【我心飞翔】四月组五月组Assignment-4.2

crazyrobinUID：2368627

作文题目： Argument 152

The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of Bargain Brand Cereals.


One year ago we introduced our first product, Bargain Brand breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies. Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices and although several plan to introduce their own budget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit. Given our success in selling cereal, we recommend that Bargain Brand now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible.


Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

要求：
1. 本次为4月5月组成员第六次作文assignment，限时60分钟，字数要求：min 400 words；
2. 写作时不可以上网，写作过程中不可以使用google 或 wikipedia 等搜索写作素材；
3. 写完后请用word文档保存，将自己的名字写在文档题目中。在本贴中回复，发附件上传；
4. 请提交之前更改好拼写错误和语法错误，用红字在后面标出
5. 不检查就盲目提交的第一次警告处理，如果第二次再犯将踢出小组
参加本次作文成员：Compe, Queo1993, wstfw, pandazhao, foamfly, shimeng0316, jie_lanfeng, lyb342

互改分组为：

Compe和pandazhao
Queo1993和lyb342
wstfw和shimeng0316
foamfly和jie_lanfeng


Deadline：April,03,2013. 22:00
Revise Deadline：April,04,2013. 22:0

xiesisiminervaUID：2997765

赞一个，辛苦Robin了！

pandazhaoUID：3421515

Time: 60min Word count:456

有一个问题想和大家讨论下：题目说是memo to director, 应该是其他人写给directors的吧？如果是directors claim应该是memo from directors吧？

foamflyUID：3337580

:lol

lyb342UID：3410389

用了1小时列提纲，之后用50min写完这篇Argument，这样是不是违反规定？
（>_<#之前不限时养成了先打草稿再写作的习惯...）

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@queo1993，改起！

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queo1993少年，改好啦，这两次我改的有点狠（包括上次jie_lanfeng的）可能有不对的地方。
有问题随时交流哈~

Jie_lanfengUID：3409324

wstfwUID：3170761

不好意思，我二了，回错了贴。

打字一小时以内。
shimeng~：

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come on！楼下的~：

shimeng0316UID：3127261

90分钟，没达到要求~~

queo1993UID：3397710

上午下的，下午修改了一下。刚回来竟然忘了上传，已经deadline了，不好意思

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@lyb342 改好啦

compeUID：3404227

写完啦，不好意思晚了点。
584词，60分钟。:victory:

foamflyUID：3337580

Jie_lanfeng 发表于 2013-4-3 21:04

请查收！~~~^_^

Jie_lanfengUID：3409324

foamfly 发表于 2013-4-4 00:10
请查收！~~~^_^

你表达的很清楚呢，在修改的同时，我把我认为的好词也标记了下:p

shimeng0316UID：3127261

wstfw 发表于 2013-4-3 21:12
不好意思，我二了，回错了贴。

打字一小时以内。

差点忘了改~~快来查收啦！

wstfwUID：3170761

shimeng0316 发表于 2013-4-4 21:29
差点忘了改~~快来查收啦！

我也差点忘了收了~thank you！

wstfwUID：3170761

pandazhao 发表于 2013-4-3 14:32
Time: 60min Word count:456

有一个问题想和大家讨论下：题目说是memo to director, 应该是其他人写给di ...

应该是给director的。我写错了。
在朗文上查到的例句a memo from the managing director to all heads of department