决战830拍砖组8月16日作业 ISSUE154同主题高频狂练,请兄弟们狂拍
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320071 申请加入 29日考我的文章https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=319722&fpage=1&highlight=
决战830拍砖组tm 交作业
第一篇 issuehttps://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320149
第二篇,这个主题让我没什么信心,大家帮我看看吧 issue
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320518
第三篇 argument
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320606
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https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320246 luxury 8.29(南京) 93073209(合肥)
argument 46 以前写的,帮忙拍拍吧,南京7.29考过....总次数12次
By citing a nineteenth century explorer's account and a recent research into the language and legends of the Innu ,the arguer conclude that there probably were grizzly bears in Labrador, and the explorer's account probably accurately identified the bear. However, the arguer’s dispute relies on a series of unverified assumptions and is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.
To begin with, the arguer assumes that there probably were grizzly bears in Labrador just on account of that the recent research indicates that their language has two different kinds of bears and their legends describe the diverse characteristics of the alternative of bears. Yet the assumption amount to scant evidence to increase the reliability. On grounds of the legends, it just indicates that there were two different kinds of the bears, nevertheless there is no evidence regarding these two bears are black bears and grizzly bears. It is possible that they are other two bears that have been extinct long before. And as the legends said that they also attribute different characteristics of the two kinds of bears, however no reason attributed to say that they are the black bear's and grizzly bear's characteristics at all.
Furthermore, even if the two kinds of bears are the conclusion said, yet we can not conclude that they are all come from the western of Canadian-Labrador. The arguer overlooks that the ancient people prefer traveling, and it is entirely possible that they traveled from the west to the east where they found the grizzly bears .Since the argument could not give the information concerning where the ancient people found the two kinds of bears, it cannot convince me that there probably were grizzly bears in the province of Labrador.
Another assumption is that on basis of the explorer's account he or she come to the conclusion ,it is also unwarranted just because that the arguer does not consider when and where the exploring happened. Perhaps that the location is the forest where there were so many trees that there was not enough light to see the appearance of the bears; Or perhaps that the time is the afternoon even the night ,if true ,the explorer's account is more convincible . Moreover, in that dangerous place and time ,the explorer did not have the enough time to have a aborative look at the bears ,and the grizzly bears have a similar color with the black bears. In short, without ruling out all of the possibilities, the arguer cannot convince me of the conclusion just because of the problematic explorer's account.
As it stands, the recommendation can be rejected out of hand just on accounts that the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what arguer maintains. To strengthen the conclusion ,the arguer should provide better evidence that what the legend said indeed are the black bears and grizzly bears and where the legend happened is the province of Labrador; Another evidence needed is that when the exploring happened ,what the explorer seen is the grizzly bear. 楼上的 还是把链接贴进来的好 方便大家帮你改 呵呵:)
帮忙拍拍了,以前写的,呵呵 ,谢谢了,同拍
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320328决战830拍砖组™"8月１６日作业 ARG156同主题高频狂练,请兄弟们狂拍
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320330&page=1#pid1745097 谁帮忙改一下，谢谢了，我也帮你改https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=320335 issue 136 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=319527
a117https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=318821&page=1#pid1735733
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A200 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=318631&fpage=1&highlight=
A131 https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=319894&fpage=1&highlight= 今天有事来晚了 还没写好呢 马上赶... 晚点再来, 大家努力! 申请加入，BKRL1234,北京的 9.6。
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argument 19
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=318814&page=1#pid1735688