issue43 领导者和道德伦理标准,欢迎拍砖!
43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."I agree with the speaker's assertion that effective leaders necessitate high ethical and moral standard, for the reason that certain ethical and moral standard is the prerequisite for leaders to approach success in their career. However, nobody can deny these exist numerous effective leaders whose personal morality did not adversely affect their leadership. With the rapid development of public supervision system, these specific circumstances will be definitely decline even disappear. Moreover, it is unnecessary and infeasible to require the highest ethical and moral standards for every leader.
High ethical and moral standard can contribute to the ultimate fulfillment of leaders' goals. In the political realm, public leaders must manifest high ethical and moral standards to their constituency, in order to earn trust and reputation from the public to be elected and obtain their position. People would not believe in a public official with stains in moral and ethic records. A case in point is the former President of American, Nixon, who lost the support from constituency and forfeited his position, resulted from immoral behavior in Watergate Cover-up. Similarly, in the realm of economy, the criterion to evaluate business leaders lies in not simply the accomplishment of profit maximization but also fulfilling certain measures of high moral and ethnical obligation to customers and society. For example, some business leaders use inferior raw materials in production, or emit toxic effluents into rivers nearby in order to cut off cost. Experience informs us that any attempts to maximize profits at the expense of public’s health and interests would inevitably and inexorably fail in the end.
Admittedly, there are some leaders who effectively led their people accomplish successes did not have high reputation in morality and ethics, such as the former American presidents John Kennedy and Bill Clinton. Yet, with the development of public supervision system, these leaders would definitely receive less and less welcome from the populace. Under the closer scrutiny from mess media and other fields, leaders are asked to increase moral and ethnical awareness in the process of fulfill their accomplishments. In this case, the phenomenon such as power abuse and corruption are likely to be effectively avoided, therefore benefiting the wholesome development of the society.
On the other hand, it is not necessary to require leaders of any field to maintain the highest moral and ethnical standards. As for political leaders, their major tasks involve keeping the stable social order and balance the interests of different groups. It is impossible for these leaders to take into account every part’s interest in the highest moral standard. As for economic leaders, their major tasks lie in maximizing economic profits at the lowest cost. The highest moral standard to society implies that they should completely donate their products to people who need them. In fact, leaders in many realms should strike a balance between their basic tasks as leaders and certain obligation to people and society. As for the highest moral and ethical standards, it can be regarded as an ideal, which cannot be realized in the practical experience for most leaders.
In conclusion, maintaining high moral and ethical standard serves as one of the necessary factors to benefit for leaders’ fulfilling ultimate goals. Along with the advancement of public supervision system, ethical and moral standards will be paid increasingly attention by the society. Nevertheless, people should not ask the highest ethical and moral standards to every leader regardless of their basic leadership responsibilities and practical circumstances.
拍完后请发联接在下面. 43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
I agree with the speaker's assertion that effective leaders necessitate high ethical and moral standard, for the reason that certain ethical and moral standard is the prerequisite for leaders to approach success in their career. However, nobody can deny these exist existing numerous effective leaders whose personal morality did not adversely affect their leadership. With the rapid development of public supervision system, these specific circumstances 你说的这个specific circumstances 指的是什么?? personal morality 还是别的什么 will be definitely decline even disappear. Moreover, it is unnecessary and infeasible to require the highest ethical and moral standards for every leader.
High ethical and moral standard can contribute to the ultimate fulfillment of leaders' goals. In the political realm, public leaders must manifest high ethical and moral standards to their constituency, in order to earn trust and reputation from the public to be elected and obtain their position. People would not believe in a public official with stains in moral and ethic records. A case in point is the former President of American, Nixon, who lost the support from constituency and forfeited his position, resulted from immoral behavior in Watergate Cover-up. Similarly, in the realm of economy, the criterion to evaluate business leaders lies in not simply the accomplishment of profit maximization
but also fulfilling certain measures of high moral and ethnical obligation to customers and society. For example, some business leaders use inferior raw materials in production, or emit toxic effluents into rivers nearby in order to cut off cost. Experience informs us that any attempts to maximize profits at the expense of public’s health and interests would inevitably and inexorably fail in the end.
Admittedly, there are some leaders who effectively led their people accomplish successes 这个说的有点太general, 要specific, 比如economical development did not have high reputation in morality and ethics , such as the former American presidents John Kennedy and Bill Clinton. Yet, with the development of public supervision system, these leaders would definitely receive less and less welcome from the populace 前面讲的是accomplish success without high personal morality and ethics, 后面又直接说 less welcome populace, 这个之间有点矛盾, 中间是不是少了点什么, 比如承让一下 . Under the closer scrutiny from mess massmedia and other fields, leaders are asked 用appealed 更好把,to increase moral and ethnical awareness in the process of fulfillfulfilling their accomplishments. In this case, the phenomenon such as power abuse and corruption are likely to be effectively avoided, therefore benefiting the wholesome development of the society. 你这段写的有点前后不照应, 从最初看你想写尽管有些人没有 high personal morality,你的例子也是这么举出来的. 也可以获得effectiveness, 从后面看却是表达有了mass media的supervision , 道德可以逐步的提高,中间有点转折的过大了. 我觉得不如这么写, 让步尽管有些人可能有morality的问题,不过有舆论的监督和督促, 他们改正后了仍然可以是个effective leader, 比如 Clinton .
On the other hand, it is not necessary to require leaders of any field to maintain the highest moral and ethnical standards. As for political leaders, their major tasks involve keeping the stable social order and balance counterbalance the interests of different groups. It is impossible for these leaders to take into account every part’s interest in the highest moral standard. As for economic leaders, their major tasks lie in maximizing economic profits at the lowest cost. The highest moral standard to society implies that they should completely donate their products to people who need them. 后面再说一句,which apparent cannot be fulfilled for the limitation of finite resource and on behalf of the stockholders In fact, leaders in many realms should strike a balance between their basic tasks as leaders and certain obligation to people and society. As for the highest moral and ethical standards, it can be regarded as an ideal, which cannot be realized in the practical experience for most leaders.
In conclusion, maintaining high moral and ethical standard serves as one of the necessary factors to benefit for leaders’ fulfilling ultimate goals. Along with the advancement of public supervision system, ethical and moral standards will be paid increasingly attention by the society. Nevertheless, people should not ask the highest ethical and moral standards to every leader regardless of their basic leadership responsibilities and practical circumstances.
你的作文又进步了, 前后照应的关系在这篇文章里面体现的比较好
BTW,你例子中的肯尼迪,指的是什么丑闻??
Re: issue43 领导者和道德伦理标准,欢迎拍砖!
43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."I agree with the speaker's assertion that effective leaders necessitate high ethical and moral standard, for the reason that certain ethical and moral standard is the prerequisite for leaders to approach success in their career. However, nobody can deny these exist existingnumerous effective leaders whose personal morality did not adversely affect their leadership. With the rapid development of public supervision system, these specific circumstances will be definitely decline even disappear. Moreover, it is unnecessary and infeasible to require the highest ethical and moral standards for every leader. 开头极其好，不过with the rapid一句似乎有点多余
High ethical and moral standard can contribute to the ultimate fulfillment of leaders' goals这段的中心似乎是反过来说的，即not high standards do harm to the fulfillment….. In the political realm, public leaders must manifest high ethical and moral standards to their constituency, in order to earn trust and reputation from the public to be elected and obtain their position. People would not believe in a public official with stains in moral and ethic records. A case in point is the former President of American, Nixon, who lost the support from constituency and forfeited his position, resulted from immoral behavior in Watergate Cover-up. Similarly, in the realm of economy, the criterion to evaluate business leaders lies in not simply the accomplishment of profit maximization but also fulfilling certain measures of high moral and ethnical obligation to customers and society. For example, some business leaders use inferior raw materials in production, or emit toxic effluents into rivers nearby in order to cut off cost. Experience informs us that any attempts to maximize profits at the expense of public’s health and interests would inevitably and inexorably fail 这里只是说这种行为会失败，似乎与中心句(high ethical standards can contribute to the ultimate goal)离得比较远in the end. 这段的用词和表述都非常好，学习中。。。。
Admittedly, there are some leaders who effectively led their people accomplish successes did not have high reputation in morality and ethics, such as the former American presidents John Kennedy and Bill Clinton. Yet, with the development of public supervision system, these leaders would definitely receive less and less welcome from the populace. Under the closer scrutiny from mess media and other fields, leaders are asked to increase moral and ethnical awareness in the process of fulfill their accomplishments. In this case, the phenomenon such as power abuse and corruption are likely to be effectively avoided, therefore benefiting the wholesome development of the society. 对逻辑有点小意见: 现代社会监督机制好---所以不怕corruption和Power abuse。但这个好像跟中心句some leaders didn’t have high reputation有差异
On the other hand, it is not necessary to require leaders of any field to maintain the highest moral and ethnical standards. As for political leaders, their major tasks involve keeping the stable social order and balance the interests of different groups. It is impossible for these leaders to take into account every part’s interest in the highest moral standard. As for economic leaders, their major tasks lie in maximizing economic profits at the lowest cost. The highest moral standard to society implies that they should completely donate their products to people who need them好像有点过分，批卷的鬼子同意吗？. In fact, leaders in many realms should strike a balance between their basic tasks as leaders and certain obligation to people and society.你的意思是赚钱或者政治目标和obligation to people有冲突。但是这一点似乎没展开。后面as for 一句就去转向论述high standards不实际，逻辑跳跃 As for the highest moral and ethical standards, it can be regarded as an ideal, which cannot be realized in the practical experience for most leaders.
In conclusion, maintaining high moral and ethical standard serves as one of the necessary factors to benefit for leaders’ fulfilling ultimate goals. Along with the advancement of public supervision system, ethical and moral standards will be paid increasingly attention by the society. Nevertheless, people should not ask the highest ethical and moral standards to every leader regardless of their basic leadership responsibilities and practical circumstances. hehe,语言基础好的人开头结尾总是很不错，没什么困难。羡慕
感觉可以5.5了，佩服+加油！ 谢谢楼上砖头.谢谢鼓励.但个人感觉4.5就不错了.限时后写了500多字,很多没有论述清楚.思维不连贯.政治类的比较难写,有意补充了 一些词汇,但是写起来还是显得比较贫乏.
先去补充物质食粮,下午回拍! 猫猫不错啊,
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