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唔……经常因为担心概括写多了头重脚轻就略去了……看来还是要练习精简的本领啊
抄写完整原题
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5) The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
列出结论
The town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season.
列出论据
mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation
The neighboring island of Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals,and 50 percent annual reduction was achieved last year on Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.
写出开头段的第一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据。
The author attempt to argue that due to the limits on mopeds rentals adopted by neighboring island of Seaville’s town council and considerable reduction on accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island, where mopeds also serve as a popular form of transportation , should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season.
我还是觉得我写得太长了…………
第二篇：
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The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books.
"We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
列出结论
We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store.Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section
列出论据
-Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers.
-children's book section will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten.
-Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books
写出开头段的第一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据。
The recommender suggest that Monarch Books open a café in its store,making space from the children's book section ,which he or she believe is losing its significance since it’s reported that percentage of the population under age ten has declined largely.The recommender propound that opening a café would enable Monarch Books to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books.
这里有个小问题，不知道“提建议的人”应该怎么表达。advisor似乎是专业顾问，不知有没有那个单词可以指“热心提建议的顾客（群众）”
这篇还是觉得长，第三篇采用类似老师写的缩减版的吧……
【第三篇】
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Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
列出结论
Nature's Way’s next franchise in the town of Plainsville should prove to be bery successful.
列出论据
-Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives
- Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs.
-The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full.
-Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
写出开头段的第一部分，概括原题中的结论和主要论据。
The author argue that next franchise of Nature’s Way in the town of Plainsville should meet a great success.The author is confident about this prediction since Nature’s Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives,and several evidences imply that residents of Plainsville seems to possess a quite positive attitude upon keeping healthy.
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