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题目：ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
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日期：3/19/2009 Date 9:38

Napoleon, Lincoln, Washington, these names immediately pop into our mind when one refers the French Revolution, Civil War, and Independence War. It is these famous few, more exactly, the heroes, which lead to their country to go through any critical mire, many people would question that how can we neglect the crucial groups of people which also make great effort to their country? In my perspective, these people cannot compare to the famous few in that it is them who make great contribution to the society.

It is these famous few who provide the necessary impetus to facilitate the reform of the history. Were their trenchant analysis and insightful project to impel the success of progress in their society, their country will never be as developed as it is today. Roosevelt, one of the greatest presidents in the history of American, was renowned by numerous American in that it is his efforts that help America go through the Depression. Thanks to his New Deal, which not only helped America go through the chaos but also restored the credence and confidence of its citizens toward their motherland. It is his resolutely projection that propel the reform of American's history. Were not his great contribution, the American could hardly go through the chaos as quickly as it were. Roosevelt, the famous few, who renders American a satisfactory memory and tell us that his fame will never be faded with time passing by. Consequently, the famous few accelerate the reform of the history.

Emphasizing the specific individuals could render us role models that can be emulated. In such a fierce society, competition is just around the corner and we have to face challenge everyday. How could individuals to keep pace with others and never be tired of? The role models which could set up an fabulous example that we all have an ambitious power to conquer anything in order to emulate them. Beethoven was renowned by many students who are learning the piano. The ultimate goal of an ambitious child may be surpass Beethoven, then, he may devote much time and energy to play piano. Thanks to Beethoven, the child may not only learn his extreme enthusiasm to the music, but also the persistence into his interests. It is Beethoven that gives a child the unprecedentedly propulsion to surpass him. If there is not such a role model but only a group of masses which are all said to be genius, how could a child insist his playing without any suspicion and tiredness?
This kind of emphasizing can give us much great man which may potentially another "Beethoven". Thus, a specific individual can be viewed as role models to emulate.

Those who oppose the author may claim that if there were not the contribution of the masses, there could be any progress since they are the genuine conductor. Admittedly, no one can deny the fact that owing to their effort, many pressing issues can be settled down. However, if there has no such a famous few who give them insightful orientation to the right way, the masses would never achieve anything but merely the ambitious and conviction. Such as, Zhu geliang, one of the famous leaders in ancient China, had come up with many strategies to help his country to win much crucial battle and therefore the country has a fast development in that era. Indeed, the soldiers are the ones who face their enemy and win numerous campaign, however, if there is in absence of such an insightful famous few that orient the most efficient way to them, it is highly possible that they are just a group of mobs, it is hard for them to achieve anything, let alone the prosperity and security of their country. Hence, those famous few made greater contribution than the nameless masses.

The famous few, which are the reformer of a society and can be viewed as role models and give a profound influence on their offspring, should be given substantial emphasis rather than those groups of people.

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