- 最后登录
- 2008-5-18
- 在线时间
- 0 小时
- 寄托币
- 488
- 声望
- 0
- 注册时间
- 2004-12-11
- 阅读权限
- 15
- 帖子
- 0
- 精华
- 0
- 积分
- 198
- UID
- 189090
- 声望
- 0
- 寄托币
- 488
- 注册时间
- 2004-12-11
- 精华
- 0
- 帖子
- 0
|
43"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
I agree with the speaker's assertion that effective leaders necessitate high ethical and moral standard, for the reason that certain ethical and moral standard is the prerequisite for leaders to approach success in their career. However, nobody can deny these exist existing numerous effective leaders whose personal morality did not adversely affect their leadership. With the rapid development of public supervision system, these specific circumstances 你说的这个specific circumstances 指的是什么?? personal morality 还是别的什么 will be definitely decline even disappear. Moreover, it is unnecessary and infeasible to require the highest ethical and moral standards for every leader.
High ethical and moral standard can contribute to the ultimate fulfillment of leaders' goals. In the political realm, public leaders must manifest high ethical and moral standards to their constituency, in order to earn trust and reputation from the public to be elected and obtain their position. People would not believe in a public official with stains in moral and ethic records. A case in point is the former President of American, Nixon, who lost the support from constituency and forfeited his position, resulted from immoral behavior in Watergate Cover-up. Similarly, in the realm of economy, the criterion to evaluate business leaders lies in not simply the accomplishment of profit maximization
but also fulfilling certain measures of high moral and ethnical obligation to customers and society. For example, some business leaders use inferior raw materials in production, or emit toxic effluents into rivers nearby in order to cut off cost. Experience informs us that any attempts to maximize profits at the expense of public’s health and interests would inevitably and inexorably fail in the end.
Admittedly, there are some leaders who effectively led their people accomplish successes 这个说的有点太general, 要specific, 比如economical development did not have high reputation in morality and ethics , such as the former American presidents John Kennedy and Bill Clinton. Yet, with the development of public supervision system, these leaders would definitely receive less and less welcome from the populace 前面讲的是accomplish success without high personal morality and ethics, 后面又直接说 less welcome populace, 这个之间有点矛盾, 中间是不是少了点什么, 比如承让一下 . Under the closer scrutiny from mess massmedia and other fields, leaders are asked 用appealed 更好把,to increase moral and ethnical awareness in the process of fulfillfulfilling their accomplishments. In this case, the phenomenon such as power abuse and corruption are likely to be effectively avoided, therefore benefiting the wholesome development of the society. 你这段写的有点前后不照应, 从最初看你想写尽管有些人没有 high personal morality,你的例子也是这么举出来的. 也可以获得effectiveness, 从后面看却是表达有了mass media的supervision , 道德可以逐步的提高,中间有点转折的过大了. 我觉得不如这么写, 让步尽管有些人可能有morality的问题,不过有舆论的监督和督促, 他们改正后了仍然可以是个effective leader, 比如 Clinton .
On the other hand, it is not necessary to require leaders of any field to maintain the highest moral and ethnical standards. As for political leaders, their major tasks involve keeping the stable social order and balance counterbalance the interests of different groups. It is impossible for these leaders to take into account every part’s interest in the highest moral standard. As for economic leaders, their major tasks lie in maximizing economic profits at the lowest cost. The highest moral standard to society implies that they should completely donate their products to people who need them. 后面再说一句,which apparent cannot be fulfilled for the limitation of finite resource and on behalf of the stockholders In fact, leaders in many realms should strike a balance between their basic tasks as leaders and certain obligation to people and society. As for the highest moral and ethical standards, it can be regarded as an ideal, which cannot be realized in the practical experience for most leaders.
In conclusion, maintaining high moral and ethical standard serves as one of the necessary factors to benefit for leaders’ fulfilling ultimate goals. Along with the advancement of public supervision system, ethical and moral standards will be paid increasingly attention by the society. Nevertheless, people should not ask the highest ethical and moral standards to every leader regardless of their basic leadership responsibilities and practical circumstances.
你的作文又进步了, 前后照应的关系在这篇文章里面体现的比较好
BTW,你例子中的肯尼迪,指的是什么丑闻?? |
|