版主帮帮忙吧https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/showthread.php?s=&threadid=174187 这篇写的挺棒的，
body 1 more complex
body 2 more challenging （此处写道人们追求精神生活就变得更challenging？可以说说现代人需要掌握更多的信息，更专业化的知识，来解决更复杂更深奥的问题。这才是比过去更challenging 的task）
body 3 可以解决。排比用的不错
不过这个例子The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members.
和increased knowledge and experience 有什么关系？
这里还可以写写贫穷啊，疾病啊，战争啊，等等。
8错，继续努力！ Issue 226
People are mistaken when they assume that the problems they confront are more complex and challenging than the problems faced by their predecessors. This illusion is eventually dispelled with increased knowledge and experience.
人们错误地认为他们碰到的问题要比他们前辈碰到的问题更复杂、更具挑战性。这个错觉最终会随着知识和经验的积累消失的。
I generally agree with the speaker on the assertion that the problems encountered by people nowadays are more complicated and challenging. Nevertheless, in my point of view, I think it is not an illusion, but a truth which could be solved through(by) increasing knowledge and experience.
With the development of the society, problems people confront(which people confronted) are more complex than ever, as a consequence of knowledge accumulating and technology advancing. (the)Problems could be divided into two kinds. On the one hand, some are produced by predecessors, but should be settled as soon as possible in order to prevent them deteriorating further, such as the environment pollution(多举几个). As we know, many severe environment damages produced by our predecessors who were unconsciousness of the threats resulted from(from->in) deteriorated environments. Consequently, what we confront currently is to resolve these problems, for instance, protecting and amending(maintaining) the balance of ecosystem, repairing the ozonosphere and avoiding it further being destroyed, and so on. On the other hand, some problems that appear currently are(去掉are) more complex in that the social situation becomes complicated. Globalization, as an inevitable trend, brings (bring about)many questions about it. It is a fact that some countries’ sovereignty are harmed and some economic benefits are lost, especially some(in) developing countries, while others, developed countries, such as america and west Europe(大写呀) countries, gain most benefits, inducing a drastic discussion about whether globalization should be further promoted. On the contrary, the relationship among countries, some poor countries were controlled by developed countries, was simple and manageable in the past. Therefore, problems we confront today are more complex than ever.
What is more, problems also become more challenging today. Since the living condition is continuously improving, people are not satisfied with the creature comfort, but begin to go in for abundant spiritual satisfy, followed with many curiosities about the undiscovered world. This process is so challenging that although there are many failures, many scientists still continue to dedicate their life into this area. For example, people were just satisfied with dress warmly and ear one's fill in past time, while (nowadays)what they want to pursue is not only this, but also more leisure time and entertainments. Also, the dream of traveling the earth is another challenging tasks. As for the medicine, many diseases could not be cured now, such as AIDS, then seeking the way to solve them are so appealing to many scientists.
Although there are so many complex and challenging tasks, all these difficulties could be solved with the increasing knowledge and experience. Some environment problems, such as sewage and greenhouse effect, are partly solved by advanced equipment. The damages resulted in globalization for developing countries are being harmonized through some international unions, such as WTO, regional economic cooperation, whose purpose is try to bring maximum benefit for all members. The dreams of exploring universe, as written in fairy tales, are gaining some breakthrough along with getting attention as a challenge in recent years. With the space airplane first landed in the moon, a new prelude for human challenge universe opening.
To sum up, although the problems we meet nowadays are truly more complex and challenging than ever, they could be solved through accumulating knowledge and experience. (531 words)
你的语言挺好，值得我们学习，请教你怎么有这么丰富的词语，是不是需要背范文呀！ 好幸福呀,有这么多人给你该文章