【我心飞翔】四月组五月组Assignment-4.2
作文题目： Argument 152The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of Bargain Brand Cereals.
One year ago we introduced our first product, Bargain Brand breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies. Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices and although several plan to introduce their own budget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit. Given our success in selling cereal, we recommend that Bargain Brand now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
要求：
1. 本次为4月5月组成员第六次作文assignment，限时60分钟，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时不可以上网，写作过程中不可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查就盲目提交的第一次警告处理，如果第二次再犯将踢出小组
参加本次作文成员：Compe, Queo1993, wstfw, pandazhao, foamfly, shimeng0316, jie_lanfeng, lyb342
互改分组为：
Compe和pandazhao
Queo1993和lyb342
wstfw和shimeng0316
foamfly和jie_lanfeng
Deadline：April,03,2013. 22:00
Revise Deadline：April,04,2013. 22:0
赞一个，辛苦Robin了！ 本帖最后由 pandazhao 于 2013-4-4 19:23 编辑
Time: 60min Word count:456
有一个问题想和大家讨论下：题目说是memo to director, 应该是其他人写给directors的吧？如果是directors claim应该是memo from directors吧？ :lol 本帖最后由 lyb342 于 2013-4-4 17:31 编辑
用了1小时列提纲，之后用50min写完这篇Argument，这样是不是违反规定？
（>_<#之前不限时养成了先打草稿再写作的习惯...）
@queo1993，改起！
queo1993少年，改好啦，这两次我改的有点狠（包括上次jie_lanfeng的）可能有不对的地方。
有问题随时交流哈~
本帖最后由 wstfw 于 2013-4-4 09:30 编辑
不好意思，我二了，回错了贴。
打字一小时以内。
shimeng~：
come on！楼下的~： 本帖最后由 shimeng0316 于 2013-4-4 21:27 编辑
90分钟，没达到要求~~ 本帖最后由 queo1993 于 2013-4-4 21:10 编辑
上午下的，下午修改了一下。刚回来竟然忘了上传，已经deadline了，不好意思
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@lyb342 改好啦
本帖最后由 compe 于 2013-4-4 22:40 编辑
写完啦，不好意思晚了点。
584词，60分钟。:victory: Jie_lanfeng 发表于 2013-4-3 21:04 static/image/common/back.gif
请查收！~~~^_^ foamfly 发表于 2013-4-4 00:10 static/image/common/back.gif
请查收！~~~^_^
你表达的很清楚呢，在修改的同时，我把我认为的好词也标记了下:p wstfw 发表于 2013-4-3 21:12 static/image/common/back.gif
不好意思，我二了，回错了贴。
打字一小时以内。
差点忘了改~~快来查收啦！ shimeng0316 发表于 2013-4-4 21:29 static/image/common/back.gif
差点忘了改~~快来查收啦！
我也差点忘了收了~thank you！ pandazhao 发表于 2013-4-3 14:32 static/image/common/back.gif
Time: 60min Word count:456
有一个问题想和大家讨论下：题目说是memo to director, 应该是其他人写给di ...
应该是给director的。我写错了。
在朗文上查到的例句a memo from the managing director to all heads of department
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