issue147 凌晨限时烂文.
本来想睡了,可是算算没几天了.感觉到紧张.就练了一篇,感受一下.想看的大概骂两句.给点动力!谢谢大家了147"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
I fundamentally agree with the speaker that tradition and modernization, in most instances, are incompatible, even reject each other. However, the speaker cannot arbitrarily claim that people must choose between them, for the reason that they are not mutually exclusive under some circumstances. People should not overlook they are coexistent and interaction between them.
It is believed that tradition usually means rigid and static, while tradition concerns reforming and fashion. They are incompatible, even reject and exclusive each other. For the supportive example, people should look no further than so-called generation gaps between young people and their parents. With the rapid development of communication methods and mass media, young people are more concern with fashion. They wear jeans pants in whenever seasons, which are deliberately tattered on the keens. Boys wear earrings and other decorations, while girls say bad words and smoke. All phenomena mentioned above cannot be accepted by parents, whose ideas are relatively traditional. In this case, generation gaps are generated, which exert negative impacts on the communication between the young and their parents.
In social level, there exist many controversies, which are related to tradition and modernization. In the field of urban planning, cities planners usually find that some old buildings stand on the position available to new buildings or roads, which are essential to the prosperity of cities. On the other hand, these old buildings always possess historical and architectural values that cannot be replicated any more, or they are typical symbols of certain bygone era and focus on citizens’ emotions. Faced with these problems, tradition and modernization reject each other. The best ways to address these dilemmas lie in moving the old buildings and retrofitting old ones to accommodate current needs. However, in most instances, these compromises mean large funds which are not infeasible. Therefore, the controversy between tradition and modernization inevitably and inexorably occurs in people's working and living.
On the other hand, people should not overlook that, under some circumstances, tradition and modernization can coexist and interact with each other. Firstly, modernization mostly evolves from tradition. In the scientific areas, the accomplishments of predecessors provide the foundation upon which offspring advancement and progress depend. For example, the heliocentric theory of Copernicus paves the way for Galileo's falling objects theory. And this achievement offers the basis for Newton's Earth gavial theory, on which the classic physics rely. Secondly, in art fields, though there are numerous innovative genres in modern times, most of them are based on traditional principles. The modern design elements and forms accord with the basic aesthetic rules--that is symmetry, harmony and balance. In music, popular types of music, such as rock-and-roll, are based on seven-note scale.
In conclusion, even though the controversy between tradition and modernization cannot be avoided under some circumstances, people should not arbitrarily assume that they are definitely mutually exclusive. With the development of society, people will create many ways to benefit coexistence of them. 站一个 147"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
Tradition VS modernization
I fundamentally agree with the speaker that tradition and modernization, in most instances, are incompatible, even reject each other删掉. However, the speaker cannot arbitrarily claim that people must choosemake a choice between them, for the reason that they are not mutually exclusive under some circumstances. People should not overlook they are coexistent and interaction between theminterrelated with each other.
提出观点，不同意作者的观点，因为在一些情况下T&M是互相联系的
It is believed that tradition usuallyit is usually believed that means rigid and static, while traditionM concerns reforming and fashion. T=rigid and static VS M= fashionable所以两者不相容They are incompatible你觉得是否应该用个信号词, even reject and exclusive动词形容词如何并列呢 each other. For the supportive example, people should look no further than so-called generation gapsgap between young peoplekids and their parents. With the rapid development of communication methods and mass media, young people are more concern with fashion. They wear jeans pants in whenever seasons, which are deliberately tattered on the keens. Boys wear earrings and other decorations, while girls say bad words?girls就不能说bad words，再说应该是dirty words and smoke?got smoking. All phenomena mentioned above cannot be accepted by parents, whose ideas are relatively traditional. In this case, generation gaps are generated, which exert negative impacts on the communication between the young and their parents.
In social level, there exist many controversies, which are related to tradition and modernization. In the field of urban planning, cities planners usually find that some old buildings stand on the position available to new buildings or roads, which are essential to the prosperity of cities. On the other hand?结构上，看这里和下一段是什么关系, these old buildings always possess historical and architectural values that cannot be replicated any more, or they are typical symbols of certain bygone era and focus on citizens’ emotions. Faced with these problems, tradition and modernization reject each other. The best ways to address these dilemmas lie in moving the old buildings and retrofitting old ones to accommodate current needs. However, in most instances, these compromises mean large funds which are not infeasible. Therefore, the controversy between tradition and modernization inevitably and inexorably occurs in people's working and living.
On the other hand, people should not overlook that, under some circumstances, tradition and modernization can coexist and interact with each other. Firstly, modernization mostly evolves from tradition. In the scientific areas, the accomplishments of predecessors provide the foundation upon which offspring advancement and progress depend. For example, the heliocentric theory of Copernicus paves the way for Galileo's falling objects theory. And this achievement offers the basis for Newton's Earth gavial theory, on which the classic physics rely. Secondly, in art fields, though there are numerous innovative genres in modern times, most of them are based on traditional principles. The modern design elements and forms accord with the basic aesthetic rules--that is symmetry, harmony and balance. In music, popular types of music, such as rock-and-roll, are based on seven-note scale. 看不出来Firstly和secondly有什么本质的区别，似乎都是M有着T的基础
In conclusion, even though the controversy between tradition and modernization cannot be avoided under some circumstances, people should not arbitrarily assume that they are definitely mutually exclusive. With the development of society, people will create many ways to benefit coexistence of them.
这篇文章我想说这么几句：文章的安排重新设计一下：第一段肯定两者冲突的地方，举例以文化冲突可以，代沟的影响因素很多。我想是否可以直接写文化、思想、穿着这样的事实即可，不必写出原因是代沟造成的，要写也是总结性的带一句，因为你这里讨论的是冲突，不是找原因，你说呢？第二，文章第二段说人们对T和M有着controversial的看法，我看还不如直接如他们相容，如上海的东方之珠附近的建筑围绕着现代的建筑等等；第三，可以写T是M的基础，举科学的例子可以，文章遣词用句很熟练，前面的文章都不错，这篇可能是草率成文，结构有些不敢苟同，希望引起大家讨论 davidjacky, 谢谢斑竹的指点.确实有点草率了.感觉快考了.心也乱了.一定好好学习一下.重写一篇.
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