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100) The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Also, a number of well-known jazz musicians own homes in Monroe. Nevertheless, the nearest jazz club is over an hour away. Given the popularity of jazz in Monroe and a recent nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment, a jazz music club in Monroe would be tremendously profitable.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

结论：
A jazz music club in Monroe would be tremendously profitable
      
论据：
1. Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe
(1) Over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer
(2) The highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight.
(3) A number of well-known jazz musicians own homes in Monroe.
(4) The nearest jazz club is over an hour away
2. A recent nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment

开头：
The application argues that a great amount of money can be earned by setting up a jazz music club in Monroe, because of the popularity of jazz in Moroe and a report stating they will pay a lot on jazz entertainment. More information, nevertheless, is necessary to evaluate the arguement, such as the exactly number of jazz fan in Moroe, the will of them to pay for jazz entertainment, and the type of jazz entertainment they prefer.   

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