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1.电视会减少人和人之间沟通。
Television impairs communications between people. Thinking about the last time you sit down talking about your deep feelings with your parents, you may find it hard to track because it has been a while. Fascinating TV programmes in the electric magic box, have trapped people among all age and alienate them from their supposed close relatives and friends. When getting tired, throwing yourself on the couch, you turn on the television driven by subconscious. When resorting to entertainment, you without hesitation indulge yourself in the true-to-life sound and visual effects of a movie rather than going out with a friend. People nowadays tend to avoid connections with other individuals and focus on the one readily accessible but negative source to spend their time.

作文永远的痛，始终停步不前，自己也知道写的乱七八糟，但是也没什么入手点改正。不管是考试还是小站批改，都在22,23，一方面是我拼写这一点上有很大问题，另一方面是不爱举例，也举不出例子。没有什么经验，希望大家有空来批评我的文段，或者可以发自己的上来，没事儿交流交流。